Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (plural/singular, articles, prepositions), and add one specific detail. Avoid redundancy and keep to 2–3 sentences.

Example: Yes. I live in a big city, so there are many tall buildings near my home. For example, there is a large apartment tower and a shopping mall just two blocks away.

Suggestion: Organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and linked supporting details. Use correct verb tenses and articles, and use linking words (for example, when, so). Be specific about when and why you take photos and simplify sentences to avoid repetition.

Example: Yes, I often photograph buildings when I travel. For example, I take pictures during the day for good lighting and at night to capture the lights, and then I usually share the best shots on social media.

Suggestion: Give a clear, specific answer with correct nouns and fewer hesitations. Name the building correctly, give a reason, and use linking words to make it coherent. Avoid fillers and repetition.

Example: Yes. I would love to visit the Eiffel Tower in Paris because I have seen it in films and pictures and I want to see the view from the top. In the future, I hope to travel there to experience the city and its landmarks.

Suggestion: Keep a clear topic sentence and provide one concrete reason with correct phrasing. Fix repetition and grammar (e.g. ‘a high view’ → ‘a great view’). One or two supporting details are enough.

Example: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because it offers great views of the city, especially at night when all the lights are visible. Also, being higher up feels quieter and more private.

× There are a big high apartment and a mall near to my home.

✓ There is a big, tall apartment and a mall near my home.

Subject uses singular 'a big high apartment' with plural verb 'are'. Use singular verb 'is' for one apartment. Use 'tall' instead of 'high' when describing buildings. Remove unnecessary 'to' after 'near'. Add comma to separate adjectives.

× There are a big high apartment and a mall near to my home.

✓ There is a big, tall apartment and a mall near my home.

The preposition 'to' is unnecessary after 'near'. Use 'near my home' or 'close to my home'.

× Yes, I take photos of building when I travel somewhere and when in the light and when it's night time then I collect photos of the building.

✓ Yes, I take photos of buildings when I travel somewhere, when the light is good, and at night; then I collect the photos of the buildings.

'Building' should be plural 'buildings' because it refers to buildings in general (singular/plural issue). Also phrase 'when in the light' is ungrammatical; use 'when the light is good'. Reorder and add articles for clarity; use commas to separate ideas.

× Yes, I take photos of building when I travel somewhere and when in the light and when it's night time then I collect photos of the building.

✓ Yes, I take photos of buildings when I travel somewhere, when the light is good, and at night; then I collect the photos of the buildings.

General nouns like 'building' should be plural ('buildings') when speaking generally. Later 'the building' should be 'the buildings' to match plural reference.

× It doesn't matter, it's older, new.

✓ It doesn't matter whether they are old or new.

Incorrect adjective forms and punctuation. Use 'whether' to present alternatives and parallel adjectives 'old or new'.

× Sometime I shared photo to my friends and sometimes I post the photos on the social media.

✓ Sometimes I share photos with my friends, and sometimes I post the photos on social media.

Inconsistent tense: 'shared' (past) vs general habit—use present simple 'share'. Also use plural 'photos'. Preposition: 'share with' and 'on social media' (no 'the'). Also 'Sometime' -> 'Sometimes'.

× Sometime I shared photo to my friends and sometimes I post the photos on the social media.

✓ Sometimes I share photos with my friends, and sometimes I post the photos on social media.

Use plural 'photos' when referring to multiple images; 'a photo' would be singular. Adjust articles accordingly.

× Yes, there is a bill.

✓ Yes, there is a building.

'Bill' is a wrong word choice likely from mispronunciation or typo. The intended noun is 'building'. This is vocabulary/word-choice error affecting sentence meaning; correct the noun to make grammatical sense.

× Yes, one building is in the it's a tower in the Paris.

✓ Yes, there is a tower in Paris.

Remove unnecessary words 'in the' before 'Paris' and the redundant clause 'is in the it's a'. Use 'in Paris' without the definite article. Simplify to a single correct clause.

× I would like to visit over there.

✓ I would like to visit it.

Use appropriate pronoun 'it' to refer to the tower, rather than 'over there' which is an adverbial phrase; keep sentence concise. Alternatively 'visit that place' is possible. Pronoun clarification avoids vague reference.

× I I saw the I saw the Paris in the movie as well.

✓ I saw Paris in a movie as well.

Unnecessary repetition and article error: do not use 'the' before 'Paris'. 'Saw' is correct past tense if referring to having seen the film. Remove extra 'the' and duplicate words.

× So in the future I wanna go there.

✓ So in the future I want to go there.

Informal 'wanna' is not appropriate in formal speech; use 'want to'. Future intention is expressed correctly with 'will' or 'going to' if needed, but 'I want to go there' fits the context.

× Yes, I love to live in a tall building because in the tall building we can see a high view view and so many lights in the night time.

✓ Yes, I would love to live in a tall building because we can see a great view and many lights at night.

Use conditional 'would love' to express preference. 'High view view' is incorrect—use 'great view' or 'a high view' (more idiomatic 'great view'). Remove duplicate word 'view'. Use 'at night' rather than 'in the night time'.

× Yes, I love to live in a tall building because in the tall building we can see a high view view and so many lights in the night time.

✓ Yes, I would love to live in a tall building because we can see a great view and many lights at night.

Place time expression 'at night' at sentence end; simplify clause 'in the tall building we can see' to 'we can see' after mentioning 'a tall building'. Corrects awkward sentence flow and repetition.