Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make your reply clearer and more natural. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give two specific details using linking words. Correct names and grammar, avoid repetition, and keep to 2–4 sentences.

Example: Yes. There are two tall buildings in my hometown of Megara. The first is Address Tower, where a well-known actor lives, and the second is a tall building that houses a Starbucks Reserve. Both buildings are local landmarks and easy to spot from the main road.

Suggestion: Answer directly and give a clear recent example. Use correct verb tenses and precise vocabulary instead of unclear words. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and use linking words like “for example” or “recently”.

Example: Yes, I often take photos of interesting buildings. Recently, for example, I photographed the Starbucks Reserve in my city because of its unique design and interior, and I shared the photo on social media.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence naming the building, then add specific reasons why you want to visit using linking words like “because” or “because of”. Correct grammar for locations and experiences and avoid confusing statements.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit the Tokyo Skytree in Japan because I have never been there. I have seen photos from friends in France and I heard the panoramic views of Tokyo are amazing, so I would love to see the city from the observation deck.

Suggestion: Give a clear opinion and support it with logical reasons. Use linking words such as “because” or “so” and correct word choice (e.g., “expensive” not “high price”). Avoid unrelated or unclear phrases about accents or falling.

Example: No, I wouldn't like to live in a tall building because they are usually more expensive and I prefer quieter, low-rise neighborhoods. I also worry about safety and would feel more comfortable living closer to the ground.

× Yes they are.

✓ Yes, there are.

The phrase answers a question about existence of tall buildings; 'they are' is not the correct response. Use 'there are' to indicate existence of plural items. Also add a comma after 'Yes' for natural speech punctuation.

× There are two tall buildings in my hometown in Megara.

✓ There are two tall buildings in my hometown, Megara.

The original is understandable but 'in my hometown in Megara' is awkward. Use a comma and the place name as apposition: 'my hometown, Megara.' No article change needed.

× 1 is named address tower, very famous actor lives there.

✓ The first is called Address Tower; a very famous actor lives there.

Use 'The first' to refer to the first building, 'called' or 'named' with a proper noun capitalized. Add an article 'a' before 'very famous actor.' Use punctuation to join clauses correctly.

× And 2nd is Starbucks.

✓ The second is Starbucks.

Use 'The second' rather than '2nd' in spoken/formal sentence. Include the definite article 'The' when listing items.

× Starbucks named Starbucks resident.

✓ Starbucks is called 'Starbucks Reserve' or 'the Starbucks Reserve residence'.

The original is ungrammatical and unclear. Use 'is called' to give a name. If referring to a specific branch or residence, use a clear noun phrase such as 'the Starbucks Reserve residence.' Capitalize proper names.

× This is a famous.

✓ This is famous.

'Famous' is an adjective that does not need the indefinite article 'a' when used predicatively. Drop 'a' to form 'This is famous.' Or be specific: 'This is a famous building.'

× Yes, I take take a picture of variance.

✓ Yes, I take pictures of various buildings.

The original repeats 'take' and uses 'variance' incorrectly. Use the simple present 'take' for habitual action and plural 'pictures' and adjective 'various' before 'buildings.'

× Recently I take I took the picture of Starbucks Reserve, Reserve.

✓ Recently I took a picture of the Starbucks Reserve.

Use past simple 'took' for a completed recent action. Remove repetition and use the article 'the' before 'Starbucks Reserve.'

× Starbucks Reserve is one of the famous Starbucks.

✓ Starbucks Reserve is one of the famous Starbucks locations.

Add 'locations' to make the sentence grammatical and clear. 'One of the famous Starbucks' is incomplete without a noun.

× It is only 6 berries.

✓ It is only 6 meters high. (or 'It only costs 6 dollars' depending on intended meaning)

'Berries' is likely a wrong word. Determine intended unit: if referring to height, use 'meters'; if price, use appropriate currency. Use numerals in speech representation only if clear.

× Yes I have I want to be I want to visit UMM Tokyo Sky three.

✓ Yes, I want to visit Tokyo Skytree.

The original has repetitions and a garbled name. Remove extra phrases and use the correct proper noun 'Tokyo Skytree.' 'I want to visit' is the correct simple present to express desire.

× I have never been to there.

✓ I have never been there.

Use 'been there' not 'been to there.' 'Been to' and 'there' are redundant together; drop 'to.'

× I heard it was it is in this in Japan and view is beautiful.

✓ I heard it is in Japan and the view is beautiful.

Simplify to 'I heard it is in Japan' using present tense reported fact. Add 'the' before 'view' and remove extra words. If referring to past hearing, 'I heard it was in Japan' is possible but inconsistent; present 'is' suits facts.

× I had it from France.

✓ I heard about it from France.

'I had it from France' is ungrammatical. Use 'heard about it from France' to indicate source of information while in France.

× I don't think so.

✓ I don't think so.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable as an answer; no change needed.

× Even now I'm living in north tourist buildings because I'm afraid of high price.

✓ Right now I'm living in a low-rise apartment in the north because I can't afford high prices.

Original is unclear: 'north tourist buildings' and 'afraid of high price' are incorrect. Clarify intent: if meaning living in a less expensive area, say 'living in a low-rise apartment in the north' and 'can't afford high prices.' Use articles and appropriate adjectives.

× Price because of my accent.

✓ Prices are high because of my income. (or 'I can't afford higher prices because of my income')

The original 'Price because of my accent' is nonsensical. Likely speaker meant 'prices are high because of my income' or 'I can't pay high prices because of my income.' Replace 'accent' with 'income' or 'situation' and use full clause.

× That action is that breaking my arms because of falling.

✓ I'm afraid I'll break my arms if I fall.

Original is ungrammatical. Express fear with 'I'm afraid I'll' + base verb 'break' and conditional 'if I fall.' This is a clear, natural sentence.