Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct, correct grammar and avoid irrelevant details. Start with a clear topic sentence, use correct tense and numbers, and provide one specific detail using a linking word. For example, say whether there are tall buildings, how tall they are, and where they are located relative to your home.

Example: Yes. There are several tall buildings near my home in Uttarakhand; most are about five or six storeys high. For example, a new apartment complex was built next to my market last year, which changed the skyline of my neighborhood.

Suggestion: Avoid repetition and fix grammar and word choice. Begin with a concise topic sentence, then give a specific reason and a short example using a linking word such as 'because' or 'for example.' Keep it to two or three sentences.

Example: Yes, I sometimes photograph buildings because I find their architecture eye-catching. For example, I often take pictures of the ornate facades downtown when I go for a walk.

Suggestion: Reduce hesitations and be more specific. State the building clearly, explain why you want to visit it, and give one concrete detail (location, feature or activity). Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' to make the answer coherent.

Example: Yes. I would like to visit Khan Tower because it is one of the tallest buildings in my city and has a viewing deck. For example, I want to go up to the viewing deck to see panoramic views of the valley.

Suggestion: Make the response grammatically correct and concise. Give a clear reason and one supporting detail or consequence, using linking words like 'because' and 'for instance.' Avoid repeating the same phrase.

Example: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because the views are attractive and peaceful. For instance, from a high-floor balcony I could see the whole city and enjoy quieter surroundings.

× Yeah, I lived in Uttarakhand.

✓ Yeah, I live in Uttarakhand.

The student is describing a current situation (where they live now), so present tense is required. Using past tense 'lived' implies they no longer live there. Use present simple 'live' for habitual or current facts.

× Right now there are a lot of buildings near my home.

✓ Right now there are a lot of buildings near my home.

This sentence is grammatically correct for 'there is/are' structure and plural noun agreement, so no change is needed.

× Especially these buildings are up to 5 or $6.

✓ Especially these buildings are up to five or six stories high.

The original uses a dollar sign and an unclear structure. Replace '$6' with 'six' and specify 'stories high' to indicate height. Use words for numbers under ten in speech and provide clear quantifier 'up to' with units.

× Yeah, sometimes I take photos of these buildings cause the architecture of these buildings are too eye-catching and I like to take this type of picture of of this building.

✓ Yeah, sometimes I take photos of these buildings because the architecture of these buildings is very eye-catching, and I like to take this type of picture of these buildings.

The subject 'architecture' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' not 'are' (subject-verb agreement). Also replace 'cause' with 'because' for formality, remove duplicate 'of', and change 'too eye-catching' to 'very eye-catching' for naturalness. Use plural 'buildings' consistently.

× Yes, uh, there are a Khan tower, which is very high.

✓ Yes, uh, there is a Khan Tower, which is very high.

Use 'there is' for singular nouns (there are is for plurals). Also use the article correctly: 'a Khan tower' is awkward if the tower has a name; use capitalized proper noun 'Khan Tower' without 'a' if it is a specific name, or 'a Khan tower' only if describing a type. Here 'there is' matches singular existence.

× So sometimes, uh, I, I would like to go, uh, I'd, I'd like to visit this building, umm, as well as this building architecture or too much eye-catching.

✓ So sometimes I would like to visit this building because its architecture is very eye-catching.

The original is repetitive and ungrammatical. Combine ideas into a clear sentence: use 'would like to visit' for desire, and express cause with 'because'. 'This building architecture or too much eye-catching' is incorrect—use 'its architecture is very eye-catching'.

× So I visit sometimes.

✓ So I visit sometimes.

The sentence is grammatically acceptable in present simple to indicate habitual action, but for natural speech 'I visit it sometimes' would be clearer by adding the object 'it'.

× Yes, I want to live in a tall building because the front view from a tall building are too much eye-catching and I enjoy it, that's why I prefer it to live in a tall building.

✓ Yes, I want to live in a tall building because the front view from a tall building is very eye-catching and I enjoy it; that's why I prefer to live in a tall building.

Subject-verb agreement: 'front view' is singular so use 'is' not 'are'. 'Too much eye-catching' is incorrect collocation—use 'very eye-catching'. Also the phrase 'prefer it to live in' is incorrect; use 'prefer to live in'. Punctuation and sentence structure improved for clarity.