Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 문장이 어법상 부정확하고 의미 전달이 불명확합니다. 먼저 주제 문장을 간단히 말한 뒤(예: ‘Yes, there is…’) 건물의 종류, 모양, 위치 등 구체적이고 관련 있는 정보를 연결어를 사용해 차례로 덧붙이세요. 불필요한 단어나 잘못된 표현(예: ‘dirty flowers’, ‘rectangular’ 사용 맥락)을 고치고 문장을 3문장 이내로 유지하세요. 발음이나 문법 실수로 인한 의미 혼동을 줄이기 위해 관사(a/the)와 전치사(in/at/of)를 정확히 쓰는 연습을 하세요.

Example: Yes, there is a tall building near my home. It is a government office building located in the centre of the city. It has a rectangular shape and the exterior looks a bit dirty because it is old.

Suggestion: 대답이 일관성이 없고 의미 전달이 혼란스럽습니다. 질문은 건물 사진을 찍는지 묻고 있으니 먼저 직접적으로 답한 뒤(Yes/No + 이유) 구체적 이유와 예를 덧붙이세요. 연결어(For example, because, so)를 사용해 논리적으로 이어가고, 모호한 표현('further operating', 'not close my life') 대신 명확한 표현을 선택하세요. 답장은 2~3문장으로 간결하게 유지하세요.

Example: No, I don't usually photograph buildings. I prefer taking pictures of nature because natural scenes are more relaxing to me, so I often photograph parks and trees instead.

Suggestion: 질문 의도를 잘못 이해하고 있거나 표현이 어색합니다. 방문하고 싶은 건물이 있는지 묻는 질문에는 먼저 간단히 답한 뒤 이유나 상황을 설명하세요. 예: ‘No, but…’ 혹은 ‘Yes, I would like to visit…’으로 시작하고 왜 가고 싶은지 구체적 이유를 연결어로 설명하세요. 불분명한 표현('I got my upstanding', 'I would like my')를 피하세요.

Example: No, there isn't a specific building I want to visit. I usually spend weekends resting at home, so I don't often plan visits to famous buildings.

Suggestion: 아이디어는 괜찮지만 문법과 어휘 선택이 부정확합니다. 먼저 주제 문장으로 명확히 답하고 이유를 두세 문장으로 구체적으로 덧붙이세요. ‘Tolpating’ 같은 잘못된 단어 대신 ‘tall buildings’를 사용하고, 반복 표현(‘one floor one floor’)을 피하세요. 이유를 연결어(because, so, as a result)로 연결해 자연스럽게 만드세요.

Example: No, I wouldn't like to live in a tall building. I prefer a one-story house because I enjoy having a yard where I can relax and have barbecues with friends.

× Yes, there is a tall building near my home.

✓ Yes, there are tall buildings near my home.

The examiner asked plural 'buildings'; the student replied with singular 'a tall building' which mismatches. Use 'there are' with plural nouns. Suggestion: match number in question and use 'there are' + plural noun.

× It is government office building.

✓ It is a government office building.

An indefinite article 'a' is required before a countable singular noun phrase. Use 'a government office building.' Suggestion: insert 'a' before 'government office building.'

× I think it is maybe dirty flowers and it looks like rectangular and it is located center of city.

✓ I think it has dirty flowers, it looks rectangular, and it is located in the center of the city.

Several issues: 'maybe' awkwardly placed, 'dirty flowers' unclear, adjective order and forms incorrect ('looks rectangular' is okay but needs linking), and missing prepositions 'in the' for location. Also need commas and conjunctions. Suggestion: clarify what 'dirty flowers' means or replace with appropriate noun, use 'in the center of the city.'

× No, I don't take further operating.

✓ No, I don't take any more photos.

Phrase 'take further operating' is ungrammatical. To express you no longer take photos, use modal/auxiliary with negation and a noun 'photos' or verb phrase 'take photos anymore.' Suggestion: say 'I don't take any more photos' or 'I don't take photos often.'

× Uh, sometimes I take a photo, It is the nature.

✓ Sometimes I take photos of nature.

Comma splice and incorrect noun phrase 'the nature.' Use plural 'photos' and 'nature' without 'the.' Suggestion: combine into a single clear clause: 'Sometimes I take photos of nature.'

× I like nature because it is, it is not close my life.

✓ I like nature because it is not close to my life.

Missing preposition 'to' after 'close' and unnecessary repetition. Use 'close to my life' though more natural would be 'not closely related to my life.' Suggestion: say 'not closely related to my life' or 'not close to my daily life.'

× So I like nature picture.

✓ So I like nature pictures.

Countable noun 'picture' needs plural 'pictures' (or 'a nature picture' with article). Use plural to match general preference. Suggestion: 'I like nature pictures' or 'I like nature photography.'

× No there isn't.

✓ No, there isn't.

Missing comma after interjection 'No' and unclear what 'there isn't' refers to; grammatically 'there isn't' should be followed by noun if needed. Suggestion: include comma and optionally complete: 'No, there isn't one.'

× I got my upstanding every day and when I spend time on weekends I just take a rest.

✓ I get up early every day, and when I spend time on weekends I just rest.

Incorrect verb 'got my upstanding' should be 'get up' (present habitual). 'Take a rest' is acceptable but 'just rest' is more natural. Suggestion: use 'get up early' for daily routine and simple present tense for habits.

× I would like my.

✓ I would like to relax at home.

Fragment 'I would like my' is incomplete and unclear. Provide a complete idea matching context (visiting buildings vs relaxing). Suggestion: complete the sentence: 'I would like to stay at home' or 'I would like to relax.'

× No I don't live in Tolpating.

✓ No, I don't live in a tall building.

'Tolpating' seems to be incorrect word; likely meant 'tall building.' Use correct noun phrase and article. Also add comma after 'No.' Suggestion: say 'No, I don't live in a tall building' or 'No, I don't live in a high-rise.'

× I just like one floor one floor house.

✓ I just like one-story houses.

Repetition 'one floor one floor' is wrong; use 'one-story house' for singular or 'one-story houses' for general preference. Suggestion: use 'one-story house' or 'single-storey house.'

× I like the yards and I like to make a BBQ so I like low building.

✓ I like the yard, and I like to have a barbecue, so I prefer low-rise buildings.

Use singular/plural consistently: 'the yards' unclear, better 'the yard' or 'yards.' 'Make a BBQ' is better as 'have a barbecue.' 'Low building' should be 'low-rise buildings' or 'a low-rise building.' Suggestion: 'I like having a yard and having barbecues, so I prefer low-rise houses.'