Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more grammatically accurate, concise and specific. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct singular/plural and use appropriate prepositions.

Example: Yes. I live in the city, so there are many tall buildings near my home. For example, most of the high-rises are residential, but a few on the main street are office towers, which makes the area busy during weekdays.

Suggestion: Organize your answer: give a direct yes/no statement, then explain with clear reasons and examples. Fix tense and articles, and avoid fillers. Use linking words like 'but' and 'however' correctly.

Example: Sometimes. I don't usually photograph buildings in my hometown because they are ordinary and I see them every day. However, when I travel I often take photos of buildings in other countries because I find their architectural styles interesting and different.

Suggestion: Be specific about which buildings and give reasons. Use correct noun forms and linking words to make the answer coherent. Keep it concise: one topic sentence plus one specific supporting detail.

Example: Yes. I would love to visit historic buildings in Paris, such as Notre-Dame or the Louvre, because I am fascinated by European architecture and I have never seen these landmarks in person. I want to study their design and atmosphere up close.

Suggestion: Give a clear reasoned opinion with a concise explanation and correct word choice. Replace vague phrases with specific concerns and use linking words like 'because' to connect ideas. Keep to two or three sentences.

Example: No. I wouldn't like to live in a very tall building because it would mean living close to many strangers, which makes me uncomfortable. Also, high-rise living often feels less private than a small house, so I prefer a quieter neighborhood.

× Yes, there are lots of tall building in my home because I live in the city and I think it is a good place to live.

✓ Yes, there are lots of tall buildings near my home because I live in the city and I think it is a good place to live.

Use plural 'buildings' to match 'lots of'. Also replace 'in my home' with 'near my home' to answer location; 'in my home' is incorrect for tall buildings. Ensure noun number agrees with quantifier.

× And the buildings are different usually for residential area and some of them for business areas.

✓ The buildings are usually different: some are residential and some are for business.

The original has incorrect preposition and word order. Use 'usually' before verb phrase, and 'some are residential' instead of 'for residential area'. Use parallel structure 'some are residential and some are for business'.

× Yes, but in my hometown I did, I do not take any photos because it's just normal.

✓ Yes, I used to in my hometown, but now I do not take any photos because it's normal to me.

Mixes past and present incorrectly. Use 'used to' to indicate past habitual action. 'I did' is vague; 'used to' clarifies. Also 'it's just normal' -> 'it's normal to me' for clarity.

× I will sit it every day.

✓ I pass by it every day.

Original 'I will sit it' is ungrammatical. Probably intended meaning is 'I see it' or 'I pass by it every day'. Choose 'pass by' to fit context. Use present simple for habitual actions.

× However if I go travel and I will take photo for different their countries building 'cause I think it's different uh architecture styles.

✓ However, if I travel, I will take photos of buildings in different countries because I think their architectural styles are different.

Incorrect verb forms and word order. Use 'if I travel' (not 'go travel'), 'take photos of', 'in different countries', and 'architectural styles' as correct noun phrase. Remove redundant 'their' placement and adjust grammar for clarity.

× Yes, if I have a chance I would like to visit buildings in Paris or in Europe, because this is the various architects styles and I have never seen before, so I want to visit.

✓ Yes, if I have the chance, I would like to visit buildings in Paris or elsewhere in Europe, because there are various architectural styles that I have never seen before, so I want to visit.

Add definite article 'the chance'. Use 'there are' for existence. 'Various architectural styles' is correct; 'architects styles' is wrong. Use relative clause 'that I have never seen before'. Maintain conditional modal 'would like' for hypothetical desire.

× No, I don't want to live in the tall building because it means I need to layout a lot of live inside and I need to interact with strangers, but I don't want to communicate with the people who I don't know and it is better.

✓ No, I don't want to live in a tall building because it would mean I need to share living spaces with many people and interact with strangers, and I don't want to communicate with people I don't know.

Multiple errors: 'the tall building' -> 'a tall building'; 'it means I need to layout a lot of live inside' is incorrect phrasing — 'share living spaces' conveys meaning. Use conditional 'would mean' to match hypothetical. Remove redundant 'the people who' and extra 'and it is better.' Ensure verb forms agree with subjects.