Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Keep your answer direct but correct grammar and reduce redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct articles and word order, and use one linking phrase to give a specific detail. Avoid repeating words like "some several."

Example: Yes. There are several skyscrapers near my home because I live in the city center. Most of them are office towers occupied by international companies, so the area is always busy and well lit at night.

Suggestion: Give a concise topic sentence, fix verb forms and articles, and add a linking word to organize details (how and why). Be specific about frequency and purpose rather than vague phrases.

Example: Yes, I often take photos of buildings when I travel because I like their architecture. For example, I usually use my smartphone to capture majestic structures and then share the best shots on social media.

Suggestion: Provide a clear topic sentence and correct awkward phrasing. Use linking words to explain reasons and avoid filler words. Be specific about what you expect to see and what you would do there.

Example: Yes. I would like to visit the Shanghai Tower because it offers spectacular views from the top. From the observation deck I would admire the cityscape, take photos, and learn more about the building's design.

Suggestion: Begin with a direct answer and correct vocabulary and grammar errors (e.g., "Toby" and "lower float" are incorrect). Use linking words to give specific reasons and one clear example. Keep to two to three sentences.

Example: No, I wouldn't like to live in a tall building because I dislike waiting for elevators. I prefer lower-floor apartments since they are more convenient for coming and going and make moving furniture much easier.

× Yes, I there are some several skyscrapers near my home because I live in the city center.

✓ Yes, there are several skyscrapers near my home because I live in the city center.

The original sentence uses both 'I' and 'there are', creating an incorrect word order for 'there be' constructions. Also 'some several' is redundant; use either 'some' or 'several'. Use 'there are' + plural noun for existence: 'Yes, there are several skyscrapers...'. Suggestion: remove the extra 'I' and choose only one quantifier ('several').

× Many of them are the office tower occupied by the international companies, so the area is always busy and well light at night.

✓ Many of them are office towers occupied by international companies, so the area is always busy and well lit at night.

Errors include wrong article use ('the office tower' should be plural without 'the'), incorrect noun form ('tower' -> 'towers'), incorrect article with 'international companies' (no 'the' required), and wrong adjective form 'well light' should be past participle 'well lit' used adjectivally. Suggestion: match plural forms and use 'well lit' as standard adjective. Grammar problem types involved: incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs and article/plural issues; corrected here under adjective/adverb (ID 13) and plural handled in correction rules.

× Yes, I often take some photos when I traveling and I just saw some majestic structures and different architecture styles.

✓ Yes, I often take photos when I travel, and I have seen some majestic structures with different architectural styles.

After 'when' use the base form 'travel' for general habits (present simple). 'Take some photos' should be 'take photos' (no 'some' necessary). 'I just saw' mixes past with habitual context; use present perfect 'I have seen' for recent experiences. 'Architecture styles' should be 'architectural styles' (adjective form). Suggestion: use present simple for habits and present perfect for recent experiences, and convert nouns to adjectives where needed.

× I usually use my smartphone to take the picture and then share to the social media or connected to my phone to.

✓ I usually use my smartphone to take pictures and then share them on social media or connect them to my phone.

Preposition errors: 'share to the social media' should be 'share on social media'. 'Connected to my phone to' is incorrect structure; use active verb 'connect them to my phone'. Also use plural 'pictures' and include the object 'them' when referring back. Suggestion: use 'share on' for platforms and 'connect to' for devices; keep pronouns consistent.

× Yes, if I have a chance, I would visit the Shanghai Tower, the tallest building in Shanghai because of view from the top as opposed to fantastic.

✓ Yes, if I have the chance, I would visit the Shanghai Tower, the tallest building in Shanghai, because the view from the top is fantastic.

Conditional phrasing 'if I have a chance' is better as 'if I have the chance'. 'Because of view from the top as opposed to fantastic' is ungrammatical and unclear; correct to 'because the view from the top is fantastic'. Suggestion: use 'would' with 'if I had the chance' for a hypothetical, or keep 'if I have the chance' with 'I will visit' for a real possibility. Also fix word order and use 'the view' and 'is fantastic'.

× I would like to see the cityscapes from the observation deck and think, take some picture, yeah.

✓ I would like to see the cityscape from the observation deck and take some pictures.

'Cityscapes' can be singular 'cityscape' or plural 'cityscapes'; singular 'cityscape' is more natural here. The phrase 'and think, take some picture' is ungrammatical; 'take some pictures' is correct and plural. Remove filler 'yeah' in formal responses. Suggestion: use parallel infinitives after 'would like to' and pluralize 'pictures'.

× Actually, I wouldn't like to live in a Toby because I dislike waiting a long time for the elevator.

✓ Actually, I wouldn't like to live in a tower because I dislike waiting a long time for the elevator.

Likely typo 'Toby' should be 'tower'. This is a noun error rather than pronoun, but treated as incorrect pronoun/word use in context (ID 12). Suggestion: correct typos and use the intended noun 'tower'. Consider 'I wouldn't want to' as more natural than 'I wouldn't like to'.

× I prefer the lower float since they're more convenient for coming and going and even make moving some furniture easily.

✓ I prefer lower floors since they're more convenient for coming and going and make it easier to move furniture.

Multiple errors: 'lower float' should be 'lower floors' (word choice and plural), 'even make moving some furniture easily' is awkward; correct to 'make it easier to move furniture.' Use 'it easier to' + verb for clarity. Suggestion: choose correct nouns, keep subject-verb agreement with plural 'floors', and use clear idiomatic expressions like 'make it easier to move furniture.'