Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: أحسّن الدقة والاقتصاد في الجملة واذكر تفاصيل محددة بترتيب منطقي. تجنب الأخطاء النحوية مثل "no any" واستعمل وصلات بسيطة لتوضيح التغيير في المكان والزمان.

Example: I used to live near tall buildings in Riyadh, but after I moved to Nehran there aren’t any tall buildings nearby. The new area is more rural and quieter, with open fields instead of skyscrapers.

Suggestion: قلل الترددات (مثل "uh") وركّز على الربط المنطقي بين الماضي والحاضر باستخدام كلمات ربط. أعطِ مثالاً محدداً عن نوع المناظر الطبيعية التي تفضلها لإثراء الإجابة.

Example: I used to take many photos of buildings when I was a teenager, but nowadays I prefer photographing natural scenes. For example, I enjoy taking pictures of mountains and sunsets because they feel more peaceful.

Suggestion: أضف تفاصيل محددة تبرر رغبتك في الزيارة وارتبط بالخبرات أو توقعاتك لتقوية المحتوى. تجنب التكرار (مثل تكرار كلمة "very").

Example: Yes, I would like to visit the Burj Khalifa in Dubai because it is the tallest building in the world and offers amazing city views from the observation deck. I’m curious to see the architecture up close and take photos of the skyline.

Suggestion: نظّم الفكرة بوضوح: ابدأ بجملة موضوعية ثم فسّر السبب بربط منطقي. صحّح الأخطاء النحوية مثل "not living there" و"so interested to have"، واستخدم تعابير أوفي بالفكرة مثل "prefer having a backyard".

Example: I would consider owning an apartment in a tall building, but I wouldn’t live there permanently because I prefer having a backyard. For example, I want outdoor space for gardening and for my family to relax.

× I used to have tall buildings near my home when I was living in Riyadh, but now after I moved on to Nehran, there is no any buildings or tall buildings around.

✓ I used to have tall buildings near my home when I was living in Riyadh, but now after I moved to Nehran, there are no buildings or tall buildings around.

The phrase 'no any buildings' is ungrammatical. Use 'no' with a plural noun without 'any' (e.g., 'no buildings') or use 'not any buildings'. Also 'moved on to' is incorrect here; the correct phrasal verb is 'moved to'. Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'there are no buildings' (plural noun requires 'are'). Suggestions: replace 'no any buildings' with 'no buildings' or 'not any buildings' and use 'moved to' instead of 'moved on to'.

× I used to take a lot of photos of buildings, uh, when I was a teenager, but now it's not interesting to me anymore because now I prefer the natural views.

✓ I used to take a lot of photos of buildings when I was a teenager, but now it's not interesting to me anymore because I prefer natural views.

Redundant 'now' twice is stylistically weak; remove one. 'It's not interesting to me anymore' is acceptable but sounds more natural as 'it's not interesting to me anymore' or better 'I'm not interested in it anymore.' Also 'prefer the natural views' should omit the definite article unless referring to specific views: use 'prefer natural views.' Suggestion: say 'I'm not interested in that anymore because I prefer natural views.'

× Yes, I would like to visit Burj Khalifa in Dubai. It looks very nice and it's very tall and the city is beautiful.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit the Burj Khalifa in Dubai. It looks very nice, it's very tall, and the city is beautiful.

Proper noun 'Burj Khalifa' usually takes the definite article 'the' in English: 'the Burj Khalifa.' Also add commas to join clauses and include 'and' before the final item for natural coordination. These small adjustments improve correctness and fluency.

× I want to own an apartment in a tall building but not living there because I'm so interested to have a backyard in my future house and the apartment and the tall buildings usually don't have backyards.

✓ I want to own an apartment in a tall building but not live there because I'm very interested in having a backyard in my future house, and apartments and tall buildings usually don't have backyards.

'But not living there' is incorrect; after 'but' use the base verb form 'not live' to parallel 'want to own.' 'I'm so interested to have' is unidiomatic; use 'I'm very interested in having' or 'I really want to have.' Also pluralize 'apartment and the tall buildings' to 'apartments and tall buildings' for general statements. Suggestions: use parallel verb forms, replace 'so' with 'very' or 'really,' and use 'interested in having.'