Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Speak more clearly and organize your answer: start with a direct statement, then add one or two clear supporting details. Avoid repetition and filler words (e.g., "because because", "and and", "umm"). Use linking words like "because" or "so" correctly and keep the answer to no more than 3–4 sentences.

Example: Yes — there are many tall buildings near my home because I live close to the city. For example, there is a large apartment complex and several office towers with modern architecture. I like how they change the skyline, especially at sunset.

Suggestion: Correct grammar (subject-verb agreement and word forms) and be concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons or examples. Replace repeated phrases with precise vocabulary (e.g., "architecture", "facades").

Example: Yes, I often take photos of buildings because I enjoy architecture. I especially photograph facades and colorful details, such as old doors and window patterns, which I find visually interesting.

Suggestion: Be specific and reduce hesitation markers ("umm"). Give a short topic sentence saying which building and why, then add a specific detail about its design or function. Use correct grammar ("I am curious about the interior" not "what it is inside").

Example: Yes, I would like to visit my neighbor's house because its exterior looks unique. For instance, it has an unusual wooden facade and tall windows, and I am curious to see how the inside is decorated.

Suggestion: Give a clear direct answer, avoid repetition, and support it with specific reasons. Mention particular benefits (view, convenience, facilities) and use linking words ("because", "also"). Limit to 2–3 sentences and correct awkward phrases like "makes people like live lifestyle comfortable."

Example: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because the views from high floors are beautiful and refreshing. Also, tall buildings often have convenient facilities such as elevators, security, and a gym, which would make daily life easier.

× Yes, there are so many tall buildings near my home because because I live in a bit the mood this is which is near the city and there are so many buildings complex and and buildings large types of architectures.

✓ Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home because I live in a neighborhood near the city with many large building complexes and diverse architectural styles.

The original sentence has repetition, incorrect word order, and unclear phrases resulting in a sentence structure error. Remove duplicate words ('because because', 'and and'), correct word order ('a bit the mood this is' is nonsensical → 'a neighborhood'), and use clearer noun phrases ('building complexes' and 'architectural styles'). Keep present simple tense to describe a general fact.

× Yes, I usually takes photos of buildings because I'm fond of taking photograph of anything and I love the view of view of the building and their colors, their structure design, which attracts me very much.

✓ Yes, I usually take photos of buildings because I'm fond of taking photographs of anything, and I love the views of buildings, their colors, and their structural design, which attract me very much.

The verb 'takes' is incorrect with the first person singular subject 'I'; use 'take' (third person singular rule). Also fix pluralization ('photograph' → 'photographs'), remove repetition ('view of view'), and ensure subject-verb agreement: plural noun 'colors, and structural design' require 'attract' not 'attracts'. Maintain present simple tense for habitual action.

× Yes, there is a building umm, the building is of my neighbors and I like to visit it once umm because it is the it's outside. Its structure is so much attracted and I'm so much curious about what it is inside and how it is and and I have willing to visit it.

✓ Yes, there is a building owned by my neighbor that I would like to visit because it is unusual from the outside. Its structure is very interesting, and I'm curious about the interior, so I am willing to visit it.

The original has awkward phrasing and incorrect possessive form ('building is of my neighbors' → 'owned by my neighbor'), unnecessary fillers, and wrong adjective usage ('structure is so much attracted' incorrect). Rephrase for clarity and correct adjective/adverb use ('very interesting'), appropriate modal/tense ('would like to visit' for preference), and fix 'I have willing' to 'I am willing'.

× Yes, I like to live in a tall and large building because the view the view from the tall building is so beautiful and and and refreshing and also it makes people like live lifestyle comfortable and also umm.

✓ Yes, I would like to live in a tall, large building because the view from it is beautiful and refreshing, and it makes people's lifestyles more comfortable.

The sentence contains repetition, filler words, and awkward phrasing. Use 'would like' to express preference, remove duplicate words ('the view the view', 'and and and'), use comma to separate adjectives, and correct the noun phrase ('people like live lifestyle comfortable' → 'people's lifestyles more comfortable'). Maintain conditional/preference tone appropriate to the question.