BuildingPart 1 Report

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Part 1

Examiner

Are there tall buildings near your home?

Candidate

Are there tall buildings near your home?

Examiner

Do you take photos of buildings?

Candidate

Photos of buildings.

Examiner

Is there a building that you would like to visit?

Candidate

Is there a building that you would like to visit?

Examiner

Do you want to live in a tall building?

Candidate

Do you want to live in a little?

Evaluation

Overall

Overall: 5.0Fluency & Coherence: 5.0Pronunciation: 5.0Grammar: 5.0Lexical Resource: 5.0

Part 1

Are there tall buildings near your home?

Score: 10.0

Suggestion: คุณตอบด้วยการเลียนคำถามของผู้ตรวจซึ่งไม่ใช่คำตอบ ควรตอบตรงๆ เป็นประโยคบอกเล่าแล้วเสริมรายละเอียดเล็กน้อย ใช้ linking words หากให้รายละเอียดเพิ่ม เช่น ยืนอยู่ใกล้หรือไกล จำนวนหรือลักษณะของอาคาร และเหตุผลว่าทำไมถึงคิดเช่นนั้น

Example: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home. Most of them are modern apartment blocks about fifteen stories high, and they stand along the main road, so I often see them when I walk to the bus stop.

Do you take photos of buildings?

Score: 8.0

Suggestion: คำตอบของคุณสั้นและไม่เป็นประโยค ควรเริ่มด้วยประโยคหัวข้อที่ชัดเจนแล้วให้รายละเอียดประกอบ เช่น บอกว่าคุณถ่ายหรือไม่ถ่าย และเหตุผล รวมทั้งตัวอย่างสถานที่หรือโอกาสที่คุณถ่ายรูป ใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมความคิด

Example: Yes, I sometimes take photos of buildings when I travel. I usually photograph interesting architecture or old houses, because I like their design and I use the pictures for inspiration when I sketch.

Is there a building that you would like to visit?

Score: 10.0

Suggestion: คุณเพียงแค่ทวนคำถามแทนที่จะตอบ ควรให้ประโยคตอบตรงๆ แล้วอธิบายเหตุผลว่าทำไมอยากไปเยือน ระบุชื่ออาคารหรือสถานที่และรายละเอียดที่เฉพาะ เช่น สถาปัตยกรรม ประวัติ หรือกิจกรรมที่อยากทำ

Example: Yes, I would like to visit the Sagrada Família in Barcelona. I’m fascinated by its unique architecture and I want to see Gaudí’s intricate designs in person because photos cannot capture the scale and detail.

Do you want to live in a tall building?

Score: 5.0

Suggestion: คำตอบคลาดเคลื่อนและไม่ชัดเจน (คุณอาจพิมพ์ผิด) ควรตอบอย่างชัดเจนว่าอยากอยู่หรือไม่ พร้อมเหตุผลและรายละเอียดข้อดีข้อเสีย เช่น วิว ความเป็นส่วนตัว ความปลอดภัย หรือค่าใช้จ่าย ใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมเหตุผล

Example: I wouldn’t mind living in a tall building because it offers great views and more security. However, I prefer a lower apartment for easier access and a quieter environment, so it depends on the specific building and location.

Grammar

Sentence structure errors

× Are there tall buildings near your home?

Yes, there are tall buildings near my home.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. This is a sentence structure/response error: a question requires an appropriate answer. Suggestion: respond with a full sentence that addresses the question, e.g., 'Yes, there are tall buildings near my home.' or 'No, there aren’t any.' Use 'there are' for plural nouns.

Sentence structure errors

× Photos of buildings.

Yes, I take photos of buildings.

The student gave a fragment rather than a full sentence. The examiner asked a yes/no question in the present simple, so the correct response should be a full clause with subject and verb. Suggestion: use 'Yes, I take photos of buildings.' or 'No, I don't take photos of buildings.' to match the question form and tense.

Sentence structure errors

× Is there a building that you would like to visit?

Yes, there is a building that I would like to visit.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. Provide a full declarative answer matching the modal/conditional structure: 'I would like to visit...' or 'Yes, there is...'. Suggestion: answer with 'Yes, there is a building that I would like to visit.' or specify the building.

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× Do you want to live in a little?

Do you want to live in a little building?

The student used 'little' alone, which is incorrect because 'little' is an adjective and needs a noun to modify. The examiner's question expects 'a tall building' or 'a little building' as a noun phrase. Suggestion: include the noun after the adjective: 'Do you want to live in a little building?' or answer the question: 'No, I don't want to live in a little building.'.

Vocabulary

LittleShort; Young; Brief; Minor
TallIn height; Demanding
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