Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make your response grammatically correct, concise, and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct noun phrases and plural agreement, then add one brief specific detail using a linking word. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Example: Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home. For example, several modern apartment blocks and office towers line the main road, which makes the area feel quite urban.

Suggestion: Focus on correct verb forms, singular/plural, and clear vocabulary. Use one linking phrase to connect ideas (e.g., 'and' or 'also'), avoid invented words, and keep to 2–3 concise sentences with specific detail about why and where you post photos.

Example: Yes, I often take photos of interesting buildings because I like their architecture and colours. I usually post the best pictures on my Instagram stories or Snapchat to share them with friends.

Suggestion: Use correct relative clauses and verb forms, and explain clearly why you want to visit. Begin with a direct statement, then give a specific reason using a linking word (e.g., 'because' or 'so that'). Keep sentences short and natural.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit the new building under construction near my home because I am curious to see the interior layout and how the floors will look. Also, I want to get a better view of the neighbourhood from the higher levels.

Suggestion: Provide a clear, direct opinion first, then support it with concise reasons using linking words (e.g., 'however', 'but', 'because'). Correct awkward phrases and avoid repetition. Limit to 2–3 sentences and be specific about what would make you decide.

Example: I'm not sure; I like tall buildings for the views, but I would only live in one if the apartment offered enough private space and quiet. Otherwise, I would prefer a low-rise house with a garden.

× Yes, there are a tall building near my home.

✓ Yes, there is a tall building near my home. Or: Yes, there are tall buildings near my home.

The original mixes plural 'are' with singular noun 'a tall building', causing a subject-number mismatch. Use 'is' with a singular noun and 'are' with a plural noun. Choose one form depending on meaning: 'a tall building' (singular) requires 'is'; 'tall buildings' (plural) requires 'are'. Suggestion: decide whether you mean one building or many and match the verb and article accordingly.

× Not just one, but quite a lot.

✓ Not just one, but quite a lot of them.

The phrase 'quite a lot' is normally followed by 'of' and a pronoun or noun when referring back to buildings. Adding 'of them' clarifies the plural reference. This fixes the incomplete noun phrase.

× Absolutely, I do take photos of those building.

✓ Absolutely, I do take photos of those buildings.

'Those' is a plural demonstrative and must modify a plural noun 'buildings'. The original used singular 'building', which mismatches number. Change to 'buildings' to agree in number.

× It's feel really attastic and cool.

✓ It feels really fantastic and cool.

The verb form after 'it' should be the third-person singular present 'feels', not 'feel'. Also 'attastic' is a spelling error; likely meant 'fantastic'. Use correct verb agreement and spelling. Suggestion: use 'it feels' for general impressions.

× Sometime I also upload the images or photos on my Instagram stories or a Snapchat.

✓ Sometimes I also upload images or photos to my Instagram stories or Snapchat.

Use the adverb 'sometimes' (plural) not 'sometime' when meaning 'occasionally'. Preposition 'to' is used with social media platforms, not 'on' for stories/Snapchat in this context; either 'to my Instagram stories' or 'to Snapchat'. Also drop the article 'a' before 'Snapchat'. Suggestion: 'Sometimes I also upload images to my Instagram stories or Snapchat.'

× Yes, I would like to visit the building which are in under construction near my home to just look how it's look inside just to get some view.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit the building which is under construction near my home, just to see what it looks like inside and to get a view.

Multiple issues: 'which are' should match singular 'building' so use 'which is'; 'in under construction' is incorrect phraseology — use 'under construction'; 'to just look how it's look inside' has incorrect verb forms and order — use 'to see what it looks like inside'; remove repeated 'just' or place it once. Also add commas for clarity. Suggestion: simplify the clause to 'just to see what it looks like inside and to get a view.'

× The answer might be yes or not because I do like a tall building but at the same time I really want my personal space which we are not get into a building.

✓ The answer might be yes or no because I do like tall buildings, but at the same time I really want my personal space, which you don't get in a building.

Use 'yes or no' instead of 'yes or not'. 'A tall building' should be plural 'tall buildings' when speaking generally. The relative clause 'which we are not get into a building' is ungrammatical: use 'which you don't get in a building' or 'which you don't get from living in a building'. Also add commas to separate clauses. Suggestion: rephrase clearly as above.

× So yeah, it's very or it's depending upon how the building is.

✓ So yeah, it depends on what the building is like.

'It's very or it's depending upon how the building is' is an awkward, incorrect structure. Use 'it depends on' (not 'it's depending upon') and 'what the building is like' to describe conditions. Suggestion: use simple 'it depends on...' constructions for clarity.