Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Focus on grammatical accuracy, clarity and concise structure. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Correct common errors (use of articles, plurals, word order) and avoid filler sounds like "uh." Use linking words if adding details.

Example: Yes. There are several tall buildings near my home. For example, a large hospital and a few tall hotels dominate the skyline, especially along the main road.

Suggestion: Use a clear negative or affirmative statement first, then give a concise reason and one specific example. Fix verb forms and pronouns, and use linking words like "but" and "when" appropriately. Avoid repeating words.

Example: Normally I don't take photos of buildings, but it depends on the situation. When I find a building especially beautiful, I will photograph it and send the picture to my mother or friends to show them.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence naming the building, then add one or two specific reasons why you want to visit (history, view, architecture). Use correct article use and prepositions ("in Taiwan", "the Taipei 101").

Example: Yes. I would like to visit Taipei 101 in Taiwan because it is an iconic, very tall skyscraper. I want to see the observation deck for the panoramic city views and admire its unique design.

Suggestion: Begin with a clear direct answer, then give two specific reasons using linking words (for example, "because" and "so"). Correct vocabulary ("these days", "risk of earthquakes", "smaller house") and avoid unclear phrases like "should escape and learn."

Example: No, I wouldn't like to live in a tall building because there is a higher risk during disasters such as earthquakes. Therefore I prefer a smaller, low-rise house where I would feel safer and find evacuation easier.

× Yes, alone my home is have many building uh, for example is have the hospital or hotel that very tall in my in my country.

✓ Yes, near my home there are many buildings. For example, there is a hospital and a hotel that are very tall in my country.

Plural nouns and existence structure: 'building' should be plural 'buildings' when referring to many; 'there is/there are' is the correct existential construction and must agree with the plural subject: 'there are many buildings.' Also 'is have' is incorrect; use 'there are' or 'there is.' Use 'a hospital and a hotel' and make the verb agree: 'are very tall.' Suggestion: Use 'there is' for singular and 'there are' for plural and make nouns plural when needed.

× Normally I not take a photo of building but it depends on the situation.

✓ Normally I do not take photos of buildings, but it depends on the situation.

Negative formation and plurality: Use the auxiliary 'do' for present simple negatives: 'do not take.' 'Photo of building' should be plural when speaking generally: 'photos of buildings.' Suggestion: Use 'I do not' for present simple negatives and pluralize for general statements.

× When I see the building is beautiful or or we are a will take the photo to and send to my mom or my friend to show this.

✓ When I see a building that is beautiful, I or we will take a photo and send it to my mom or my friend to show them.

Multiple issues: subject-verb agreement and word order. Use 'a building that is beautiful' or 'a beautiful building.' 'We are a will' is incorrect; use 'I or we will.' 'Take the photo to' should be 'take a photo and send it.' Pronouns: 'send it to my mom or my friend to show them.' Suggestion: Keep simple future with 'will' after subject, use correct object pronouns and clear word order.

× Yes, I want to see the Taipei Yi Ling Yi in the Taiwan.

✓ Yes, I want to see Taipei 101 in Taiwan.

Articles and proper nouns: Do not use 'the' before most country names like 'Taiwan.' Also the building name was likely intended as 'Taipei 101'; proper names usually do not require an article. Remove unnecessary articles and use the correct proper noun. Suggestion: Use correct proper names and omit 'the' before country names.

× I think this building is very tall and beautiful.

✓ I think this building is very tall and beautiful.

This sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed. Keep the demonstrative 'this' with 'building' when referring to a specific building.

× No, I don't want to live in the tall building because in the recent day it's a some disaster like the earthquake and I see people who live in the tall building should escape and learn.

✓ No, I don't want to live in a tall building because recently there have been some disasters like earthquakes, and I think people who live in tall buildings should be able to evacuate and learn how to respond.

Articles and tense: Use 'a tall building' for non-specific singular. 'In the recent day' is incorrect; use 'recently.' 'It's a some disaster' is wrong; use 'there have been some disasters.' 'Earthquake' should be plural when speaking generally. 'Should escape and learn' is unclear; express ability/need: 'should be able to evacuate and learn how to respond.' Suggestion: Use 'recently' for recent events, use 'there have been' for plural past occurrences, and clarify verbs for intended meaning.

× In this situation, so I think it's good for me to live in the home that have a little bit.

✓ In this situation, I think it's better for me to live in a small house.

Plural and word choice: 'the home that have a little bit' is incorrect. 'Home' singular requires singular verb: 'that has.' However the intended meaning is likely 'a small house' or 'a house with fewer floors.' Rephrase to 'a small house.' Suggestion: Use clear adjectives ('small') and correct verb agreement ('has') if keeping relative clause.