Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the response clearer and grammatically correct. Start with a direct topic sentence, correct noun forms and verb agreement, and avoid redundant phrases. Add one or two brief supporting details with linking words.

Example: Yes. There is a very tall school building next to my home that has about nine or ten floors. Because it’s so close, I can see it from my window, and it often looks impressive at night when the lights are on.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer and explain briefly why. Use simpler and more natural phrasing (e.g., “I don’t usually take photos of buildings”). Add a linking word to connect your reason.

Example: Not usually. I don’t usually take photos of buildings; instead, I prefer photographing the scenic views I visit with friends because those moments capture the atmosphere and memories.

Suggestion: Clarify the building’s name and your reason for wanting to visit. Avoid slang or unclear phrases (“1 tax completed”). Use a linking word to expand your reason and be specific about what appeals to you.

Example: Yes. There is a building called Dadara in Kathmandu that I would like to visit. Although I have been to Kathmandu before, I haven’t seen this building, and I want to visit it to admire its architecture and learn about its history.

Suggestion: State your preference clearly, correct grammar (plural/singular, articles), and give a specific reason or one supporting detail with a linking word. Keep it concise.

Example: No, I wouldn’t want to live in a tall building because they often feel crowded. Instead, I prefer living in a small house where the atmosphere is cozier and neighbors feel more familiar.

× Yes there is beside my home there is a vascular school that have very tall classes or maybe buildings and that is up to maybe 9 or 10th floor. So yes there is a tall building near my home.

✓ Yes, beside my home there is a vascular school that has very tall classrooms or maybe buildings, and it is up to about the ninth or tenth floor. So yes, there is a tall building near my home.

Multiple issues: incorrect use of 'there is' repetition and sentence structure (There be issue). Subject-verb agreement: 'school' is singular so use 'has' not 'have' (also subject-verb agreement relates to ID 27 but primary error per list is 'There be issue'). 'Classes' likely intended 'classrooms' and '9 or 10th floor' should be 'ninth or tenth floor' or 'about the ninth or tenth floor'. Improve clarity by combining clauses and adding commas. Suggestion: place 'beside my home' after the initial confirmation, use 'has' for singular school, replace 'classes' with 'classrooms', and use ordinal or 'about' for floor numbers.

× I don't prefer taking the building photos, but I do prefer taking the photos of the mesmerizing views that I went to with my friends.

✓ I don't prefer taking photos of buildings, but I prefer taking photos of the mesmerizing views I saw with my friends.

The phrase 'prefer taking the building photos' is awkward; 'photos of buildings' is correct. 'That I went to with my friends' incorrectly uses 'went to' with 'views' — use the verb 'saw' or 'that I saw' (correct gerund/verb usage). Also redundant 'do prefer' simplified to 'prefer'. Use direct object after 'saw' rather than 'went to'.

× Yes there is building name Dadara.

✓ Yes, there is a building named Dadara.

Missing article 'a' and incorrect verb form 'name' should be past participle 'named' (There be issue: correct structure for stating existence with identification). Also add comma after 'Yes' for clarity.

× I have never been to that building but I have been to Kathmandu so I wanna go there and absorb the building so it can make me feel 1 tax completed.

✓ I have never been to that building, but I have been to Kathmandu, so I want to go there and see the building because I think it will make me feel accomplished.

Multiple issues: 'wanna' is informal slang; use 'want to'. 'Absorb the building' is incorrect collocation — use 'see' or 'visit'. '1 tax completed' is unclear; likely intended 'feel like I have completed something' or 'feel accomplished'. Also punctuation improvements. Use present perfect correctly for experiences: 'I have never been to that building' is fine; keep consistency and replace colloquial/unclear phrases.

× It is located in Kathmandu.

✓ It is located in Kathmandu.

No grammatical error beyond context; sentence is correct. Retained as is. (Included to acknowledge correctness.)

× I don't want to live in a tall building as it is very overcrowded, but I do prefer living in a small houses so everyone can feel warm and familiar towards each other.

✓ I don't want to live in a tall building because they are often very overcrowded, but I prefer living in a small house so everyone can feel warm and familiar with each other.

Several errors: 'as' can be replaced by 'because' for clarity. 'It is very overcrowded' mismatches singular/plural — 'they are often very overcrowded' when referring to tall buildings in general. 'a small houses' mixes article and plural; use 'a small house' or 'small houses'. 'familiar towards each other' is incorrect collocation; use 'familiar with each other'. Also simplify 'do prefer' to 'prefer'.