Food— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cần trả lời trực tiếp hơn và mở rộng thêm bằng một câu giải thích/miêu tả cụ thể. Tránh câu quá ngắn; bổ sung từ vựng mô tả (ví dụ: cách chế biến, hương vị) và dùng liên từ nếu cần để làm câu mạch lạc.

Example: My favourite food is roasted chicken with a variety of vegetables. I enjoy it because the chicken is usually seasoned with herbs and roasted until the skin is crispy, while the vegetables are fresh and lightly seasoned, which makes the meal both healthy and tasty.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và có lỗi phát âm/nhầm từ. Cần trả lời trực tiếp, dùng cấu trúc chủ đề rồi bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ loại kẹo, lý do thích). Hạn chế tiếng lắp và sửa lỗi từ vựng trước khi nói.

Example: When I was young, I loved sweet snacks such as gummy candies and chocolate bars. I liked them because they were easy to eat and I usually had them as a treat after school.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có lỗi cấu trúc. Cần nêu chủ đề trước (có/không) rồi giải thích bằng chi tiết cụ thể về mùa hoặc dịp, dùng liên từ để kết nối ý và sửa ngữ pháp (bring → bring/ have).

Example: Yes, I do. For example, during winter or on New Year’s Eve I often have hot coffee and cookies to stay warm and celebrate with my family. In summer I prefer light salads and cold drinks instead.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời quá ngắn và thiếu lý do. Nên trả lời rõ ràng (Yes/No) rồi bổ sung lý do và một ví dụ cụ thể để làm câu đầy đủ và thuyết phục. Dùng liên từ để mở rộng câu.

Example: No, it hasn’t changed. I still enjoy chicken and vegetables because I appreciate their flavour and the fact they are healthy; for instance, I often choose a grilled chicken salad when I eat out.

× My favorite food is chicken and vegetable.

✓ My favorite food is chicken and vegetables.

The noun 'vegetable' should be plural when referring to vegetables in general. Use the plural form 'vegetables' after an uncountable or general food list. Suggestion: say 'chicken and vegetables' or 'chicken and vegetable dishes'.

× I sing, uh, candies, snacks.

✓ I used to like candies and snacks.

The student said 'I sing' which is incorrect for past habit. Use the past habitual expression 'used to' or simple past 'liked'. Also list items with 'and'. Suggestion: 'I used to like candies and snacks.'

× For example, uh, in uh, no end day, I like bring a cup of coffee hot and uh, cookies.

✓ For example, on New Year's Day, I like to have a hot cup of coffee and some cookies.

Multiple issues: incorrect preposition 'in' should be 'on' for days (Grammar problem type 11), wrong noun phrase 'no end day' should be 'New Year's Day', and verb construction 'I like bring' should be 'I like to have' or 'I like having' (present tense with verb+to-infinitive or -ing). Also use 'a hot cup of coffee' and 'some cookies' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: 'On New Year's Day, I like to have a hot cup of coffee and some cookies.'

× No, I like it.

✓ No, I still like it.

The reply 'No, I like it.' is grammatically possible but lacks clarity. The question asks if favorite food changed since childhood; use 'still' to indicate continuity. Suggestion: 'No, I still like it.'