Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Clarify and simplify. Start with a direct topic sentence answering the question, then add one clear, relevant detail. Avoid incorrect grammar and irrelevant phrases (e.g. “net carbon lanes”, “exhibitions”) and ensure subject-verb agreement.

Example: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home. For example, a new office tower and a modern apartment block were built in the last few years, which show how the city is growing.

Suggestion: Give a direct yes/no then a concise reason with a clear description. Use correct collocations (e.g. “take photos”, “architectural details”, “interesting designs”) and avoid vague or incorrect phrases like “too much low like definition.”

Example: Yes, I often take photos of buildings because I enjoy capturing architectural details. For instance, I like photographing old facades and modern glass structures because of their interesting patterns.

Suggestion: Answer directly and give a specific example or reason. Avoid vague numeric claims and repetition. Describe what appeals to you about that building (view, history, design, facilities).

Example: I would like to visit a famous skyscraper with an observation deck because I want to enjoy panoramic city views. For example, visiting a tower with restaurants and an observation floor would let me see the skyline and learn about the building's design.

Suggestion: Give a clear reasoned answer. State whether you would or would not live there, then give one or two specific reasons (views, quiet, amenities). Avoid fillers and unclear phrases like “present and mild weather” or “very powerful for me.”

Example: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because the higher floors have nicer views and tend to be quieter. Also, many high-rise apartments have good facilities such as gyms and rooftop gardens.

× Definitely, as my city is developing countries so there are many different types of net carbon lanes that have different types of exhibitions around it.

✓ Definitely. My city is a developing country, so there are many different kinds of new commercial lanes with various exhibitions around them.

Original sentence has multiple structural problems: 'my city is developing countries' mixes singular/plural and is ungrammatical (should be 'a developing country'); use of 'so' with commas and clauses is incorrect; 'net carbon lanes' is likely a misuse—context suggests 'new commercial lanes' or 'new shopping lanes'; 'different types of ... around it' has a pronoun-number mismatch ('it' should match plural 'lanes'). Suggest breaking into two sentences, correct singular/plural, replace unclear terms with likely intended words, and match pronouns to nouns. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Without a doubt as it is so much knowledgeable and the architecture is too much low like definition larger and innovative ideas.

✓ Without a doubt. It is very interesting, and the architecture is innovative, bold, and well designed.

The phrase 'so much knowledgeable' incorrectly uses an adjective for a place and an idiomatic meaning; 'knowledgeable' applies to people. 'Too much low like definition larger' is ungrammatical and unclear. Replace with adjectives that describe buildings (interesting, innovative, bold, well designed). Also split into two sentences for clarity and use appropriate intensifiers ('very', not 'so much'). Grammar problem type ID:13

× That should be a tall building with the floors of maximum capacity 100 and and there there should be many more. Availability and luxurious things to experience.

✓ I would like to visit a tall building with floors that can each hold up to 100 people, and with many available luxury facilities to enjoy.

Original has repetition ('and and there there'), fragmented sentence 'Availability and luxurious things to experience' is a fragment. 'Floors of maximum capacity 100' needs clearer phrasing ('floors that can each hold up to 100 people'). Combine into one coherent sentence, remove repetitions, and correct noun phrases to express availability of luxury facilities. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Yes, because I like to present and mild weather at the top. Top. After the hot top of my building and yeah, somewhere it is very much flexible and you know, like it is very powerful for me.

✓ Yes. I would like to live there because the weather at the top is pleasant and milder. After the top gets hot during the day, it is still comfortable and offers flexibility; I also feel it is very appealing to me.

Several issues: 'like to present and mild weather' misuses verbs and nouns—should describe that the weather 'is mild' or 'is pleasant'. 'After the hot top of my building' is unclear; rephrase to indicate temperature variation. 'Very much flexible' is awkward when describing a place; use 'offers flexibility' or 'is very convenient'. Clean up colloquialisms ('you know, like') and make sentence semantically coherent. Grammar problem type ID:11