Food— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Améliorez la clarté et la précision : commencez par une phrase thème claire, évitez les hésitations et corrigez les erreurs grammaticales (temps et accords). Utilisez des mots de liaison simples pour structurer l’idée (par exemple « because », « so », « when ») et donnez un ou deux détails précis sur pourquoi vous aimez la pizza (goût, texture, occasion). Limitez la réponse à 3–4 phrases naturelles.

Example: My favourite food is pizza because I love its crispy crust and melted cheese. I especially enjoy Italian-style pizza with fresh tomatoes and basil. I often eat pizza when I study or work because it makes me feel happy and relaxed.

Suggestion: Corrigez la grammaire et la cohérence : utilisez le passé pour parler de l’enfance (« when I was a child ») et évitez les répétitions et hésitations. Donnez une raison claire et un exemple précis (quel type de fast food, quel dessert). Structurez avec une phrase thème puis une ou deux explications courtes.

Example: When I was a child, I preferred fast food and sugary snacks because they tasted good and gave me quick energy. For example, I often ate fries and chocolate bars after school, which made me feel happy.

Suggestion: Rendez la réponse plus naturelle et précise : dites d’abord « Yes » puis expliquez brièvement quelles différences de saison vous observez, en utilisant des mots de liaison (« for example », « in winter », « in summer »). Evitez les répétitions et donnez un exemple concret de plat chaud et d’aliment rafraîchissant. Limitez-vous à 2–3 phrases claires.

Example: Yes, I do. In winter I usually eat hot dishes like soups or stews to keep warm. In summer I prefer cold or refreshing foods, such as salads or chilled fruit.

Suggestion: Clarifiez le contraste passé/présent en utilisant le passé pour l’enfance et le présent pour maintenant. Commencez par une phrase thème (« Yes, it has changed »), puis expliquez pourquoi (santé, goût) avec un exemple concret de nourriture que vous évitez et de ce que vous préférez maintenant. Utilisez des liaisons comme « because » ou « so » pour la cohérence.

Example: Yes, my preferences have changed. As a child I ate a lot of fast food and sugary snacks, but now I prefer healthier options like vegetables and fruits because I care more about my health.

× Personally, my favorite dish is the pizza because iTunes very delicious and I like the Italian food like pasta, but pizza is very delicious more than pasta. So I like to eat, uh, eat pizza when I studies or uh, or uh work because he make me feel happy.

✓ Personally, my favorite dish is pizza because it is very delicious and I like Italian food such as pasta, but pizza is more delicious than pasta. So I like to eat pizza when I study or work because it makes me feel happy.

The sentence uses incorrect pronouns and references: 'iTunes' is a typo for 'it is' and 'he' incorrectly refers to pizza. Use 'it' for things. Use 'it is' or the contraction 'it's' to state qualities. Also correct 'studies' to 'study' (first person singular) and 'make' to 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'it'. Suggestion: replace improper pronouns with 'it' for pizza, fix typos, and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× When I am child, I prefer the the fast food and the sugar because because in in this time he made me. He made me happy and. And very important thing in the food.

✓ When I was a child, I preferred fast food and sweets because at that time they made me happy and food was very important to me.

Tense and pronoun errors: use past tense 'was' and 'preferred' because the speaker refers to a past period. 'The the' and repeated words are typos. Use 'sweets' or 'sugar' as a plural noun for types of food and refer to them with 'they' not 'he'. Also 'in this time' should be 'at that time'. Suggestion: use past tense consistently, correct repetition and use appropriate pronouns for plural nouns.

× Yes, of course I have part of foods in winter and the other parts in summer. For example in the winter you I I eat something hot or or soup and in the summer I like to eat fast food and and cold thing to refresh me.

✓ Yes, of course I eat some foods in winter and others in summer. For example, in winter I eat hot dishes or soup, and in summer I like to eat fast food and cold foods to refresh myself.

Incorrect use of quantifiers and word forms: 'part of foods' is unnatural; use 'some foods' and 'others'. Remove duplicated words. 'Cold thing' should be 'cold foods' and use reflexive pronoun 'myself' after 'refresh'. Suggestion: use 'some'/'others' for unspecified quantities and ensure noun forms match number.

× Yes of course when it's possible to say that when I'm child I prefer to fast food and and this is unhealthy for for me and it and sugar the 2 is harmful for me. But when I'm in this years I I prefer the healthy food like vegetables and fruits.

✓ Yes, of course. When I was a child I preferred fast food, which was unhealthy for me, and sugary foods were harmful. But in recent years I prefer healthy foods like vegetables and fruits.

Tense consistency and noun/quantifier use: refer to childhood with past tense 'was' and 'preferred'. 'It's possible to say that' is unnecessary. 'Sugar the 2 is harmful' is unclear—use 'sugary foods were harmful'. 'When I'm in this years' should be 'in recent years'. Use plural 'foods' for general categories. Suggestion: keep past tense for past habits, use clear noun phrases for 'sugary foods', and 'in recent years' for ongoing present preference.