Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + brief reason), then add one specific detail. Use correct prepositions and word forms (e.g. 'in a rural area', 'there aren't many', 'one tall building is far from my house').

Example: No, there aren't many tall buildings near my home because I live in a rural area. However, there is one tall building a little far from my house called the Cold Tall Temple, which stands out in the landscape.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer and use natural phrasing. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes, I do) and follow with a specific reason and example. Correct verb forms and remove redundancy (e.g. 'I enjoy photography', not 'photo lover person'). Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example'.

Example: Yes, I do. I enjoy photography because it relaxes me, and I especially like photographing tall buildings. For example, when I see an interesting skyscraper, I take several pictures to capture different angles.

Suggestion: Answer directly and give a clear reason. Use correct noun phrases and explain why specifically you want to visit (history, architecture, religious importance). Keep it within 3–4 sentences and use linking words such as 'because' and 'for example'.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit the Golden Temple because it is very important to my religion and has beautiful architecture. For example, I want to see the marble work and the reflection on the water, and to experience the peaceful atmosphere there.

Suggestion: Be natural and consistent. Start with a clear topic sentence (No, I wouldn't) and give a reason and a contrasting thought using linking words like 'however' or 'but'. Correct expressions: 'fear of heights', 'I don't want to live', 'sometimes I imagine living in one'.

Example: No, I wouldn't want to live in a tall building because I have a fear of heights. However, sometimes I imagine living in one and feel happy about the idea of the view and the modern amenities.

× Well I am from village and I live in mural area and that's why there are not many tall buildings near my home but one tall building is far away from my house and it's known as Cold tall temple.

✓ Well, I am from a village and I live in a rural area, so there are not many tall buildings near my home. However, one tall building is far from my house and it is known as the Cold Tall Temple.

Run-on sentence with missing articles and incorrect word choice: 'village' and 'rural area' need the article 'a'; 'mural' is wrong word (should be 'rural'); sentence needed splitting and connectors for clarity. Use 'far from my house' not 'far away from my house' in this context. Capitalise proper noun 'Cold Tall Temple' if it is a name. Suggestion: use shorter sentences, include appropriate articles, and choose correct words.

× Yes I am a photo lover person and that's why I like to clicking pics and sometimes when I say in tall buildings I like to prefer clicking pic of that and it gave me peace.

✓ Yes, I am a photography lover, and that's why I like clicking pictures. Sometimes when I am in tall buildings, I prefer to take pictures of them because it gives me peace.

Incorrect pronoun and verb forms: 'photo lover person' is awkward; use 'photography lover' or 'I love photography'. 'Like to clicking' mixes infinitive and -ing; use 'like clicking' or 'like to click'. 'When I say in tall buildings' is incorrect; should be 'when I am in tall buildings'. Verb tense agreement: 'it gave me peace' should be present 'it gives me peace' to match habitual action. Suggestion: use correct verb forms and clearer noun phrases.

× In my country there are many buildings that I like to visit, but the one of the main building is Golden Temple and that I like to visit a lot because in the Golden Temple later to my own religion and that's why I like to visit that.

✓ In my country there are many buildings that I like to visit, but one of the main buildings is the Golden Temple and I like to visit it a lot because the Golden Temple is important to my religion.

Article and word order issues: use 'one of the main buildings' not 'the one of the main building'. Proper noun 'Golden Temple' needs definite article 'the' when referring to the specific place. Phrase 'later to my own religion' is incorrect; intended meaning is 'important to my religion'. Also replace vague 'that' with 'it'. Suggestion: use correct articles ('the'), proper noun usage, and clearer clauses.

× Well, to be honest, I have a fear of tallness and that's why I can't want to live in a tall building.

✓ Well, to be honest, I am afraid of heights and that's why I do not want to live in a tall building.

Incorrect modal/auxiliary use: 'can't want' is ungrammatical; use 'do not want' or 'cannot' depending on meaning. 'A fear of tallness' is unnatural; use 'afraid of heights'. Suggestion: use appropriate negation with do-support for present simple ('do not want') and idiomatic expressions for fears.

× But sometimes when I expect that I'm living a tall building, at that time I am very happy.

✓ But sometimes, when I imagine that I am living in a tall building, I feel very happy.

Incorrect verb choice and missing preposition: 'expect that I'm living a tall building' is wrong; use 'imagine that I am living in a tall building'. 'At that time' is wordy; 'I feel very happy' is a better collocation than 'I am very happy' in this conditional imaginative context. Suggestion: use 'imagine' for hypothetical scenarios, include preposition 'in', and prefer natural verb 'feel' for emotions.