Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Speak more directly and fluently: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words, use correct grammar (plural/singular, word order), and add a short reason or detail using a linking word. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Example: Yes, there are two tall buildings near my home. One is called Twin Tower and the other is TRK Tower, and I often go to TRK Tower because my tuition teacher holds classes there.

Suggestion: Answer directly and use past tense correctly when referring to the past. Give a brief reason with a linking phrase and avoid tense errors and extra words.

Example: No, I haven’t taken photos of buildings. When I was in class 10 I didn’t have a phone, so I couldn’t take pictures at that time.

Suggestion: Provide a clear, concise description with correct grammar and specific details. Use linking words to connect ideas, and avoid hesitations. Mention one or two clear reasons why you want to visit.

Example: Yes. I would like to visit a building near Hakka Metro that was completed in 2022 because it sits beside the river and has impressive architecture. It also features many indoor plants, which creates a pleasant atmosphere.

Suggestion: Give a direct opinion, correct sentence structure, and explain the reason briefly and clearly. Use linking words (because, so) and choose the correct vocabulary for preferences and fears.

Example: No, I don’t want to live in a tall building because I prefer a farmhouse or a duplex for better quality of life. Also, I have a fear of heights, so living high above the ground would make me uncomfortable.

× I actually, uh, near my home, uh, are two taller building in uh, first building name is twin tower and the second building name is TRK tower or I usually everyday go to your tower uh, because my tuition teacher will.

✓ I actually live near my home; there are two tall buildings. The first building's name is Twin Tower and the second is TRK Tower. I usually go to TRK Tower every day because my tuition teacher is there.

Multiple issues: subject-verb agreement and word order. 'are two taller building' is wrong because plural noun requires plural form 'buildings' and adjective order should be 'tall' not comparative 'taller' (no comparison intended). The sentence also lacks a main verb for 'I' ('I live near my home'). Also use 'there are' to state existence and possessive form for building names. Suggestion: include a main verb for the subject, use 'there are' + plural noun, use 'tall' for plain description, and split into shorter sentences for clarity.

× I usually everyday go to your tower uh, because my tuition teacher will.

✓ I usually go to TRK Tower every day because my tuition teacher is there.

Incorrect word order and missing verb form. 'Usually everyday go' is redundant and should be 'usually go every day'. 'Your tower' is inappropriate; use the building name. 'Because my tuition teacher will' is incomplete; use 'is there' to indicate location. Suggestion: use 'usually' before the main verb and 'every day' as adverbial phrase, and complete clauses with appropriate verbs.

× No I when I was go for this building I am in class 10 that time I have no cell phone and I am never took any building photos.

✓ No. When I went to that building, I was in class 10. At that time I did not have a cell phone, so I never took any photos of buildings.

Mixed and incorrect tense forms. 'When I was go' should be simple past 'when I went'. 'I am in class 10 that time' should be past: 'I was in class 10'. 'I have no cell phone' should be past 'I did not have a cell phone'. 'I am never took' mixes present auxiliary with past participle; correct is 'I never took'. Suggestion: keep past events consistently in the simple past tense and use 'did not' for negatives in past.

× Yes, uh, it's, it's established in 2022 and it's, uh, the place is at Hakka Metro or besides the river and the building was so nice. The building was full of natural, uh, indoor planet and the architecture are.

✓ Yes. It was established in 2022, and it is located at Hakka Metro beside the river. The building is very nice. The building is full of natural indoor plants, and the architecture is impressive.

Tense inconsistency and verb agreement. Use past tense 'was established in 2022' for the founding event, and present tense 'is located' for current location. 'Besides the river' should be 'beside the river'. 'The building was so nice' is awkward—use 'is very nice' if still true. 'Indoor planet' is a wrong word; intended 'indoor plants'. 'The architecture are' uses plural verb for singular noun; use 'the architecture is'. Suggestion: choose past for events, present for current facts, correct noun choice ('plants') and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× No, actually I can't live in a taller building because was I prefer or farmhouse or duplex to live uh here and live a better qualities because umm, I have a phobia.

✓ No. Actually, I can't live in a tall building because I prefer a farmhouse or a duplex; I want to live here for better quality of life, and also I have a phobia.

Several issues: 'can't live in a taller building' uses comparative 'taller' incorrectly—use 'a tall building'. 'Because was I prefer' is ungrammatical; correct word order is 'because I prefer'. 'Live a better qualities' is wrong: use 'better quality of life' or 'better living conditions'. The sentence also mixes modal meaning; 'can't' may express inability or unwillingness—if phobia causes inability, 'cannot' is acceptable. Suggestion: fix adjective usage, correct word order, use countable/uncountable nouns properly ('quality of life'), and add articles where needed ('a farmhouse', 'a duplex').