Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise, correct grammar, and use a clear topic sentence followed by a brief specific detail. Avoid repetition (e.g., “tall building” repeated) and fix agreement and article errors. Use a linking word if you add one detail.

Example: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home because I live in a small village. For example, most houses around me are one- or two-storey cottages, so the skyline is very low.

Suggestion: Start with a clear direct answer, then give one or two concise reasons with correct verb forms. Avoid awkward phrases like “capture that movement” and incorrect tense. Use linking words such as “because” or “so” to connect ideas.

Example: Not always, but I often photograph buildings that look particularly unique because I like to keep memories of interesting architecture. For instance, I photographed an old colonial town hall last year so I can remember its ornate details.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer with one clear reason and one specific detail. Correct repetition and word order (e.g., “Burj Khalifa in Dubai”). Reduce fillers (“uh”) and use linking words like “because” or “so”.

Example: Yes — I would love to visit the Burj Khalifa in Dubai because it is the tallest building in the world. For example, I want to go to the observation deck to see the city view from above.

Suggestion: Answer directly and use correct expressions: say “I’m afraid of heights” instead of awkward phrases. Give one clear reason and a conditional comment if needed, avoiding repetition and fillers. Keep it to two or three sentences max.

Example: Not really — I’m afraid of heights, so I wouldn’t like living in a very tall building. However, if I had a short-term chance to stay there, I might try it for a few days.

× No, there are no tall building near my home because my home is located in a small village where there we can't find any tall buildings or the tall houses. So there are no buildings.

✓ No, there are no tall buildings near my home because my home is located in a small village where we can't find any tall buildings or tall houses. So there are no tall buildings.

Errors: singular/plural issue (ID 1) and incorrect word order/redundant words (ID 26). 'building' should be plural to match 'there are no'. Remove redundant 'there' after 'where' and choose consistent phrase 'tall buildings or tall houses'. Suggestion: use plural nouns with 'there are' and avoid repeating ideas; keep word order 'where we can't find...'. Suggested IDs: 1, 26.

× Not always, but whenever I see any unique building or a tallest building, that time I am supposed to take a photograph of that building because I think that I should capture that movement for my future. And whenever I see that picture, I will remember that this was a building I ever have seen which was very unique for me.

✓ Not always, but whenever I see a unique building or the tallest building, I take a photograph because I want to capture the moment for the future. Whenever I see that picture, I remember that it was a building I had ever seen that was very special to me.

Errors: article errors (ID 22), incorrect use of quantifiers/articles (ID 14), verb tense issues (IDs 6 and 5), and word choice/meaning (ID 13, 26). Use 'a unique building' not 'any unique building' and 'the tallest building' with 'the'. Use 'take' in present simple for habitual action and 'capture the moment' (not 'movement'). Use past perfect 'had ever seen' or simply past 'I have seen' depending on intent; here corrected to 'had ever seen' to indicate prior experience. Suggestions: choose correct articles ('a' vs 'the'), use present simple for habits, use correct phrase 'capture the moment', and use consistent tense for remembering.

× Yes, there is a building named Burj Khalifa Khalifa located in now Dubai. I will definitely like to visit that building. I uh, listened from the from my friend that it is the tallest building uh, and it is a very beautiful to see. So I will definitely like to watch that building and I will definitely like to visit also.

✓ Yes, there is a building named the Burj Khalifa located in Dubai. I would definitely like to visit it. I heard from my friend that it is the tallest building, and it is very beautiful to see. So I would definitely like to see and visit it.

Errors: article errors (ID 22), incorrect word order and redundancy (ID 26), incorrect verb form / reporting speech (ID 24), modal verb usage (ID 4). Use 'the Burj Khalifa' (definite article), remove duplicate 'Khalifa' and 'now'. Use 'heard from my friend' not 'listened from'. Use 'would like' for polite desire. Use 'see' rather than 'watch' for a building. Suggestions: use correct definite article with named landmarks, simplify and remove redundancy, use 'hear' for receiving information, and 'would like' for expressing desire.

× Uh, not really because I'm a little bit phobia, uh, phobic of the height. I can't live in the tall building for so much time. Uh, but whenever I will go, go to any chance of living there, so I will definitely grab that.

✓ Not really, because I'm a little bit phobic about heights. I can't live in a tall building for a long time. But if I ever get a chance to live there, I would definitely take it.

Errors: incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs (ID 13), incorrect prepositions (ID 11), tense and modal issues (IDs 7 and 4), and sentence structure (ID 26). Use 'phobic about heights' or 'have a fear of heights' rather than 'phobia'. Use 'a long time' not 'so much time'. Use conditional 'If I ever get a chance... I would' to express hypothetical willingness. Suggestions: use correct adjective 'phobic' with 'about' or 'afraid of', use 'a long time' for duration, and use conditional/modal verbs correctly.