Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve clarity, grammar and vocabulary. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct noun forms and verb tenses, and avoid invented words. Use linking words to add a specific detail. For example, say how many buildings, their type, and a brief description of what you see.

Example: Yes, there are several tall residential buildings near my home. For instance, there are two apartment blocks about 10 to 15 storeys high that I can see from my back balcony. Also, one of the blocks has shops on the ground floor, so I often walk past it when I go shopping.

Suggestion: Fix grammar, plural forms and word choice. Provide one clear topic sentence and then a supporting reason with an example. Use linking words like because and for example, and be specific about what you photograph.

Example: Yes, I often take photos of buildings because I find their shapes and architectural details interesting. For example, when I travel I photograph historic churches and modern skyscrapers and then save the best shots on my phone.

Suggestion: Give a clearer, more natural response. State your opinion directly, then support it with a concise reason. Correct grammar (e.g., 'I am not interested') and avoid vague phrases like 'the feel of the buildings.'

Example: Not really. Even though the building is famous, I am not interested in visiting it because I find its architecture unexciting compared with other places I enjoy, such as lively markets or museums.

Suggestion: Respond with a clear topic sentence and specific reasons. Correct grammar (plural/singular, verb agreement) and remove repetition. Use linking words such as because and so to connect ideas, and give one example of what you prefer instead.

Example: No, I would prefer not to live in a tall building because I like easy access to outdoor space, such as a small garden. Also, tall buildings make me feel uneasy, so I prefer a low-rise house with a yard where I can relax.

× Well, yeah, there are a few top apartments broke near my home.

✓ Well, yeah, there are a few top apartments broken near my home.

The original sentence uses 'broke' which is the past tense of 'break' and does not correctly describe the state of the apartments. This is a verb form error related to describing plural nouns; use the past participle 'broken' to indicate their condition. Suggestion: use 'broken' for state descriptions (they are broken) or rephrase as 'a few top apartments that are broken.'

× There are Melanie residential buildings and about 10 to 15 stories high and I can see them from my back balcony.

✓ There are medium residential buildings about 10 to 15 storeys high and I can see them from my back balcony.

'Melanie' appears to be an incorrect word choice; likely intended 'medium'. Also 'stories' spelling varies; 'storeys' (British) or 'stories' (American) is acceptable. The adjective should directly modify 'residential buildings' and the height phrase should follow smoothly. Suggestion: choose the correct adjective ('medium') and place the height phrase after the noun.

× For example, I sometimes walk past the tow block that has drops on the ground floor.

✓ For example, I sometimes walk past the two blocks that have shops on the ground floor.

Several words are incorrect: 'tow' should be 'two', 'block' should be plural 'blocks' to match context, and 'drops' is likely 'shops'. This is a sentence structure and word choice error. Suggestion: proofread for homophones and plural agreement; ensure nouns agree in number with verbs.

× Of course, I usually take photos of building because I found the shapes and the details interesting and they remind me of play of place I visited.

✓ Of course, I usually take photos of buildings because I find the shapes and the details interesting and they remind me of places I visited.

'Photos of building' needs plural noun and an article: 'photos of buildings'. 'Found' is inconsistent with 'usually' (present habit), so use present 'find'. 'play of place' is incorrect; likely 'places'. This mixes tense and plurality issues. Suggestion: keep present tense for habitual actions and use plural forms for general references.

× For instance, where I travel, I usually take a few pictures of old chargers and our modern skyscrapers and I keep them on my phone.

✓ For instance, when I travel, I usually take a few pictures of old churches and modern skyscrapers and keep them on my phone.

'Where I travel' is better as 'when I travel' for occasions. 'Chargers' is likely 'churches' (spelling). 'Our' is unnecessary and inconsistent; remove it. Also remove redundant 'I' before 'keep' for smoother sentence structure. Suggestion: use 'when' for occasions, correct noun spelling, and streamline sentence by removing repetitions.

× No, not really, although it's very famous and many people want to see the feel of the buildings.

✓ No, not really, although it is very famous and many people want to see the view of the building.

The phrase 'see the feel of the buildings' is incorrect; 'feel' is not a noun meaning appearance. Likely intended 'view' or 'appearance' and 'building' singular if referring to a specific famous building. This is misuse of nouns/pronouns and count. Suggestion: choose the correct noun ('view') and match singular/plural properly.

× Actually I don't like it because I think it's boring and I don't interested in it.

✓ Actually I don't like it because I think it's boring and I am not interested in it.

'I don't interested' is ungrammatical; the correct construction is 'I am not interested'. This is an issue with auxiliary verb usage and adjective complement. Suggestion: use 'be' + adjective for states (am not interested).

× Well, actually I prefer not to live in a tall buildings because I like having easy access to outdoor space in the small garden.

✓ Well, actually I prefer not to live in a tall building because I like having easy access to outdoor space in a small garden.

'a tall buildings' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'buildings'. Use singular 'a tall building' or plural without 'a'. Also 'the small garden' suggests a specific garden; use 'a small garden' for general preference. Suggestion: ensure article and noun number agree and choose articles that match general vs specific meaning.

× Actually the tall buildings makes me feel dangerous, so I I can't leave it in the tall building.

✓ Actually tall buildings make me feel unsafe, so I can't live in a tall building.

'Buildings makes' is subject-verb disagreement; plural 'buildings' with verb should be 'make'. 'Feel dangerous' is incorrect because a person feels unsafe, not the buildings feeling dangerous. 'I I' is a typo. 'Leave it' should be 'live in one' or 'live in a tall building'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement, use appropriate adjectives ('unsafe'), fix typos, and use correct verb 'live.'