Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be clear, grammatically correct and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence (Yes/No + brief statement), then add one or two specific details using linking words. Correct subject-verb agreement and remove filler words like “uh” and “umm.”

Example: Yes. My neighborhood is surrounded by tall buildings, including my own apartment block. For example, most buildings nearby are over ten stories high, which makes the area feel quite urban and busy.

Suggestion: Answer directly and organize sentences logically. Begin with a clear statement about whether you take photos, then give specific occasions or reasons using linking words (for example, sometimes, when). Avoid repetition and unclear phrases.

Example: Yes, I often take photos of buildings. For example, when I have free time I go outside or sit by my window to photograph nearby architecture because I like capturing interesting shapes and light.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer naming the building or place and explain why you want to visit with specific details. Use linking words (because, for example) and correct vocabulary (e.g., ‘there are’ not ‘hair’). Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit the building with a public swimming pool in front of it because it has a lovely garden. For example, the area has many trees and plants, and I enjoy relaxing by the pool and walking through the greenery.

Suggestion: Start with a clear topic sentence and give specific reasons using linking words (because, so). Correct grammar (e.g., ‘I live on the 20th floor’), avoid fillers and explain one or two concrete advantages of tall buildings.

Example: Yes, I prefer living in a tall building because I live on the 20th floor and enjoy the views. For example, it is quieter higher up and I feel safer; also, the building has good facilities which make everyday life easier.

× Is there lots of tall building?

✓ Are there lots of tall buildings?

Subject-verb agreement with existential 'there be': use plural 'are' for plural noun 'lots of tall buildings', and plural form 'buildings'. Use 'Are there' to ask about existence of multiple items.

× Uh, it's around areas.

✓ They are around the area.

The original is vague and ungrammatical. Use a clear subject 'They' (referring to buildings) and singular 'area' with 'around' to form a correct sentence.

× Uh, it's all surrounded by tall buildings.

✓ It is surrounded by tall buildings.

Redundant 'all' and contraction 'it's' can be acceptable but ensure subject 'it' clearly refers to 'my neighborhood' or 'the place'. Use 'It is surrounded by tall buildings.' for clarity.

× Even in a my home building are also tall.

✓ Even my home building is also tall.

Remove the extra article 'a' and use singular verb 'is' to agree with the singular subject 'building'. Position of 'also' should be after the verb or before 'tall' as appropriate.

× Is I take a lot of photos of my buildings, umm, when I free, I go to the outside of my home and take some of pictures.

✓ I take a lot of photos of buildings; when I am free, I go outside my home and take some pictures.

Do not use 'Is' at sentence start. Use correct present simple 'I take'. Insert the copula 'am' for 'when I am free'. Use 'go outside' (no 'to the') and 'take some pictures' (correct noun phrase).

× Sometimes I sit in, sit down at my window.

✓ Sometimes I sit at my window and look out.

Use 'sit at the window' or 'sit by the window' not 'sit in, sit down at'. Combine phrases into a natural expression; 'look out' clarifies action.

× Umm, I can share the fuse my, uh, views.

✓ I can share my views.

Remove filler words and extra fragments. The word 'fuse' seems unintended; 'share my views' is the clear correct phrase.

× Actually, hair have a lot of building, but I like to visit, uh, a place it's like a swimming pool, uh, in front side of the building here, umm, have lots of plants, trees.

✓ Actually, here we have a lot of buildings, but I like to visit a place that has a swimming pool in front of the building and lots of plants and trees.

Correct pronoun/location phrase 'here we have'. Use relative clause 'that has' for the place. 'In front side of' is incorrect; use 'in front of'. Use plural 'plants and trees'.

× So I really enjoy that place.

✓ So I really enjoy that place.

This sentence is grammatically correct in present simple to express a general preference; no change needed.

× Yes, I like to live in a tall building.

✓ Yes, I like living in a tall building.

Both 'like to live' and 'like living' are acceptable; 'like living' is more natural for expressing preference. No verb agreement error here; change is stylistic.

× Even my current feeling is UH-20 floors.

✓ Currently, my building has 20 floors.

'Current feeling' is incorrect for describing a building's height. Use 'my building has 20 floors' to convey the meaning. Avoid filler 'UH'.

× So currently I live in in a tall building because of I prefer this uh, it's way easy to exit.

✓ So currently I live in a tall building because I prefer it; it's much easier to go out.

Remove duplicate 'in', fix clause order 'because I prefer it', and rephrase 'way easy to exit' to 'much easier to go out' for natural English. Avoid filler 'uh'.