Food— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve grammar (subject-verb agreement and articles), shorten redundancy, and add a brief specific reason. Use one clear topic sentence then one supporting detail with a linking word. For example, replace “it has not only... but it also provide” with “it not only tastes great but also provides”.

Example: My favourite food is vegetable pizza. It not only tastes delicious but also provides vitamins and fibre from the vegetables, so I consider it a healthier alternative to meat-based pizzas.

Suggestion: Be concise and correct word forms; avoid repetition and correct spelling. Start with a topic sentence, then give one clear reason using a linking word like 'because' or 'so'.

Example: When I was young, I loved pizza and burgers. However, I avoid them now because they are oily and I learned they can negatively affect my health.

Suggestion: Clarify structure and remove repetitions. Provide one clear statement about seasonal eating, then a specific example with a linking word. Fix grammar (articles, word order) and avoid duplicate words.

Example: Yes, we often eat different foods at various times of the year. For instance, during our harvest festival we usually prepare a special rice dish and sweets that are not common at other times.

Suggestion: Combine sentences for fluency, correct grammar and spelling ("Maggie" should be "Maggi" if referring to the brand; use articles and past tense correctly). Give one concise reason why you liked it then contrast with present preference using a linking word like 'but' or 'however'.

Example: Yes, it has changed. As a child I often ate Maggi because my mother made it deliciously, but now I prefer vegetable pizza because it feels healthier and more satisfying.

× Well, my favorite food is vegetable pizza because it has not only mouthwatering flavour but it also provide essential nutrients for healthy lifestyle.

✓ Well, my favorite food is vegetable pizza because it not only has a mouthwatering flavour but it also provides essential nutrients for a healthy lifestyle.

Subject-verb agreement and word order: 'not only... but also' requires correct verb forms after each part. 'Has' should follow 'not only' and 'provides' must agree with singular subject 'it'. Also add articles: 'a mouthwatering flavour' and 'a healthy lifestyle' for grammatical completeness. Suggestion: use 'it not only has X but also provides Y' for correct structure.

× When I was young, I liked pizza a lot but now I have changed my life because I have learned that pizza, burger, haburger can put a harmful impact on my body because it is an oily food.

✓ When I was young, I liked pizza a lot, but now I have changed my lifestyle because I have learned that pizza, burgers, and hamburgers can have a harmful impact on my body because they are oily foods.

Plural and word choice: list items should be plural to refer generally: 'burgers and hamburgers'. Use 'have' for plural subject and 'impact on my body' is better phrased 'have a harmful impact on my body'. 'Lifestyle' is one word. Also 'they are oily foods' agrees in number. Suggestion: use plural nouns when speaking generally and match verb number to subject.

× Definitely it is tradition in our country to eat different foods in the different times of the years because they everyone in everyone in our my country used to cook different kinds of traditional foods on the traditional functions.

✓ Definitely, it is a tradition in our country to eat different foods at different times of the year because everyone in our country used to cook different kinds of traditional foods for traditional functions.

Article and preposition errors: add 'a' before 'tradition'. Use 'at different times of the year' (not 'in the different times of the years'). Remove repeated words 'they everyone in everyone in our my country'. Use 'for traditional functions' rather than 'on the traditional functions'. Suggestion: simplify the sentence and ensure correct articles and prepositions: 'a tradition', 'at different times', 'of the year', 'for functions'.

× Yes, definitely. Now my favorite food is a vegetable pizza, but when I was child I liked Maggie a lot. We at that time I always forced my mother to cook it because she cooked Maggie very delicious.

✓ Yes, definitely. Now my favorite food is vegetable pizza, but when I was a child I liked Maggi a lot. At that time I always begged my mother to cook it because she cooked Maggi very deliciously.

Articles and word forms: 'a child' requires the article 'a'. Brand/name spelling: 'Maggi' not 'Maggie'. Remove 'a' before 'vegetable pizza' (not necessary) or keep optionally. 'At that time' is the correct phrase order. Use a verb that fits meaning: 'begged' or 'asked' instead of 'forced'. 'Cooked Maggi very delicious' is incorrect adjective/adverb usage; use the adverb 'deliciously' or better 'she made Maggi very delicious' or 'she cooked Maggi very well'. Suggestion: use 'a child', correct product name, and use an adverb or rephrase to 'made it very delicious'.