Food— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Give a direct, grammatically correct topic sentence, avoid incorrect words and redundancy, and add one specific detail about why you like them. Use correct nouns (e.g., "favorite foods" not "favorite fruit") and prepositions ("remind me of"). Keep to 2–4 sentences.

Example: I love sweets and desserts, especially candy and fruit tarts. They are my favorite treats because my family used to buy them for weekend celebrations, and the sweet-sour taste of the fruit tart reminds me of those happy times.

Suggestion: Start with a clear topic sentence about what you liked as a child, avoid long hesitations and unclear pronoun references. Use past tense consistently and give one specific example and reason. Keep sentences short and coherent, using linking words like "because" or "so".

Example: When I was young I liked sweet foods, especially cakes. My mother used to buy a special cake for me every summer because I received high scores in my exams, so sweets became a reward and a happy memory.

Suggestion: Answer directly, correct grammar (e.g., "I don't really" and "it mostly depends"), and explain briefly with a clear example. Use linking phrases like "However" or "For example" to connect ideas and avoid invented words ("squeeze").

Example: Not really — I don't change my diet much with the seasons; it mostly depends on my mood. For example, when I'm feeling down I often eat a slice of cake to cheer myself up and relax.

Suggestion: Respond with a clear topic sentence then give precise reasons. Fix wrong words (e.g., "sugary treats" not "sugary cheese", "squid" and "flour" are incorrect here) and use descriptive vocabulary for texture and taste. Limit to 2–3 concise sentences.

Example: No, my favorite foods are the same as when I was a child — sweet treats like candy, sponge cake and fruit tarts. I especially like strawberry tarts because of their sweet-tart flavor and the soft, flaky pastry.

× My favorite fruit are candies and fruit tarts because they remind me for weekend treats with my family.

✓ My favorite treats are candies and fruit tarts because they remind me of weekend treats with my family.

The subject 'My favorite fruit' does not match the plural items listed; use 'treats' (plural) or make the list singular. Also 'remind me for' is incorrect preposition; use 'remind me of'. Suggestion: match noun number with list and use correct preposition.

× Well actually sweet food is uh, when it goes out I often or supposed to my mother's to buy for me after every summer sweet cake after I got a high score in my exams.

✓ Well, actually when sweet food is available I often expect my mother to buy a cake for me after I get high scores in my exams.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and contains incorrect structures. 'When it goes out' and 'supposed to my mother's' are wrong. Reconstructed to 'when sweet food is available' and 'expect my mother to buy' to express intended meaning. Also tense consistency: 'after I get high scores' fits repeated action; if referring to past single event use past tense.

× We often or supposed to my mother's to buy for me after every summer sweet cake after I got a high score in my exams.

✓ I often expect my mother to buy a cake for me after I get a high score in my exams.

Prepositions and phrasing were incorrect: 'to my mother's' and 'buy for me' are awkward. Use 'expect my mother to buy a cake for me' or 'my mother buys me a cake'. Ensure prepositions correctly link verbs and objects.

× I told change foods by seasons.

✓ I change the foods I eat by season.

Verb form 'told' is incorrect; use present simple 'change' for habitual action. Also 'by seasons' is awkward; use 'by season' or 'by the seasons'. Suggestion: use subject + present simple for habits.

× It's mostly depends on my mood.

✓ It mostly depends on my mood.

Use correct subject-verb agreement: with subject 'It' the verb should be 'depends' without auxiliary 'is'. Remove 'is' to form simple present 'depends'.

× they remind me for weekend treats with my family.

✓ they remind me of weekend treats with my family.

Use 'remind someone of something', not 'remind someone for'. Change preposition to 'of'.

× I have a real sweet tooth so I love eating sweets and desserts.

✓ I have a real sweet tooth, so I love eating sweets and desserts.

Sentence is mostly correct; added comma improves readability. No verb form changes needed. This entry is to acknowledge correct -ing usage.

× I often eat a piece of cake or other squeeze to cheer my myself up and feel more relaxed.

✓ I often eat a piece of cake or something else to cheer myself up and feel more relaxed.

'cheer my myself up' mixes possessive and reflexive pronouns incorrectly. Use the reflexive pronoun 'myself'. 'other squeeze' is incorrect word choice; replace with 'something else'.

× I still love sugary cheese like candy and sponge cake.

✓ I still love sugary things like candy and sponge cake.

'Sugary cheese' is likely incorrect meaning; 'cheese' doesn't fit context. Use 'sugary things' or 'sweets'. Also 'like candy and sponge cake' lists examples.

× It's particularly strawberry ones because I like the squid and the flour and the soft texture.

✓ I particularly like the strawberry ones because I enjoy the sweet flavor and the soft texture.

Original contains wrong words: 'squid' and 'flour' are incorrect; likely 'sweet' and 'flavor' intended. Replace with appropriate adjectives/nouns. Ensure adjective order and correct nouns.