Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct and clear: start with a topic sentence answering the question, then add concise, relevant details using correct grammar and linking words. Correct plural/singular forms, articles, and remove irrelevant fragments. Limit to 2–3 sentences and use specific info (e.g., number, types, distance).

Example: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home. For example, two residential towers and a shopping complex are within a five-minute walk, and they include supermarkets, offices and apartments.

Suggestion: Answer directly then give a brief reason. Use simple linking words (because, so, when) and correct verb forms. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Keep it to 2 sentences and provide a specific circumstance if applicable.

Example: No, I don't usually take photos of buildings because I'm not very interested in architecture. When I travel to new cities I sometimes photograph interesting landmarks, but not everyday buildings near my home.

Suggestion: Give a clear yes/no and then name the building and a specific reason why you want to visit. Use correct nouns and prepositions, and link ideas with words like because or to. Keep answers natural and avoid awkward phrases like “insight in class.”

Example: Yes. I would like to visit the tallest residential building near my home called Gold Residence because I am curious about its rooftop views and modern design. I hope to see the interior layout and the facilities, such as the gym and sky lounge.

Suggestion: State your preference clearly, then give one or two specific reasons using correct vocabulary (e.g., crowded, noisy, inconvenient). Use linking words (because, so) and avoid vague phrases. Keep it within 2–3 concise sentences.

Example: No, I wouldn't want to live in a very tall building because it can be crowded and noisy, and elevators often take a long time during peak hours. I prefer a smaller apartment with easier access to the street and amenities.

× There are lots of building nearby.

✓ There are lots of buildings nearby.

The noun 'building' should be plural to match 'lots of', which requires a plural countable noun. Use 'buildings' to show more than one building.

× My home includes supermarkets, companies, residence and etcetera.

✓ My neighborhood includes supermarkets, companies, residences, and so on.

'Residence' should be plural ('residences') to match the list of multiple places. Also 'home includes' is odd; 'neighborhood includes' or 'area has' is more natural. Replace 'and etcetera' with 'and so on' or simply omit 'and' before 'etc.'.

× It's hate more than.

✓ I dislike it very much.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'It's hate more than' mixes pronoun and verb incorrectly. Use a subject 'I' with the verb 'dislike' or 'I hate it' and add an intensifier 'very much' to convey stronger feeling.

× My apartment 8.

✓ My apartment is number 8.

The sentence lacks a verb. Include the linking verb 'is' and clarify with 'number' to indicate the apartment identifier.

× Actually I have never thought about it because I don't care it.

✓ Actually I have never thought about it because I don't care about it.

The verb 'care' requires the preposition 'about' when followed by an object. Add 'about' to make the phrase grammatically correct: 'care about it'.

× When I go to the home, I honestly when I go to home I also see the view.

✓ When I go home, I honestly, when I go home, I also enjoy the view.

Do not use the definite article with 'home' in this context; say 'go home'. The original repeats phrases and lacks clarity. Use commas and a verb like 'enjoy' to make the meaning clear and grammatical.

× Yeah, there is.

✓ Yes, there is.

While 'Yeah, there is.' is colloquially acceptable, in formal responses 'Yes, there is.' is more appropriate. No grammatical change required beyond style.

× There is a tallest resident near my home and it is called Gold Residence.

✓ There is a tall residential building near my home called Gold Residence.

'Tallest' implies a superlative and needs a comparison group; context likely means 'a tall residential building.' Also 'resident' (a person) is incorrect; use 'residential building' or 'residence'.

× Honestly, I want to see what insight in class.

✓ Honestly, I want to see the interior in person.

The original is unclear and ungrammatical. 'See what insight in class' does not make sense. If the intent is to see the inside of the building, say 'see the interior' or 'see what it's like inside' and use 'in person' or 'for myself' for clarity.

× Actually, I don't want to reside in the tallest building because of some crowded attitudes of measurements in this area.

✓ Actually, I don't want to live in the tallest building because it is crowded and measures are cramped in this area.

'Reside' is formal; 'live' is more natural. The phrase 'crowded attitudes of measurements' is incorrect. Clarify by saying 'it is crowded' or 'the spaces are cramped' to express discomfort with crowding.

× And you suffer from time management.

✓ Also, I would have problems managing my time.

The original sentence switches person ('you') and is abrupt. To express a personal concern, use 'I' and a conditional or modal: 'I would have problems managing my time' or 'I would suffer from poor time management.'