Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Избегайте повторений и несогласованных форм; стройте чёткие предложения: начните с прямого ответа, затем добавьте одно-два конкретных факта. Обратите внимание на порядок слов, согласование времен и артикли (a/the). Например, используйте простые конструкции: "Yes, there is/are..." и затем короткое объяснение.

Example: Yes, there is a new tall building in front of my house. It is a hospital, and it looks very attractive. Many people from our street can walk there without using a car.

Suggestion: Перестройте ответ логично: начните с прямого ответа (Yes/No), затем поясните причину и приведите конкретный пример. Избегайте смещения смысла (например, "cannot" вместо "can"). Следите за правильной лексикой ("buildings", "photos") и последовательностью мыслей.

Example: Yes, I sometimes take photos of buildings. My town is small and has few tall buildings, so I usually photograph skyscrapers when I visit larger cities like Tashkent.

Suggestion: Сформулируйте цель ясно и используйте правильные предлоги и формы слов. Начните с прямого ответа, затем добавьте конкретную причину и пример. Избегайте лишних повторов и исправьте ошибки: "want to" вместо "wanna", "in Dubai", "the tallest".

Example: Yes, I would like to visit Dubai in the future. It has many impressive skyscrapers, including the Burj Khalifa, which is the tallest building in the world, and I want to see it in person.

Suggestion: Сформируйте более связное и краткое объяснение: начните с прямого ответа, затем добавьте одно-два конкретных чувства или причины. Уберите повторы и исправьте порядок слов ("see the city from above").

Example: Yes, I would love to live in a tall building because you can see the whole city from above, which feels exciting and different from ground level.

× Yeah, definitely. Recently new building built in front of our house and that a building was a hospital, that very beautiful hospital that every people can go without a car in who living in our street and that hospital.

✓ Yeah, definitely. Recently a new building was built in front of our house; it is a hospital. It is a very beautiful hospital that people living on our street can go to without a car.

The original sentence has multiple sentence structure problems: missing articles ('a new building'), wrong verb order ('built' needs auxiliary to form passive: 'was built'), unclear pronoun use ('that a building was a hospital' -> split into two clauses), incorrect expression 'every people' (should be 'people'), and awkward relative clause 'in who living in our street' (should be 'living on our street' or 'who live on our street'). Also the preposition for destination is missing ('go to without a car'). Suggestions: divide into shorter sentences, add necessary articles and auxiliary verbs, use correct relative pronouns and prepositions, and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× Yeah, I really cannot take a photo from the nature or like tall buildings such as skyscrapers.

✓ Yeah, I really cannot take photos of nature or of tall buildings such as skyscrapers.

Problems: incorrect preposition 'from the nature' should be 'of nature'; 'take a photo' is better plural 'take photos' when speaking generally; unnecessary 'the' before 'nature'; using 'or like' is informal and unclear. Suggestion: use 'take photos of' and remove unnecessary articles.

× But you know, for example, Birkenhead isn't a big city.

✓ But you know, for example, Birkenhead is not a big city.

Contraction 'isn't' is grammatically acceptable, but in this context clarity is improved by using 'is not' in spoken-test answers; no major grammar error otherwise. Suggestion: use full form for clarity in formal speech.

× That's why we don't have enough tall buildings.

✓ That's why we don't have many tall buildings.

'Enough tall buildings' suggests a required quantity already met or not, but 'many tall buildings' is more natural when saying a place lacks tall buildings. Suggestion: use 'many' to indicate scarcity.

× But we when we are, when I go to the Tashkent, I take lots of tall pill. Take a photo, lots of pill.

✓ But when I go to Tashkent, I take lots of photos of tall buildings.

Multiple issues: extraneous words ('we when we are'), incorrect article 'the Tashkent' (cities usually omit 'the'), wrong word 'pill' likely intended 'building' or 'photo' and repeated fragments. Also sentence fragments 'Take a photo, lots of pill.' must be combined. Suggestion: remove extra phrases, use plural 'photos', and correct vocabulary.

× Yeah, I say yes.

✓ Yes, I would.

'I say yes' is unnatural. For answering 'Is there a building that you would like to visit?' a natural reply is 'Yes, I would.' or 'Yes, I would like to.' Suggestion: use appropriate modal expression to indicate willingness or desire.

× In the future I wanna go to the Dubai in Dubai new has numerous buildings and very tall buildings that you can see Burj Khalifa, the most taller building in the world and I wanna visit there in the my next future, next and future.

✓ In the future I want to go to Dubai. Dubai has numerous and very tall buildings, including the Burj Khalifa, the tallest building in the world, and I want to visit it in the near future.

Errors: informal 'wanna' should be 'want to'; unnecessary 'the' before 'Dubai'; word order and tense problems; 'in Dubai new has' is garbled; 'the most taller' is incorrect comparative ('tallest' is correct superlative); repeated awkward phrase 'my next future'. Suggestions: use 'want to', remove unnecessary articles, use 'tallest' for superlative, and 'in the near future' for a natural time expression.

× Yeah, it is my dream I can say because I really love tall buildings which you can see the city from the from the from the sky as it was another feeling seeing the city from the taller from the tall building.

✓ Yes, it's my dream because I really love tall buildings; you can see the city from the sky, and it feels different to see the city from a tall building.

Multiple problems: run-on sentence, repeated fragments ('from the from the from the'), awkward phrasing 'it is my dream I can say', incorrect comparative 'from the taller from the tall building'. Suggestions: split into shorter sentences, remove repetitions, use natural expressions like 'it feels different' and 'from a tall building', and use contractions carefully ('it's').