Part 1
Examiner
What is your favourite food?
Candidate
My favorite food is fruit, vegetable, seafood.
Examiner
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Candidate
Hamburger pizza.
Examiner
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Candidate
No, I don't different time.
Examiner
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
Candidate
Yeah.
What is your favourite food?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 回答要更自然并且更具体。先用一句主题句直接回答问题,然后用一到两句补充说明为什么喜欢这些食物(口味、健康或习惯),并使用连接词让内容更连贯。注意语法(复数/单数、一致性)和句子完整性。
Example: My favorite foods are fruits, vegetables and seafood. I enjoy them because they’re fresh and healthy, and seafood in particular adds a lot of variety to my meals. For example, I often eat grilled salmon or shrimp with a salad.
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: 回答过于简短且缺乏语法完整性。应先用一句完整的主题句回答,再补充一两句说明当时为什么喜欢(味道、方便、童年回忆等),并用连接词衔接细节。
Example: When I was young, I liked fast food such as hamburgers and pizza. I liked them because they were tasty and easy to eat, and I often had them at birthday parties or on weekends with my family.
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Score: 40.0Suggestion: 句子不完整且语法错误。应该直接回答是或否,然后解释原因并给出具体例子(比如季节性食材或节日习惯)。使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Example: No, I usually don’t change my diet much during the year. However, in winter I tend to eat more soups and stews, while in summer I prefer light salads and cold fruits.
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
Score: 45.0Suggestion: 回答太简短且非正式。应该用完整句子回答,并说明变化的原因和具体例子(比如从快餐到健康饮食),使用连接词解释过程和理由。
Example: Yes, my preferences have changed since I was a child. I used to prefer fast food like burgers, but now I prefer healthier options such as vegetables and seafood because I’m more health-conscious and enjoy fresher flavors.
× My favorite food is fruit, vegetable, seafood.
✓ My favorite foods are fruit, vegetables, and seafood.
原句中列举多种食物时,名词应使用复数形式或在单复数上一致。根据语境,表示多种食物时应使用复数:"foods" 或将各项变为复数形式(vegetables)。此外,列举项之间需要用逗号并在最后两项之间加“and”。建议在列举多个可数名词时使用复数或在表述上改为不可数总称。
× Hamburger pizza.
✓ I liked hamburgers and pizza.
原句为片段,缺少主语和谓语,属于句子结构错误。回答过去喜好的问题应使用过去时完整句型,如“I liked ...”并对可数名词使用复数或并列形式。建议形成完整句子:主语+过去时谓语+宾语。
× No, I don't different time.
✓ No, I don't. I eat the same foods at different times of the year.
原句不符合英语句子结构,缺少动词搭配和恰当的表达。问题是询问是否在不同季节吃不同食物,否定回答应直接用“No, I don't.”或更完整地说明原因。提供改正句为完整的否定句并补充说明季节变化。
× Yeah.
✓ Yes, it has.
原答“Yeah.”虽可口语化表示肯定,但问题是“Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?”需要使用助动词“has”构成现在完成时的简短回答,主语为“it(your favourite food)”,因此应答“Yes, it has.”以符合语法和时态要求。