Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be clearer and more grammatical. Start with a direct topic sentence answering the question, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and limit to 2–4 short sentences.

Example: Yes. There are several tall buildings near my home, mostly two- or three-storey apartment blocks. For example, along the main street there are a few modern complexes with shops on the ground floor, which makes the area feel quite busy.

Suggestion: Answer directly and organize ideas with linking words. Explain when and why you take photos and give one clear example. Keep sentences short and use appropriate vocabulary (e.g. "designs", "sunrise", "memorable").

Example: Yes, I sometimes take photos of buildings, especially when I see interesting new designs or attractive lighting. For instance, I often photograph buildings at sunrise or sunset because the light makes the facades look beautiful and creates memorable images.

Suggestion: Be specific about the building and its location, and explain why you want to visit using clear reasons. Use linking words (e.g. "because", "for example") and avoid unclear phrases. Limit to two sentences.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit Singha Durbar in the south of Nepal because it is a historic palace with impressive architecture. I want to see the detailed facades and take photos to remember the visit.

Suggestion: State your preference clearly, then give two specific reasons using linking words. Use correct vocabulary for activities (e.g. "garden", "grow vegetables", "swimming pool"). Keep it concise and grammatical.

Example: No, I would not like to live in a tall building because I prefer a small house in a town. For example, I want a big garden where I can grow vegetables and flowers and have space for a swimming pool and outdoor activities.

× Yeah, in my city and my hometown near the most of tall buildings and actually is 2 floors are three floors of building is here's.

✓ Yeah, in my city and my hometown most of the tall buildings are two or three stories high.

The sentence used incorrect plural forms and word order. 'the most of tall buildings' should be 'most of the tall buildings' and '2 floors are three floors of building is here's' is ungrammatical; use 'are two or three stories high.' Ensure nouns and numbers agree and word order is logical.

× Uh, when I saw new designs of buildings and new look of buildings and there is some guidance or exact sunrise, sunset place that kinds of building, I actually take a photos for a memorable days.

✓ Uh, when I see new designs and new looks of buildings, or when there is a particular place for sunrise or sunset, I actually take photos to remember the day.

Tense and verb forms were inconsistent. 'When I saw' should match habitual action with present 'when I see' or use past consistently. 'Take a photos' is incorrect article and plural: use 'take photos.' 'For a memorable days' should be 'to remember the day' or 'for memorable days.' Use correct prepositions and pluralization.

× I like to visit South city of Nepal Singhadar where dead buildings is uh, Nepali people's people Kingdom place and I like to exact look at buildings and take some photos for memorable days and.

✓ I would like to visit Singhadar in the south of Nepal, where there are old buildings from the Nepali kingdom; I want to look closely at the buildings and take photos to remember the visit.

Sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'South city of Nepal Singhadar' needs reordering to 'Singhadar in the south of Nepal.' 'dead buildings is' likely meant 'old buildings are.' Use 'there are' for existence. 'Exact look at' should be 'look closely at.' Ensure clauses are connected clearly and tense is consistent.

× No, I did not like a tall Billy. I like a short small town.

✓ No, I do not like tall buildings. I prefer a small town.

'I did not like' is past tense but the question asks about current preference; use present 'I do not like.' 'a tall Billy' is incorrect noun; use 'tall buildings.' 'I like a short small town' is awkward; use 'I prefer a small town.'

× In small town I like to make some big grounds and grow some vegetables, fruits, flowers and playing for gardens, swimming.

✓ In a small town, I would like to have a large yard where I can grow vegetables, fruits, and flowers, and have space for a garden and swimming.

Quantifiers and word choices are incorrect. 'Make some big grounds' is unnatural; use 'have a large yard.' Parallel structure requires verbs ('grow' and 'have space for') not mixing nouns and gerunds incorrectly. Use articles ('a small town') and correct list structure.

× That kinds of small home I exactly like.

✓ That kind of small home is exactly what I like.

'That kinds' should be 'That kind' (singular). 'I exactly like' has incorrect word order; use 'is exactly what I like.' Use correct noun form and proper clause structure.