Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời cần trực tiếp hơn, tránh lặp từ và ngữ pháp sai. Bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sửa lỗi lặp và dùng cụm từ tự nhiên hơn. Thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể về số lượng, vị trí hoặc cảm nhận để làm câu trả lời phong phú nhưng không quá dài.

Example: Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home. In fact, several apartment blocks and office towers line the main road just a five-minute walk from my house, which makes the neighborhood feel quite urban.

Suggestion: Cần câu trả lời ngắn gọn, chính xác và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề, dùng liên từ để nối ý và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể về khi nào bạn chụp ảnh (ví dụ: kiểu kiến trúc, vị trí). Tránh lặp từ như 'building' và sửa thì động từ.

Example: Not usually, but I sometimes take photos of buildings that catch my eye. For example, if I see an unusual façade or an ornate old church while walking downtown, I'll take a picture to remember the design.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời tốt nhưng cần tự nhiên hơn và sửa những lỗi nhỏ về từ ngữ và trật tự. Dùng câu chủ đề khẳng định, nêu lý do cụ thể vì sao muốn tới Landmark 81 và có thể nói về hoạt động bạn muốn làm ở đó.

Example: I would like to visit Landmark 81 in Ho Chi Minh City because it's the tallest building in Vietnam. I haven't been to the city yet, but I would love to go up to the observation deck and enjoy the panoramic views of the skyline.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời hiện tại khó hiểu do nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ sai và lặp. Bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng (Yes/No), sau đó nêu 1–2 lý do cụ thể và dùng từ vựng phù hợp (convenient, noisy, crowded, commute). Giữ tối đa 3 câu để rõ ràng và tự nhiên.

Example: No, I wouldn't like to live in a tall building. I find high-rise apartments less convenient because I go out often and I prefer quick access to the street, plus tall buildings can be noisy and crowded.

× Dear, there are there are many tall buildings near my home.

✓ There are many tall buildings near my home.

The repeated phrase 'there are' is redundant and 'Dear' is inappropriate in this context. Remove the extra words so the sentence is concise and grammatically correct. Use 'There are' once to introduce plural existence.

× I think my area where I live looks as a concrete jungle.

✓ I think the area where I live looks like a concrete jungle.

Use 'the area where I live' not 'my area where I live' for clarity. Use the simile construction 'looks like' rather than 'looks as'. 'A concrete jungle' is countable and requires the article 'a'.

× To be honest, I don't usually take photos or building, but sometime I look a strange building or unusual building or the design of the building is very pretty and impressive, I will take photos of it.

✓ To be honest, I don't usually take photos of buildings, but sometimes if I see a strange or unusual building or if the design is very pretty and impressive, I will take photos of it.

Use the preposition 'of' with 'take photos'. 'Building' should be plural when speaking generally: 'buildings'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. Use 'if I see' rather than 'I look' and combine clauses with clear conditional structure. Punctuation and conjunctions were corrected for readability.

× I haven't gone to Ho Chi Minh City any time, so when I go to Ho Chi Minh City, I really want to pay visits to Landmark 81 and experience it.

✓ I have never been to Ho Chi Minh City, so when I go there, I really want to visit Landmark 81 and experience it.

Use 'have never been' (present perfect) to express lack of experience up to now. 'Any time' is awkward here; 'never' is natural. 'Pay visits to' is wordy—use 'visit'. Use 'there' to avoid repeating the city name.

× No I don't I don't really want to live in a 2 building because I think it isn't convenient and sued with my life because I need to go go out very much so I think if little tubing I can do it well.

✓ No, I don't really want to live in a tall building because I think it isn't convenient for my lifestyle: I need to go out a lot, so living in a skyscraper would be difficult for me.

Remove repeated 'I don't'. '2 building' is unclear; use 'tall building' as in question. 'Sued with my life' is incorrect — likely meant 'suited to my life' or 'convenient for my lifestyle'. 'Go go out very much' should be 'go out a lot'. 'If little tubing I can do it well' is unclear and was rewritten to convey intended meaning. Overall fix pronouns, word choice, and sentence clarity.