Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and add one specific detail. Use linking words if needed.

Example: Yes. I live in Chandigarh, where there are several tall residential and commercial buildings. For example, the sectors near my university have modern high-rises with shops on the ground floor.

Suggestion: Use correct tense and smoother phrasing. Give one specific example and a reason why you photograph buildings. Keep it under five sentences and avoid repetition.

Example: Yes, I often photograph impressive buildings because I enjoy architecture. For instance, when I visited Dubai, I took many photos of the Burj Khalifa to capture its height and unique design.

Suggestion: Make a clear, grammatical statement and add a specific reason. Use linking words to explain why you want to visit. Keep it concise.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit the Burj Khalifa because it is the tallest building in the world and offers panoramic views from the observation deck.

Suggestion: Clarify your idea and use correct tense and vocabulary. State directly whether you want to live there, give one concrete reason, and avoid unclear phrases like 'field experience'.

Example: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because I am curious about the view and the lifestyle. For example, living on a high floor would give me quiet surroundings and a great view of the city.

× Yes, there are tall buildings near my home usually.

✓ Yes, there are usually tall buildings near my home.

Word order error with adverb 'usually'. In English, frequency adverbs (usually) typically come before the main verb or after the auxiliary. Moving 'usually' before 'tall buildings' (or before 'are') produces a natural sentence: 'There are usually tall buildings near my home.' Alternatively, placing it before 'are' is also acceptable: 'Usually, there are tall buildings near my home.'

× I live in Chandigarh city.

✓ I live in the city of Chandigarh.

'Chandigarh city' is unnatural in English. Use 'the city of Chandigarh' or simply 'Chandigarh'. This corrects article and word order to sound natural.

× There are very tall buildings.

✓ There are very tall buildings there.

Sentence is grammatically correct but sounds abrupt; adding 'there' clarifies location. This matches present-tense description of surroundings.

× Yes, I take the pictures of huge buildings, for example Burj Khalifa, the largest building in the world.

✓ Yes, I take pictures of huge buildings, for example the Burj Khalifa, the tallest building in the world.

Remove unnecessary article 'the' before 'pictures' when speaking generally: 'take pictures' not 'take the pictures'. Use the definite article 'the' before a unique landmark 'Burj Khalifa'. 'Largest' is less natural for height; use 'tallest' for height comparison.

× When I visited Dubai, I take lot of picture with that building.

✓ When I visited Dubai, I took a lot of pictures with that building.

Tense error: main clause describes a past event 'When I visited Dubai', so the action should be in the past tense 'took'. Also correct quantity phrase: 'a lot of pictures' and use plural 'pictures'. Add preposition 'of' not needed; use 'with that building' or 'in front of that building'.

× Yes, that pose Burj Khalifa old say I want to visit that building.

✓ Yes, that is the Burj Khalifa, and I would like to visit that building.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Reconstructed to identify the building ('that is the Burj Khalifa') and express desire politely using modal 'would like'. This fixes word order and sentence structure errors.

× It is the world largest building.

✓ It is the world's largest building.

Missing possessive apostrophe: use 'world's' to mean 'the largest building in the world'. Also 'largest' is fine here when using 'in the world' or 'world's largest'.

× Yes, but it was my dream to live in tall building.

✓ Yes, but it has been my dream to live in a tall building.

Tense and article issues: if the dream continues to present, present perfect 'has been' is appropriate. Also include indefinite article 'a' before 'tall building'. Alternatively, 'it was my dream' is acceptable if referring to a past dream no longer held.

× I want to see the experience and the field experience how the was.

✓ I want to have the experience of living there and to see what it is like.

Original is ungrammatical and unclear. Rewritten to clearly express desire to experience living in a tall building: 'have the experience of living there' and 'see what it is like'. This corrects sentence structure and meaning.