Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 注意发音与用词准确性，避免重复与不必要的停顿；句子结构要更清晰，先给出直接回答，再补充细节。可以把“department”改为“apartment building”，并把“over 11th floors”改为“over eleven storeys/high”或“more than eleven floors”。同时减少填充词（如“umm”）并控制句子长度，最多不超过5句。

Example: Yes. I live in an apartment, and most of the nearby buildings are also apartment blocks. They are quite tall — each one has more than eleven floors, so the area feels densely built.

Suggestion: 回答时先直接回应频率或习惯，然后用一两句具体描述经历或原因，注意时态一致和细节具体化。避免模糊表达如“Only once I think”，改为“I only did once”或“I took photos once”。使用连接词（because, which made）使句子更流畅。

Example: Not often — I only photographed a building once. It was a foggy morning and the top floors were hidden in mist, which looked very impressive and made me want to capture the scene.

Suggestion: 要注意句子完整与语法正确，先给出直接回答，然后用简洁的原因支持。避免重复词（如“it it”）和语法错误（如“has many of my favorite games are from Nintendo”）。把信息分成两三句并用连接词（because, since, and）衔接。

Example: Yes, I would like to visit Nintendo’s headquarters. I love the company because many of my favourite games come from them, and I’d like to see where those games are developed.

Suggestion: 回答要简洁有条理：先给出偏好，然后说明1–2个具体原因。避免冗长重复（如多次提到正在住在高楼）和语法错误（“don't like living in a single floor”应为“don't like living on a high floor”或“in a flat”）。去掉多余结尾片段。

Example: No, I prefer a house with a backyard. I currently live in a high-rise and miss outdoor space, so a backyard would give me room to relax and enjoy fresh air.

× Yes, as I live in a department, the buildings nearby are also, umm, several departments and I think they're all like, over. 11th floors.

✓ Yes. I live in an apartment, and the nearby buildings are also apartments. I think they're all over eleven floors.

句子结构混乱并包含词汇错误。“department”应为“apartment（公寓）”。原句碎片多、标点使用不当，导致信息不连贯。建议拆分为短句，按逻辑先说明居住情况，再说明周围建筑，并把数字写法连贯（over eleven floors）。

× Only once I think, as it was a foggy day and the top of the building is covered by fog and it looks really impressive and fascinating.

✓ Only once, I think, because it was a foggy day and the top of the building was covered by fog; it looked really impressive and fascinating.

使用反映过去的情境，应使用过去时态。“is covered”不符合上下文，应改为“was covered”，同时“it looks”改为“it looked”。建议一致使用过去时描述过去的经历，句子可用分号或连词连接更清晰。

× Yes, I want to visit the headquarter of Nintendo and because it it is the game company which I love the most, has many of my favorite games are from Nintendo and.

✓ Yes, I want to visit Nintendo's headquarters because it is the game company I love the most; many of my favorite games are from Nintendo.

原句存在重复词（"it it"）、语序和从句结构错误，导致主句和从句不连贯。把“headquarter”改为复数“headquarters”，用所有格“Nintendo's”，并将原因从句和补充句子分开表达。建议避免重复词，注意从句与主句的衔接和动词位置。

× No, I would prefer a house with a backyard instead because I'm currently living in a tall building and I don't like living in a single floor and wish having a backyard would give me more space for outdoors and relax and I was.

✓ No. I would prefer a house with a backyard because I'm currently living in a tall building and I don't like living on a single floor. I wish having a backyard would give me more outdoor space to relax.

原句中有多处结构和用法问题："living in a single floor"应为"living on a single floor"（介词错误）；句尾不完整（"and I was"）。此外，“wish having a backyard would give me...”结构可改为“I wish a backyard would give me...”或“I hope a backyard would give me...”。建议拆成两个句子，修正介词并完成未完成的句子，使表达完整清晰。