Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and use correct grammar and word choice. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct articles, plural forms and location phrases (e.g., 'in the Central District' not 'at').

Example: Yes. I live in the Central District, so there are many tall buildings near my home. For example, there are several high-rise condominiums and a couple of office towers close by, which makes the area very urban.

Suggestion: Organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and one or two reasons. Use correct tense and articles (e.g., 'photographs' or 'photos', 'an architect') and linking words such as 'however' and 'because' correctly. Be specific about when or why you photograph buildings.

Example: Yes, I enjoy photography, but most of my photos are of nature. However, I sometimes photograph buildings because I work as an architect and I am interested in their design and structure.

Suggestion: Give one clear example and explain specifically why. Use correct nouns and prepositions (e.g., 'the Copenhagen Opera House in Copenhagen' or the building's name), and avoid vague phrases. Use linking words ('for example', 'because', 'so') to connect ideas and finish the sentence with a clear reason.

Example: There are many buildings I'd like to visit, but one in particular is the Copenhagen Opera House in Denmark because it was designed by one of my favourite architects. I want to see the innovative use of materials and the way the interior space is organised.

Suggestion: Answer directly and give specific reasons with proper vocabulary. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases ('low lights', 'cooling pace'). Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' correctly. Mention practical reasons (e.g., stairs, noise, community) and one preference sentence.

Example: No, I would not want to live in a tall building because I find it inconvenient to use elevators frequently and I prefer a quieter, low-rise condominium. For example, in a low-rise building I feel more connected to neighbours and it's easier to go outside quickly.

× Definitely yes, because I live in the Central District or as you know at Agamai. So there's a lot of highlights building especially condominium allow my area also there have the office tower and some of the little.

✓ Definitely yes, because I live in the Central District, or as you know, Agamai. There are many notable buildings, especially condominiums around my area; there are also office towers and some small shops.

The sentence contains multiple adjective and word choice errors and several structural problems. 'Highlights building' should be 'notable buildings' (adjective use). 'Condominium allow my area' is incorrect; 'condominiums around my area' is correct. 'There have the office tower' is wrong English; use 'there are office towers' (there-be and plural). Also 'some of the little' is incomplete; likely 'some small shops' or 'small buildings'. Suggest breaking into shorter sentences, use plural nouns for multiple items, and choose appropriate adjectives ('notable', 'small').

× I like taking a photo, however most of the photo that I took is the natural photo rather than urban like building.

✓ I like taking photos; however, most of the photos I take are of nature rather than urban buildings.

Incorrect gerund and noun forms: 'taking a photo' is acceptable but plural 'taking photos' fits general preference. 'Most of the photo that I took' should be 'most of the photos I take' to match present habit (present simple) and plural form. 'Natural photo' should be 'photos of nature' and 'urban like building' should be 'urban buildings'. Use consistent verb tense for habits and correct pluralization of countable nouns.

× But I could say that sometime I also like taking a photo of building 'cause I am working as a architect and really like how the building.

✓ But I would say that sometimes I also like taking photos of buildings because I work as an architect and I really like buildings.

Pronoun and article errors: 'sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'A architect' needs the article 'an architect'. Use consistent pronouns and verbs: 'I am working' suggests current continuous but 'I work' is more natural for occupation. 'Really like how the building' is incomplete; instead say 'I really like buildings' or 'I really like architectural design'. Also replace colloquial ''cause' with 'because'.

× There are so many building that I would like to visit, but I could say that one of the most preferable to visit is the Copenhagen in Copenhagen, Denmark and because it designed by one of my favorite architect ever and this is the big architect so I want to experience how.

✓ There are so many buildings I would like to visit, but one of the top places is Copenhagen in Denmark, because it was designed by one of my favourite architects and I want to experience it.

Multiple plural and article errors: 'many building' should be 'many buildings'. 'The Copenhagen in Copenhagen, Denmark' is redundant and incorrect; use 'Copenhagen in Denmark'. Tense and voice: 'because it designed by' needs passive past: 'because it was designed by'. 'My favorite architect ever and this is the big architect' is awkward; 'one of my favourite architects' is correct. End with a clear object: 'I want to experience it.' Also prefer consistent simple past/passive forms when referring to design completion.

× Personally, I don't like living in the tall building because it's really like difficult to go up and down, so personally I prefer the low lights.

✓ Personally, I don't like living in tall buildings because it is really difficult to go up and down, so I prefer lower-rise buildings.

Tense and noun number: 'the tall building' should be plural 'tall buildings' when speaking generally. 'It's really like difficult' is colloquial and incorrect; use 'it is really difficult'. 'Low lights' seems to be a wrong phrase; likely 'lower-rise buildings' or 'low-rise buildings'. Use consistent general present tense for preferences.

× Also, my cooling pace is the lowlife condominium as well, so I could say that I like low lights more than high.

✓ Also, my preferred living pace is in low-rise condominiums, so I would say that I prefer low-rise buildings to high-rise ones.

Incorrect adjective and word choice: 'cooling pace' is incorrect; likely 'preferred living pace'. 'Lowlife condominium' is incorrect and has negative meaning; correct term is 'low-rise condominium'. 'Low lights' should be 'low-rise buildings' and comparison should be 'prefer X to Y' or 'prefer low-rise buildings over high-rise ones'. Ensure correct vocabulary for building types and clear comparative structure.