Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the response more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid awkward phrasing and unnecessary words (e.g., 'Baku OR', 'converted into becoming'). Use linking words like 'so' or 'therefore' for coherence.

Example: Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home because Baku has recently developed into a city. As a result, many green spaces and small parks were replaced by office blocks, apartment towers and shopping centers.

Suggestion: Give a direct topic sentence and then one clear reason with a specific example. Correct grammar and avoid repetition (e.g., 'aesthetically pleasing to the eyes' -> 'aesthetically pleasing'). Use linking words like 'because' or 'and' to connect ideas.

Example: Yes, I often take photos of buildings because I find their design fascinating. For example, I like photographing old city halls and modern glass towers to capture how they accommodate many people while looking attractive.

Suggestion: Make the answer more fluent and provide one specific detail about why you want to visit. Remove hesitations and combine sentences into a concise response with linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit my company's office because I currently work remotely and I'm curious to see the workspace and meet my colleagues in person.

Suggestion: Begin with a clear topic sentence and then give a specific reason with one example. Correct awkward phrasing ('have your slow') and use linking words like 'because' and 'so'. Keep it to two or three sentences maximum.

Example: No, I wouldn't want to live in a tall city building because the busy, crowded environment would increase my anxiety. Instead, I prefer a rural area where life is quieter and I can enjoy a slower pace.

× There are a lot of tall buildings near our home since Baku OR is now developed into a city.

✓ There have been a lot of tall buildings near our home since Baku has developed into a city.

The sentence uses 'since' to indicate a time starting point, so the present perfect tense is required to show change over time. Also 'There are' is acceptable for current existence but combined with 'since' the present perfect 'have been' is more appropriate. Use 'Baku has developed' instead of 'is now developed' because 'developed' is a result of a process. Suggestion: use present perfect for events starting in the past and continuing to now: 'There have been... since...'.

× A lot of the greeneries and open spaces were converted into becoming landscapes of buildings, infrastructures and different commercials.

✓ A lot of the green areas and open spaces were converted into landscapes of buildings, infrastructure and various commercial properties.

'Greeneries' is not a common noun; use 'green areas'. 'Converted into becoming' is redundant; use 'converted into'. 'Infrastructures' is usually uncountable 'infrastructure'. 'Different commercials' is incorrect; use 'various commercial properties' or 'commercial buildings'. Also remove unnecessary article 'the' before 'green areas' unless referring to specific ones. Use simple past 'were converted' to describe completed actions.

× I do take photos of buildings mainly because it fascinates me that there are that in one infrastructure you it can accommodate a lot of people and also because it's aesthetically pleasing to the eyes.

✓ I do take photos of buildings mainly because it fascinates me that one building can accommodate a lot of people and because they are aesthetically pleasing.

Original has several issues: 'it fascinates me that there are that in one infrastructure you it can accommodate' is ungrammatical. Use a singular subject 'one building' with verb 'can accommodate' and remove extra pronouns 'you' and 'it'. 'Buildings' is plural, so refer to them as 'they' are aesthetically pleasing, not 'it'. Also 'aesthetically pleasing to the eyes' is wordy; 'aesthetically pleasing' suffices.

× I would like to visit the building of my company because I work umm remotely at home.

✓ I would like to visit my company's building because I work remotely from home.

Use the possessive 'my company's building' instead of 'the building of my company' for natural English. 'Work remotely at home' is redundant; say 'work remotely from home' or simply 'work from home'. Remove filler 'umm' in written form.

× Our company is something that I really look forward to visiting one day.

✓ It's a place I really look forward to visiting one day.

'Our company is something that I really look forward to visiting' is awkward because 'company' as an organization is better referred to as 'the place' or 'the office'. Use present simple 'I really look forward to visiting one day' to express a future intention with present tense. Keep concise phrasing.

× I actually don't want to live in a tall building, mainly in the city.

✓ I actually don't want to live in a tall building, especially in the city.

'Mainly in the city' is awkward for emphasis; 'especially in the city' is more natural. The rest of the sentence is grammatically fine.

× It's because it will just elevate or emphasize my anxiety on this fast-paced life that we live in.

✓ It's because it would only increase my anxiety about the fast-paced life we live.

Use conditional 'would' to indicate a hypothetical consequence of living in a tall building. 'Elevate or emphasize' is awkward; 'increase' is more natural for anxiety. Use 'anxiety about' rather than 'anxiety on'. 'This fast-paced life that we live in' can be shortened to 'the fast-paced life we live.'

× I want to live on the rural area wherein you can enjoy life and have your slow.

✓ I want to live in a rural area where you can enjoy life and live more slowly.

Use 'in a rural area' not 'on the rural area'. 'Wherein' is formal and awkward; use 'where'. 'Have your slow' is ungrammatical—use 'live more slowly' or 'have a slower pace of life'. Also use the indefinite article 'a rural area' unless a specific area is meant.