Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Focus on grammar (use correct subjects and verbs), simplify the sentence, and be more direct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific detail. Use linking words if needed.

Example: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home. However, there are a few tall buildings near my school, including a multi-storey office block about ten minutes away.

Suggestion: Keep the answer concise and grammatically correct. State your habit clearly, give one reason, and optionally add a short consequence or example. Avoid repeating words and correct noun/verb forms.

Example: No, I don’t usually photograph buildings because I’m not confident in my photography skills. As a result, my photos often come out blurry, so I prefer to take photos only of people close to me.

Suggestion: Open with a clear statement naming the building, then give one or two specific reasons why you want to visit. Use linking words (because, although, however) correctly and avoid unclear phrases.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit a building called Sky100. I’ve been there once before, but I want to return because it offers a panoramic view of the city, and I think I would appreciate the skyline more now that I am older.

Suggestion: State your preference clearly, then give a specific, well-formed reason. Use conditional or modal verbs properly and keep the response to one or two supporting sentences with correct word order.

Example: No, I wouldn’t like to live in a tall building because it could be difficult to evacuate during an earthquake. For safety and convenience, I prefer a lower-floor apartment where escape routes are easier to access.

× No, there do not have tall buildings near my home, but they have a top buildings near my school.

✓ No, there are no tall buildings near my home, but there are some tall buildings near my school.

There are two issues: 'There be issue' (ID 3) and 'Singular and plural issue' (ID 1). The phrase 'do not have' is incorrect for stating existence; use the 'there is/are' construction to indicate existence. Also 'a top buildings' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'some tall buildings' or 'tall buildings'. Suggestion: use 'There are no...' to deny existence and 'there are some...' for affirmation.

× No I don't know I didn't take photo of buildings because my photography is skills is bad and and take the worst photo.

✓ No, I don't. I didn't take photos of buildings because my photography skills are bad and I take poor photos.

Issues: 'Third person singular issue' (ID 2), 'Singular and plural issue' (ID 1), and 'Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs' (ID 13). Use plural 'photos' when speaking generally. 'Photography is skills is bad' is ungrammatical; correct to 'my photography skills are bad' (subject 'skills' plural requires 'are'). 'Take the worst photo' is awkward; 'take poor photos' or 'take the worst photos' depends on context. Also add commas and pronoun 'I don't' to answer the question appropriately. Suggestion: separate sentences, use plural nouns and correct verb agreement.

× Yes, of course I want to. I want to visit a building called Skype 100. Of course I although I had resorted before, but I think in different age to visit, we have different views.

✓ Yes, of course I would like to. I want to visit a building called Sky 100. Although I have visited before, I think at a different age we see things differently.

Issues: 'Modal verb usage' (ID 4), 'Incorrect use of the definite article' (ID 17), 'Past tense issue' (ID 5), and 'Sentence structure errors' (ID 26). Use 'would like to' for polite desire. 'Skype 100' likely is 'Sky 100' (proper name). 'I although I had resorted before' is ungrammatical; 'Although I have visited before' uses present perfect to relate past experience to present. 'In different age to visit, we have different views' should be 'at a different age we see things differently' for correct preposition and word order. Suggestion: use 'would like', correct proper noun, use present perfect for life experiences, and reorder phrase for natural English.

× No, I would no like to live in a tall building, because during the earthquake we are living in the tall building and the tall floor, it may be quite hard to escape.

✓ No, I would not like to live in a tall building, because during an earthquake, living on a high floor might make it difficult to escape.

Issues: 'Modal verb usage' (ID 4), 'Incorrect use of articles' (ID 22), and 'Incorrect use of prepositions' (ID 11). Use 'would not' (or contracted 'wouldn't') for negative modal. Use 'an earthquake' (indefinite article) and 'a high floor' instead of 'the tall floor'. 'We are living' is awkward in this hypothetical; use gerund 'living' or 'living on a high floor might make it difficult' for clarity. Suggestion: use correct negation with modal, correct articles, and natural phrasing for hypothetical situations.