Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Clarify and organize your response. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct vocabulary (e.g. "skyscrapers"), avoid repetition, and give one specific detail. Use a linking phrase if adding a reason or example.

Example: Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home in Tokyo. For example, several skyscrapers around my neighborhood are over 300 metres tall. Because I live in a central area, tall office and apartment towers are very common.

Suggestion: Use past and present tenses correctly and reduce hesitations. Begin with a clear statement about your habit, then give a specific time or reason. Limit to two or three supporting details connected by linking words.

Example: Yes, I enjoy photographing buildings. When I was a university student I rarely saw very tall towers, but since moving to Tokyo I often take pictures of impressive skyscrapers because their shapes and lights are interesting.

Suggestion: Make your answer concise and accurate: name the building correctly, use clear grammar for intention ("would like to visit"), and give a specific reason. Avoid filler words and correct factual phrases (e.g. "the Tokyo Skytree").

Example: Yes, I would like to visit the Tokyo Skytree. I have never been up its observation decks, and I want to see the city panorama from the top because the views are supposed to be spectacular.

Suggestion: Answer directly and coherently. State your opinion in one sentence, then give a clear reason. Avoid unclear time references and reduce hesitations. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas.

Example: No, I don't want to live in a tall building because I am usually at work during the day and would rarely use the panoramic views. Therefore, living in a high-rise would not be worth it for me.

× Yeah, I can see too many sky Clippers from my house.

✓ Yeah, I can see too many skyscrapers from my house.

The term 'sky Clippers' is incorrect and mixes singular/plural and word choice; 'skyscraper' is the correct singular noun and plural is 'skyscrapers'. Use the correct noun and plural form to match 'too many'.

× Actually I live alone, I live in Tokyo, so everywhere I see there are too many buildings and houses and first stop is over 300m I think.

✓ Actually, I live alone in Tokyo, so I see many buildings and houses everywhere, and some of them are over 300 m, I think.

Original sentence has run-on structure and awkward phrasing ('everywhere I see there are'). Rearranged to clear subject-verb order and corrected 'first stop' to 'some of them' (unclear original meaning). Added commas and proper placement of modifiers.

× Yeah, I, I take photos of them when I was in your university student.

✓ Yes, I took photos of them when I was a university student at your school.

Tense mismatch: 'take' (present) with 'when I was' (past). Use past tense 'took' to match the time frame. Also corrected wording 'your university student' to 'a university student at your school' for natural English.

× Yeah, I, I never seen such a big, such a big tower or buildings.

✓ I had never seen such a big tower or such big buildings.

Missing auxiliary verb for past perfect: 'never seen' requires 'had never seen' (or 'never saw') to be grammatically correct in past context. Also corrected repetition and agreement between singular 'tower' and plural 'buildings'.

× So now that I live in Tokyo, I enjoy taking photos of some buildings.

✓ So now that I live in Tokyo, I enjoy taking photos of buildings.

Minor wording: 'some buildings' is acceptable but 'buildings' is more natural. Present simple 'enjoy' correctly matches current habitual action; no tense change needed.

× Yes, I have, I want to, I want to get the, uh, sky 3IN Tokyo actually, I've never climbed the climate and which uh, which is the most highest tower in Japan.

✓ Yes, I want to visit the Sky Tree in Tokyo. Actually, I've never climbed it, and it is the highest tower in Japan.

Original contains many disfluencies and incorrect words ('get the, uh, sky 3IN', 'climbed the climate', 'most highest'). Simplified to clear sentences: 'visit the Sky Tree' (correct name), 'I've never climbed it' (past perfect not necessary but present perfect is fine), and 'the highest' avoids double comparative 'most highest'.

× So I want to enjoy the landscapes from the top.

✓ So I want to enjoy the view from the top.

'Landscapes' is plural and awkward in this context; 'view' or 'the view' is the natural collocation. Present tense 'want' correctly expresses desire.

× I don't think so because I can only enjoy the it's panorama views after I get I, after my work, uh, usually at noon, I, I'm, I will not be in house so I can.

✓ I don't think so because I can only enjoy its panoramic views after I finish work, and usually at noon I am not at home, so I can't.

Multiple issues addressed: possessive 'it's' should be 'its' (incorrect use of apostrophe), 'panorama views' should be 'panoramic views', and modal verbs: 'can' vs 'can't' needed to match meaning (cannot enjoy if not home). Also fixed tense and structure: 'after I finish work' (present simple for scheduled action) and 'I am not at home' for natural English.