Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then give one or two specific supporting details (e.g., number, location, purpose). Avoid tense errors and unclear phrases. Use linking words like 'also' or 'for example' to connect details.

Example: Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home. For example, a cluster of office towers and apartment blocks lines the main avenue, and most buildings around the central park are at least ten storeys high.

Suggestion: Use present simple to describe habits and be specific about reasons. Give one clear reason and one example. Avoid awkward phrases ('make snap', 'used to a trip'). Link ideas with 'because' or 'so'.

Example: Yes, I often take photos of buildings when I go out. I take pictures because I enjoy the architecture, and I usually share them with my family and friends to show interesting landmarks.

Suggestion: Answer directly and use correct tense. Name the building and give two specific reasons (architecture, history, exhibits). Use linking phrases like 'because' and 'for example'. Keep it to two or three sentences.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit the old town hall in my hometown because of its unique colonial architecture and historical exhibits. I have not seen the interior yet, and I think a guided tour would be interesting.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence and a concise, natural reason. Avoid repetitive phrases and incorrect expressions ('higher length'). You can add one supporting detail about a practical concern (e.g., safety, fear of heights) and a linking word like 'because' or 'so'.

Example: No, I would not like to live in a tall building because I am afraid of heights. Also, I feel safer and more comfortable in low-rise houses where I can easily reach the ground.

× Certainly yes, as it had been many years since I have lived in a city where several types of buildings are there and having their own category of space and size.

✓ Certainly yes, as it has been many years since I have lived in a city with many types of buildings that have their own sizes and categories.

Mixes past perfect 'had been' with present perfect 'have lived' and has awkward structure. Use present perfect 'has been' with 'since' to indicate time until now. Reduce redundancy: 'there are' is unnecessary; use a relative clause 'that have'. Suggestion: use consistent tense (has been/have lived) and simpler clause order.

× So majority of buildings are of tall size.

✓ So the majority of buildings are tall.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'majority' and awkward noun phrase 'of tall size.' Use plural adjective 'tall' with 'buildings.' Suggestion: say 'the majority of buildings are tall.'

× Whether the other numbers of buildings are shot in my city?

✓ Are other types of buildings short in my city?

Unclear wording: 'Whether' and 'numbers' misused, and 'shot' is incorrect word. Likely intended to ask if other buildings are short. Rephrase as a direct question 'Are other types of buildings short in my city?' Suggestion: use 'Are' + subject + adjective for yes/no question.

× Yes, when I used to a trip outside from my apartment, I like to make snap for sending many people just to my family members or maybe to my friends.

✓ Yes, when I used to go on trips from my apartment, I liked to take snaps to send to my family members or friends.

Incorrect phrase 'used to a trip' and tense inconsistency: 'used to' requires base verb 'go.' 'Like' should match past habitual 'liked' if referring to past habit, and 'make snap' should be 'take snaps.' Also 'for sending many people' is wrong; use 'to send to'. Suggestion: use 'used to go on trips' and 'take snaps to send to'.

× I used to take pictures of big buildings which also create a good environment for me.

✓ I used to take pictures of big buildings, which also created a pleasant atmosphere for me.

Tense inconsistency: earlier clause past habitual 'used to' so relative clause should be past 'created.' 'Good environment' is unnatural here; 'pleasant atmosphere' fits better. Also add comma before nonrestrictive clause. Suggestion: keep tense consistent and choose appropriate collocations.

× Yes, it have been since many years I didn't visit one building which is considered now a big building of our own hometown and it is because of its architecture and historical types of making it which creates a popular.

✓ Yes, it has been many years since I visited the building in our hometown that is now considered a big landmark because of its architecture and history, and I would like to visit it.

Multiple errors: 'it have been' should be 'it has been'; 'since many years I didn't visit' is incorrect structure—use 'many years since I visited.' 'One building' and 'big building of our own hometown' wordy; use 'the building in our hometown that is now considered a big landmark.' 'Historical types of making it which creates a popular' is incorrect; rephrase to 'because of its architecture and history.' Also sentence fragment and unclear ending—add desire to visit. Suggestion: use 'it has been many years since I visited' and simplify descriptions.

× But I want to visit in my coming.

✓ But I want to visit it in the near future.

'Visit in my coming' is incorrect. Use 'visit it' and 'in the near future' for intended future action. Ensure object 'it' refers to the building. Suggestion: use natural temporal phrase 'in the near future'.

× Certainly no, because from my childhood I was a child who was more scared of higher length of buildings and from jumping a higher gap of walls.

✓ Certainly not, because since childhood I have been scared of tall buildings and of jumping from high walls.

'Certainly no' should be 'Certainly not' in response. Redundant 'I was a child who was' is awkward; use 'since childhood I have been.' 'Higher length of buildings' incorrect—use 'tall buildings.' 'Jumping a higher gap of walls' should be 'jumping from high walls.' Tense: use present perfect 'have been' for a lasting state. Suggestion: simplify and use correct prepositions 'from' with 'jumping'.

× So I don't like to live in tall buildings.

✓ So I don't want to live in tall buildings.

'Don't like to live' is acceptable but 'don't want to live' better conveys preference. Maintain simple present for general preference. Also could be 'I would not like to live...' depending on formality. Suggestion: use 'don't want to live' to express preference clearly.