Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise, correct grammar and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail using linking words. Correct articles and plural forms, and finish the thought—do not trail off.

Example: Yes. There are many tall buildings near my home. In fact, my apartment is among the tallest in the city, and recently developers have been constructing more high-rise flats because the city needs more housing.

Suggestion: Give a direct, natural response and one clear reason with better grammar. Avoid filler sounds and rhetorical questions that repeat the prompt. Use linking words to connect your reason.

Example: No, I don't usually photograph buildings because I prefer taking pictures of people and nature. For example, I find landscapes more interesting, so I rarely focus on architecture.

Suggestion: Answer directly and complete your idea. Use precise vocabulary (e.g., exterior, ornate, modern facilities) and add one specific reason or detail. Avoid trailing off at the end.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit the government building in my city because its exterior is very ornate and it features modern architecture. I am curious to see the main hall and learn about its history and design.

Suggestion: Provide a clear, concise reason and support it with a specific example. Correct grammatical errors (articles, plurals) and avoid repetition. Use a linking word to introduce the reason.

Example: No, I don't. Although I currently live in a tall building, I find it challenging because the elevators are often crowded and power outages affect our many electronic devices. For instance, frequent outages make working from home difficult.

× My apartment is one of the tallest buildings in my country and nowadays my my country builders are building a tall apartments and sometimes it has a.

✓ My apartment is one of the tallest buildings in my country, and nowadays builders in my country are building tall apartment buildings, and sometimes they are unfinished.

The sentence has plural/singular mismatches and unclear references. 'a tall apartments' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'apartments' (Grammar Problem Type 1). Also 'my my country builders' is incorrect word order and possessive use; 'builders in my country' is correct. 'it has a' is an incomplete clause; likely intended to refer to buildings and should use 'they' and a complete predicate. Suggestion: use consistent plural or singular forms, correct word order, and complete the clause with a clear subject and verb.

× No, I don't because I think, uh, there have no reason to take photos of buildings.

✓ No, I don't because I think there is no reason to take photos of buildings.

The phrase 'there have no reason' incorrectly uses 'have' with the dummy subject 'there'. The correct existential construction uses 'there is' for singular 'no reason' (Grammar Problem Type 3 and 11). Use 'there is no reason' to express absence. Also keep verb agreement with the singular noun 'reason'.

× Why I'm why I take photos of buildings?

✓ Why should I take photos of buildings?

The original is ungrammatical and repeats words, causing sentence structure errors (Grammar Problem Type 26). For a rhetorical question asking the reason, use 'Why should I take photos of buildings?' or 'Why would I take photos of buildings?' to be natural. This fixes word order and removes repetition.

× It's so unnecessary thing.

✓ It's such an unnecessary thing.

The phrase 'so unnecessary thing' is ungrammatical; after 'such' we use an article plus noun phrase for emphasis (Grammar Problem Type 13). Alternatively, say 'It's so unnecessary' (adjective only) or 'It's such an unnecessary thing' to modify the noun. Also include the article 'an' before 'unnecessary thing'.

× Yes, umm, I want to visit our government building because umm, it's outside is so fancy and has uh, lot of modern things umm, and I want to know how many.

✓ Yes, I want to visit our government building because its exterior is very fancy and it has a lot of modern features, and I want to learn more about them.

Multiple article and possessive issues: 'it's outside' should be 'its exterior' (possessive pronoun without apostrophe) and 'has uh, lot of modern things' needs the article 'a' before 'lot' (Grammar Problem Type 22). 'Modern things' is vague; 'modern features' is clearer. The clause 'I want to know how many' is incomplete; replace with 'I want to learn more about them' to complete the idea. Use correct possessive 'its' and include the article 'a' in 'a lot'.

× No, I don't want to live in a tall building, uh, because now I live in one of the taller building and umm, in my country, living in a tall building is so challenging because, uh, in my country I have a lot of electronics.

✓ No, I don't want to live in a tall building, because I now live in one of the taller buildings, and in my country living in a tall building is very challenging because I have a lot of electronic appliances.

There are several problems: 'one of the taller building' should be plural 'buildings' to match 'one of the' (Grammar Problem Type 1 and 27). 'so challenging because, uh, in my country I have a lot of electronics' repeats 'in my country' and uses the uncountable/plural noun awkwardly; 'a lot of electronic appliances' is clearer (Grammar Problem Type 13/14). Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct pluralization after 'one of the'.

× I, I think so.

✓ I think so.

The repetition 'I, I think so' is a fluency/hesitation issue that results in awkward sentence structure (Grammar Problem Type 26). Remove the duplicate pronoun to make the sentence grammatical and concise.