Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and organize your answer: start with a clear topic sentence, then give specific supporting details. Avoid hesitation and grammatical errors (e.g., “help me” → “helps me”; “makes to see” → “lets me see”). Use one or two linking words to connect ideas (e.g., “because” or “so”).

Example: Yes. I live in a 12-storey building and my flat is on the tenth floor. Because I live so high, I have great views of the surrounding parks and the city skyline, especially at night when the lights are on. This makes the apartment feel bright and pleasant.

Suggestion: Answer directly and avoid unrelated words. Say whether you take photos and give specific conditions and reasons. Correct grammar (e.g., “so much” → “so many”; “I like to see food” seems irrelevant). Use linking words like “but” or “for example.”

Example: Not always, but I do take photos when I visit modern cities with impressive skyscrapers. For example, when I travel to places like Dubai or Singapore, I photograph the architecture because I admire the design and scale of the buildings.

Suggestion: Clarify which building you mean and correct confusing phrases. Begin with a direct statement naming the building, then give two specific reasons and a linking word (e.g., “because” or “and”). Avoid unrelated fragments like “whenever I your child.”

Example: Yes. I would love to visit the Petronas Twin Towers in Malaysia because I have heard a lot about their architecture and height. If I visit, I would go up to the observation deck and take photos of the towers and the park below.

Suggestion: Start with a clear topic sentence and then give concise, specific reasons using correct grammar (e.g., “buildings have” not “building have”; “give me a few pleasure” → “give me pleasure”). Use linking words like “also” and avoid repetition of the same idea.

Example: Yes, I would. Living in a tall building offers panoramic views of the city, which I enjoy at sunrise and sunset. Also, being higher up feels quieter and gives me a pleasant sense of space.

× My house is a 12 Storey building and I live on the 10th floor.

✓ My house is a 12-storey building and I live on the 10th floor.

Use a hyphenated compound adjective '12-storey' before a noun; this is not a pluralization issue but fits under singular/plural formatting of numeric adjective. Also 'Storey' should be lowercase 'storey'. Suggestion: Use hyphen for compound numerals modifying nouns and use correct lowercase for common nouns.

× This kind of high rise building help me to see the beauty of nature and it makes to see the uh, night view of a city so beautifully that it really happened.

✓ This kind of high-rise building helps me see the beauty of nature and allows me to enjoy the city's night view so beautifully.

Subject 'This kind of high-rise building' is singular so verb must be 'helps' not 'help' (subject-verb agreement). Remove unnecessary 'to' after 'helps me' and replace 'it makes to see' with 'allows me to enjoy' for natural expression. Remove 'that it really happened' as it is ungrammatical and redundant. Suggestion: Match singular subjects with singular verbs and simplify verb phrases to 'help/allow someone to do something'.

× Not always, but if I go to a different city or newer cities where there are so much high rise buildings like Dubai or Singapore, I like to see food.

✓ Not always, but if I go to a different city or to newer cities where there are so many high-rise buildings like Dubai or Singapore, I like to take photos of them.

'So much' is used with uncountable nouns; use 'so many' for countable 'buildings'. Also 'high rise' should be hyphenated as 'high-rise'. The original sentence says 'I like to see food' which is likely incorrect in context; corrected to 'take photos of them' to match the question about photos of buildings. Suggestion: Use 'so many' with plural countable nouns and ensure the verb phrase matches the intended meaning.

× Yes, I have a a fascination to visit to winter in Malaysia whenever I your child.

✓ Yes, I am fascinated to visit Malaysia in winter whenever I have the chance.

The original sentence has multiple structural errors and nonsensical fragments ('visit to winter', 'whenever I your child'). Recast to a clear structure: 'I am fascinated to visit Malaysia in winter whenever I have the chance.' Use 'am fascinated' instead of 'have a fascination to' for natural English. Suggestion: Keep subject-verb-object order and use idiomatic expressions like 'am fascinated to' or 'have a fascination with' and 'have the chance'.

× I have heard about the building so much that I have a dream to visit there and if I get a chance to visit, I'll definitely take the chance and visit there.

✓ I have heard so much about the building that I dream of visiting it, and if I get the chance, I'll definitely go.

Use 'about the building' then 'visit it' rather than 'visit there'. Replace 'have a dream to visit there' with 'dream of visiting it'. 'Take the chance' is redundant; use 'get the chance' or 'take the opportunity'. Suggestion: Use correct pronouns for places ('visit it' or 'visit there' depending on context), prefer 'dream of visiting' and avoid repetition.

× Also, I would like to take photos with twin towers.

✓ Also, I would like to take photos with the Twin Towers.

Use definite article 'the' with named landmarks 'the Twin Towers'. Capitalize proper noun 'Twin Towers'. If referring to one pair, keep plural 'Towers' as proper noun. Suggestion: Use 'the' before specific landmarks and capitalize proper names.

× Definitely because tall building have a good panoramic view and also give us a scenic view of a city.

✓ Definitely, because tall buildings have a good panoramic view and also give us a scenic view of the city.

Subject 'tall buildings' is plural so 'have' and 'give' are correct; original had 'building' singular with plural verbs—mismatch. Make noun plural to match 'have' and 'give'. Also add 'the' before 'city' if referring to the city in general and optionally pluralize 'views' or keep singular 'view'. Suggestion: Ensure noun number matches verb form: singular subject with singular verb, plural subject with plural verb.

× Whenever it is night or sunset time or sunrise time, the panoramic view or outstanding skyline view can give me a few pleasure.

✓ Whenever it is night, sunset, or sunrise, the panoramic or skyline view gives me a lot of pleasure.

'A few pleasure' is ungrammatical; 'pleasure' is uncountable so use 'a lot of pleasure' or 'much pleasure'. Also simplify 'night or sunset time or sunrise time' to 'night, sunset, or sunrise' and use singular verb 'gives' to agree with singular 'view'. Suggestion: Use correct quantifiers with uncountable nouns ('much', 'a lot of') and simplify time expressions.