Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No), then give a brief specific detail and avoid repetition. Use linking words for clarity and correct time/distance expressions. Also correct grammar (e.g., "there are" once, "20–25 minutes away").

Example: No, there aren’t any tall buildings in my hometown. However, about 20–25 minutes away there are some tall office blocks and apartment towers, which people often visit for work or shopping.

Suggestion: Be natural and avoid filler words and repetition. Give a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific reasons or examples using linking words like "because" or "for example." Use accurate vocabulary (e.g., "scenery," "attractive"), and keep the answer within 3–4 sentences.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of buildings because I love architecture and city scenery. For example, when I see an attractive office or apartment block, I take a picture to remember the place and to study its design later.

Suggestion: Answer directly: start with a clear statement naming the building, then give specific reasons why you want to visit using linking words (e.g., "because", "for example"). Use correct distance/time expressions (20–25 minutes) and correct vocabulary ("ambience", "interior"). Avoid vague phrases like "I usually prefer."

Example: Yes, I would like to visit the Royal Kingdom Resort, which is about 20–25 minutes from my home. I want to see it because it has beautiful architecture, a lovely ambience and impressive interior design.

Suggestion: Be concise and grammatically correct. Begin with a direct answer (Yes/No), then give specific reasons or a brief example. Use correct names (e.g., "Burj Khalifa" if you mean that) and avoid repeating phrases like "if I have the opportunity" multiple times. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Example: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building if I had the chance, because they often offer great views and convenient facilities. For instance, I would love to stay in the Burj Khalifa to experience the view from a high floor and the modern amenities.

× So if we talk about tall buildings in my home, there are there are no tall buildings in in my hometown if we get away 2025 minutes away from my hometown.

✓ There are no tall buildings in my hometown; if you go about 20-25 minutes away, there are tall office and apartment buildings.

Original sentence has repetition ('there are there are', 'in in'), wrong time/distance format ('2025 minutes'), and awkward structure. Correct by removing duplicates, using a clear clause ('if you go about 20-25 minutes away') and combining ideas into one coherent sentence. Use plural 'buildings' consistently and clarify 'office and apartment buildings'. Suggestion: speak in concise clauses and avoid repeating words.

× So there is office in apartments which are tall in the sizes.

✓ There are tall office buildings and apartment buildings.

Original misuses articles and noun forms ('there is office in apartments', 'tall in the sizes'). Use plural 'there are' with plural countable nouns and pair adjectives directly with nouns: 'tall office buildings and apartment buildings'. Suggestion: use 'there is' for singular and 'there are' for plural countable nouns and place adjectives before nouns.

× Yes, I I am fascinated with clicking clicking the pictures of the search views and buildings.

✓ Yes, I am fascinated with taking pictures of scenic views and buildings.

Redundant words ('I I', 'clicking clicking') and incorrect collocation ('pictures of the search views'). Use natural collocations: 'taking pictures' and 'scenic views'. Remove repetitions. Suggestion: pause mentally to avoid repeating words and choose common verb-noun collocations like 'take pictures'.

× But if we talk about buildings. So whenever I see apartment of office which are looking attractive or attract the people attention.

✓ Whenever I see an attractive apartment or office that catches people's attention,

Fragmented sentences and wrong noun order ('apartment of office'), awkward phrase 'attract the people attention'. Combine into a single clause, use 'an attractive apartment or office' and the verb phrase 'catches people's attention'. Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments by connecting dependent clauses to main clauses.

× So I usually prefer to the click the pictures of the building so I can memorize my day that I go to that place and I click the particular picture of an apartment.

✓ I usually prefer to take pictures of the building so I can remember the day I visited that place and the particular apartment.

Incorrect infinitive phrase ('prefer to the click'), awkward verb choice ('memorize my day'), and redundant wording. Use 'prefer to take pictures' and 'remember the day I visited'. Suggestion: use 'remember' for recalling experiences and 'visit' for going to places.

× So if we talk about building that I want to visit in my future.

✓ If we talk about a building I want to visit in the future,

Missing article 'a' before 'building' and awkward phrase 'in my future'. Use 'in the future' and include the article. The clause should connect to the main sentence that follows. Suggestion: use 'in the future' for general future time and include appropriate articles.

× So if we go away from my home, about 20 to 25 metres away.

✓ If we go about 20 to 25 minutes from my home,

Confuses units: 'metres' likely intended 'minutes' for travel time; 'go away from my home' is awkward. Use 'go about 20-25 minutes from my home' or '20-25 minutes away from my home'. Suggestion: use correct units (minutes for time, metres for distance) and the phrase 'away from' after the time/distance.

× So there is a Royal Kingdom resort which I want to visit once in a once in my lifetime because it was a very beautiful, having a good ambience and interior I usually prefer.

✓ There is a Royal Kingdom resort I would like to visit once in my lifetime because it is very beautiful and has a pleasant ambience and interior.

Redundant phrase ('once in a once in my lifetime'), tense inconsistency ('was' should be 'is' for a place that still exists), and awkward phrasing ('having a good ambience and interior I usually prefer'). Use 'would like to visit', present tense for ongoing qualities, and clear noun phrases 'pleasant ambience and interior'. Suggestion: use 'would like' for desire and keep descriptive verbs in present tense if the characteristic still applies.

× So if I have a opportunity, I absolutely I grab the opportunity to live in a tall building.

✓ If I have an opportunity, I would absolutely grab the chance to live in a tall building.

Missing article ('a opportunity' -> 'an opportunity'), awkward repetition and tense/modal mismatch. Use 'would' to express hypothetical willingness and 'grab the chance' or 'take the opportunity'. Suggestion: use 'an' before vowel sounds and 'would' for hypothetical situations.

× So if you talk about tall building, it was situated in woods Khalifa and it was very tall building in the size.

✓ If you talk about the tall building, it is situated in Burj Khalifa and it is a very tall building.

Original has wrong place name and preposition order ('in woods Khalifa'), tense inconsistencies ('was' vs present), and missing articles. Likely meant 'Burj Khalifa'. Use present tense to describe location and include 'the' before specific buildings. Suggestion: use correct proper names and articles for famous buildings ('the Burj Khalifa') and present tense for general facts.

× Also, if I have the opportunity, I definitely go there and live for a days in that particular place building.

✓ Also, if I had the opportunity, I would definitely go there and stay for a few days in that building.

Tense and modal errors: mixing present conditional with simple present ('if I have... I definitely go'). Use second conditional 'If I had... I would...'. 'Live for a days' is incorrect; use 'stay for a few days'. Suggestion: use conditional forms correctly (would + base verb) for hypothetical scenarios and use 'stay' for short visits.