Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, ngắn gọn và ngữ pháp đúng. Hãy mở đầu bằng một câu chủ đề khẳng định (Yes/No + reason), sau đó bổ sung một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể. Tránh lỗi từ vựng như “first have” và cấu trúc sai. Ví dụ: nói rõ là không có tòa nhà cao vì bạn sống ở làng nhỏ, và có thể mô tả cảnh xung quanh (nhà thấp, nhiều cây).

Example: No, there are no tall buildings near my home because I live in a small village. Most houses here are one- or two-storey and the area is surrounded by farmland and trees.

Suggestion: Cần dùng cấu trúc đúng và dùng từ phù hợp. Bắt đầu bằng câu trực tiếp trả lời, sau đó giải thích sở thích và nêu ví dụ cụ thể (khi nào, ở đâu). Sử dụng các liên từ (because, when, especially) để mạch lạc. Tránh lặp từ như “beautiful beauties”.

Example: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing buildings because I like architectural details. I usually take photos when I visit big cities or travel, especially of old or modern landmarks.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc: nói rõ loại tòa nhà bạn muốn thăm, vì sao, và một vài chi tiết cụ thể. Dùng liên từ để nối ý và sắp xếp câu hoàn chỉnh. Tránh nói lặp và ngắt quãng (ví dụ: “in a smart building it will have. Many convenience”).

Example: I would like to visit a green smart building because it combines technology and nature. For example, such a building might have energy-saving systems, indoor gardens and rooftop trees, which I find very interesting.

Suggestion: Cần trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích cảm xúc và hoàn cảnh hiện tại. Sử dụng thì phù hợp (conditional) và từ vựng chính xác (e.g. “if I had enough money, I would choose to live…”). Nói thêm một lý do cụ thể cho quyết định và kết luận ngắn gọn.

Example: If I had enough money, I would choose to live in a tall apartment building because it might offer better views and facilities. However, for now I live in a small house and I am happy because my family lives nearby.

× Near my home is first have tall building because my home is in a small village so we can see any tall buildings.

✓ There are no tall buildings near my home because my home is in a small village, so we cannot see any tall buildings.

The original sentence has multiple sentence structure and verb issues: incorrect word order 'Near my home is first have tall building' and wrong determiner 'any' usage with positive verb. Use 'There are no' to state absence (There be issue, ID 3) and 'cannot' for inability. Combine clauses with a comma and use plural 'buildings' to agree with 'any'. Suggestions: Start with 'There are no tall buildings near my home' then add reason 'because my home is in a small village'. Replace 'can see any' with 'cannot see any'.

× Yes, of course, my hobby is take photo beauty, beautiful beauties is usually in a big city or when I traveling I will check for them.

✓ Yes, of course. My hobby is taking beautiful photos; beautiful buildings are usually in a big city, or when I travel I look for them.

Errors include incorrect verb form after 'is' (use gerund 'taking' for hobbies — Verb + -ing form, ID 8), incorrect noun choice 'photo beauty' and 'beautiful beauties' (word choice/adjective-noun order — Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs, ID 13), wrong verb 'is' with plural 'beautiful beauties' and incorrect tense/aspect 'when I traveling' (missing auxiliary or -ing — Present participle issue, ID 10). Correct by using 'taking beautiful photos', 'beautiful buildings', and 'when I travel I look for them'. Use simple present for habitual actions ('I look for').

× I love to visit a smart building or a green building in a smart building it will have. Many convenience and you know, building which has a lot of trees.

✓ I would love to visit a smart building or a green building. A smart building would have many conveniences, and it might include lots of trees.

The original contains run-on fragments and incorrect punctuation and noun forms: 'in a smart building it will have. Many convenience' is broken and 'convenience' should be plural 'conveniences' (plural issue, ID 1). Also awkward relative clause 'building which has a lot of trees' needs integration. Use conditional 'would' for desire/possibility (Modal verb usage, ID 4). Combine into two clear sentences: express desire 'I would love to visit', then describe features 'would have many conveniences and lots of trees'.

× I think if I have enough money I will chance to live in a tall building but now I am live in small building.

✓ I think if I have enough money I will have the chance to live in a tall building, but now I live in a small building.

Errors: 'will chance to live' is incorrect collocation; use 'will have the chance to' (Modal verb/phrase issue, ID 4). 'I am live' is wrong present tense form; use 'I live' (Present tense issue, ID 6). Also missing articles before 'small building' — should be 'a small building' (Article errors, ID 22). Combine clauses with commas for clarity. Suggestions: use 'I will have the chance to' and simple present 'I live'.

× I also feel happy because my family is beside me.

✓ I also feel happy because my family is with me.

'My family is beside me' is not the common collocation in English for emotional support; use 'with me' or 'beside me' can be physical but here 'with me' is more natural. This is a pronoun/preposition choice leading to awkward phrasing (Incorrect use of pronouns/prepositions, ID 12/11). Suggestion: say 'my family is with me' to express emotional presence.