Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Говорите более прямо и логично: начните с короткого ответа, затем добавьте одну-две конкретные детали. Избегайте лишних или непонятных слов (например, "Stage"). Упорядочивайте мысль — сначала местоположение, затем число этажей или тип зданий.

Example: No, there aren’t tall buildings near my home. I live in a residential area called Mahalia where most buildings are two-storey houses, so the skyline is quite low.

Suggestion: Дайте короткий прямой ответ и затем конкретный пример. Используйте связки (for example, because) и исправляйте повторы. Уточните частоту и причину, чтобы ответ был информативнее.

Example: Not often — I rarely photograph buildings. However, if I see a very tall or unusual building, I’ll take a photo to remember it, because I find its height and design impressive.

Suggestion: Начните с прямого ответа о желании посетить здание и затем дайте конкретные детали о прошлом опыте. Избегайте тавтологии (например, "very amazing"). Используйте связки (when, because, so) и точные фразы о впечатлениях.

Example: Yes, I would love to visit the Burj Khalifa again. I went there before and reached the observation deck; the view from the top was breathtaking, especially at sunset, which made the visit unforgettable.

Suggestion: Начните с краткого ответа, затем объясните причину и приведите конкретный пример. Исправьте ошибки в грамматике и выборе слов (leave→live, panoramic views on→panoramic views of). Не используйте повторов; структурируйте ответ логично.

Example: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because I enjoy panoramic views of the city. For example, my cousin lives on the tenth floor and when I visit I love looking out over the streets and skyline.

× No, there are no buildings next to my house as I live in Mahalia where there are only houses where people live there.

✓ No, there are no buildings next to my house because I live in Mahalia, where there are only houses.

The sentence uses redundant and incorrect prepositions and phrasing: 'as' is acceptable but 'because' is clearer; 'where people live there' is redundant because 'where' already indicates location. Remove redundant words and add a comma before 'where' to link clauses correctly. Also 'Mahalia' should be followed by a comma before the relative clause. Suggestion: Use concise relative clauses and avoid repeating location indicators.

× Exactly, no more than two. Stage.

✓ Exactly; there are no more than two-story houses.

The fragment 'Stage' is unclear and likely a mistranscription. The sentence 'Exactly, no more than two' is a fragment lacking a clear subject and verb. Recast to a full sentence: 'there are no more than two-story houses' or 'they are no more than two stories high.' Ensure subject-verb presence and clarify meaning.

× I barely take photos of the buildings but if it is the very high build building I will take a photo so remember it later and and look at it how high it was.

✓ I rarely take photos of buildings, but if it is a very tall building I will take a photo so I can remember how tall it was.

Incorrect article usage ('the buildings') and wrong word forms ('very high build building'). Use 'rarely' instead of 'barely' for frequency. 'A very tall building' is the correct noun phrase. Add 'I can' to express purpose. Remove duplicated 'and'. Use past participle 'tall' adjective properly. Suggestion: Use correct articles ('a' for nonspecific) and correct adjective order.

× I barely take photos of the buildings but if it is the very high build building I will take a photo so remember it later and and look at it how high it was.

✓ I rarely take photos of buildings, but if it is a very tall building I will take a photo so I can remember how tall it was.

The clause 'remember it later' is missing the subject and auxiliary to express intent. Use 'so I can remember' to correctly form the purpose with appropriate verb phrase. Also correct 'was' to 'it was' placed after 'how tall' to complete the clause.

× I visited building called Burj Khalifa.

✓ I visited the building called the Burj Khalifa.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'building' and before the proper name. Use 'the building called the Burj Khalifa' or simply 'I visited the Burj Khalifa.' Proper nouns that are unique buildings usually take 'the'.

× It is the highest building around the world and I would like to visit it again as it was very amazing to visit it.

✓ It is the tallest building in the world and I would like to visit it again because it was amazing.

Use 'tallest' (superlative adjective) rather than 'highest' in this context, and 'in the world' is the correct prepositional phrase. 'Very amazing' is informal and redundant; 'amazing' suffices. Replace 'as' with 'because' for clear causal meaning.

× It was so high I was most I was in the top of this building and the view was amazing.

✓ It was so high; I was at the top of the building and the view was amazing.

The original has repetition and incorrect preposition 'in the top'. Use 'at the top' to indicate location. Remove 'most I was' which is ungrammatical. Ensure past tense consistency and clear clause separation with a semicolon or conjunction.

× Yes, I would like to leave in the tall building as I like a panoramic views on the town and it makes me feel like I'm flying and my cousin lives on the 10th floor of the building when I visit him.

✓ Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because I like panoramic views of the town; it makes me feel like I'm flying, and my cousin lives on the 10th floor of a building I visit.

Verb 'leave' is incorrect; should be 'live'. 'A panoramic views' mixes article with plural noun—use 'panoramic views' without 'a' or 'a panoramic view'. Use preposition 'of' not 'on'. Sentence is long—use punctuation to separate ideas. Maintain verb forms and subject-verb agreement. Suggestion: Use 'live' not 'leave' and 'views of'.

× I live mostly. I love the views on the city.

✓ I mostly live there. I love the views of the city.

'I live mostly' is ambiguous; 'I mostly live there' clarifies. 'Views on the city' is incorrect preposition—use 'views of the city.' Keep adverb placement near the verb it modifies.