Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Ответ должен быть более естественным и точным. Укажите прямо, есть ли рядом высокие здания, и избегайте неправильной формы (например, "My home is tall too" звучит странно). Дайте одно-два дополнительных коротких уточнения с использованием связки для связности.

Example: Yes, there are some tall buildings near my home. For example, there is a 20-storey apartment block across the street, and a glass office tower about five minutes away.

Suggestion: Нужно улучшить грамматику, порядок слов и конкретику. Объясните, почему вы фотографируете здания, и используйте связующие слова (e.g., "because", "for example") чтобы предложения были логичными. Избегайте неясных фраз ("when son said").

Example: Yes, I do. Photography is a hobby of mine because I love architectural details. For example, I often photograph seaside buildings and modern glass facades when I walk with friends because they look visually striking in photos.

Suggestion: Ответ неясный и содержит ошибки лексики и произношения (в речи — словоупотребления). Назовите конкретное здание и объясните причину, используя связующее слово, чтобы показать логическую структуру. Избегайте разговорных сокращений («wanna») в экзамене.

Example: Yes, there are several. For instance, I would like to visit the Shard in London because I want to see the city view from the top, and I am also interested in historic temples in Japan, such as Kiyomizu-dera, for their architecture and atmosphere.

Suggestion: Устраните повторы и ошибки времени. Дайте чёткое утверждение, затем поясните причину и используйте связующие слова. Убедитесь, что грамматика корректна (настоящие/прошедшие времена и местоимения).

Example: Yes, I do live in a tall building now. It was my childhood dream, and I worked for many years to afford my own flat, so I am very happy to have it.

× Yes, it is actually. My home is tall too.

✓ Yes, there are. My home is tall too.

The examiner asked about 'buildings' (plural), so the appropriate response uses the plural form of the verb 'to be' with a plural subject: 'There are tall buildings near my home.' The original 'Yes, it is actually' incorrectly uses singular pronoun and verb. Use 'there are' or 'yes, there are' to agree with plural 'buildings'. Suggestion: Respond to plural nouns with 'there are' and avoid referring to 'buildings' as singular.

× Yes I do, it's my hobby and I take photos of building when son said and it's look beautiful in my photos.

✓ Yes I do; it's my hobby and I take photos of buildings when I go out and they look beautiful in my photos.

Multiple issues: 'building' should be plural when speaking generally (use of quantifier/plural), missing subject 'I' before 'go out' (sentence structure), and 'it's look' is incorrect subject-verb agreement. Use 'buildings' for general plural, add the subject 'I' and use 'they look' to match plural noun. Suggestion: Use plural nouns for general habits ('photos of buildings'), include the subject for actions ('when I go out'), and match verb form to plural subjects ('they look').

× Also I take photos of building in the beach and with my friends.

✓ Also I take photos of buildings on the beach and with my friends.

The phrase 'in the beach' uses the wrong preposition; 'on the beach' is correct in English. Also 'building' should be plural when speaking generally. Suggestion: Use 'on the beach' for activities occurring on the shore and use plural 'buildings' for general statements.

× Yeah, I have some building in England that I wanna visit and many of buildings in Japan in Aleppen.

✓ Yeah, I have some buildings in England that I want to visit and many buildings in Japan in Aleppen.

Use plural 'buildings' instead of singular 'building' when referring to multiple items. 'wanna' is informal; use 'want to' in a test setting. 'many of buildings' is ungrammatical — use 'many buildings'. Also word order 'in Japan in Aleppen' is unclear; keep place names in correct order ('in Aleppen, Japan') if needed. Suggestion: Use plural nouns for multiple items and prefer 'want to' in formal speech; use correct prepositional phrase order for places.

× It's great, Grace. So yes, it's there.

✓ It's great, Grace. So yes, there are.

The response 'it's there' uses singular 'it' and 'is' but the referent is plural 'buildings'. Use 'there are' to indicate existence of plural items. Suggestion: Match 'there is/there are' to the number of things being referred to.

× I wanted to but now I live in a tall building building.

✓ I wanted to, but now I live in a tall building.

The sentence repeats 'building' twice and mixes past desire with present fact; 'I wanted to' is past but context implies change to present — 'I wanted to' is acceptable if you contrast past desire with present reality. Remove duplicate word. Suggestion: Avoid accidental repetition and ensure tense contrast is clear with punctuation ('I wanted to, but now I live...').

× It was my dream since my childhood but now I have it and I so happy for this.

✓ It was my dream since my childhood, but now I have it and I am so happy about this.

Missing auxiliary verb 'am' after 'I' causes grammatical error. Also use 'about' rather than 'for' to express happiness regarding something. Suggestion: Include the correct form of 'to be' for present states ('I am') and use correct prepositions ('happy about').

× I worked for this so many years to her own flat in a tall building.

✓ I worked for this for so many years to get my own flat in a tall building.

The original sentence lacks the infinitive 'to get' and contains an incorrect possessive 'her own flat' which should be 'my own flat' to match the speaker. Also 'for so many years' needs the preposition 'for' before the duration. Suggestion: Use 'worked for' + duration ('for so many years') and include an infinitive to state purpose ('to get my own flat'). Ensure pronouns refer to the speaker ('my' not 'her').