Food— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (use 'a sandwich' or 'sandwiches'), and give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid unnecessary words.

Example: I like sandwiches, especially whole‑grain sandwiches, because they are quick to make and healthier than many fast foods. For example, I often add grilled chicken, lettuce and avocado, which gives me protein and good fats.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer and avoid hesitation and repetition. Use a clear past‑tense topic sentence, then add one specific detail or example using a linking word (e.g., 'for example' or 'because'). Keep it to 1–3 sentences.

Example: When I was young I liked sandwiches too, especially peanut butter and jam sandwiches. For example, my mother would pack one for school almost every day, so I became very used to that taste.

Suggestion: Answer directly, correct grammar, and give a specific example of seasonal changes using linking words like 'for instance' or 'in summer'. Avoid repetition and filler words.

Example: Yes, I do. I often eat lighter, cooler foods in summer, such as salads and cold noodles, because it is hot. For instance, in winter I prefer warm soups and stews to feel more comfortable.

Suggestion: Give a concise, grammatically correct response. State the main idea first, then support it with one specific reason or brief example, using a linking word like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid repeating words.

Example: No, my favourite food hasn't changed since childhood because I still enjoy the same sandwich fillings. For example, I still choose grilled chicken and salad in my sandwiches just like I did when I was a child.

× My favorite food is sandwich because it is a very healthy for me.

✓ My favorite food is a sandwich because it is very healthy for me.

The noun 'sandwich' requires an article here; use the indefinite article 'a' with a singular countable noun. Also 'a very healthy for me' is incorrect: 'healthy' is an adjective and does not need 'a' before it; remove the extra article. Suggestion: 'a sandwich' and 'very healthy for me'. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 17)

× When I was a young, uh, and I earlier mentioned when I was young, I also same, I also like same food at that time. I like.

✓ When I was young, as I mentioned earlier, I liked the same food at that time.

Multiple issues: 'a young' is wrong because 'young' as an adjective describing age does not take 'a' (Article error, ID 22). Tense should be past ('liked') to match 'When I was young' (Past tense issue, ID 5). The phrase 'I also same' is ungrammatical; use 'the same'. Remove filler words and redundant clauses to make the sentence clear. (Primary Grammar Problem Type IDs: 22 and 5)

× Yes, definitely. Is it is depend on this. It is depend on the condition. I I eat different type of food at a different time of the year.

✓ Yes, definitely. It depends on the situation. I eat different types of food at different times of the year.

'Is it is depend on this' and 'It is depend on the condition' misuse the verb 'depend'; correct form is 'depends' for third person singular subject 'it' (Third person singular issue, ID 2 and Subject-verb agreement, ID 27). 'Different type of food' should be plural 'different types of food' (Singular and plural issue, ID 1). Also use 'different times of the year' rather than 'a different time of the year' to match plural 'different types'. Suggest clearer noun 'situation' instead of 'this' or 'condition'.

× No, my favorite food was my favorite food were not changed since my childhood because I I prefer to eat same food that I love in my childhood and that I love in my adulthood.

✓ No, my favorite food has not changed since my childhood because I prefer to eat the same food that I loved in my childhood and that I love in adulthood.

Use present perfect 'has not changed' to describe a change from past to present (Present perfect / tense issue, ID 7/6). 'Was' and 'were' are incorrect here and duplicate the subject (Subject-verb agreement and sentence structure, IDs 27 and 26). 'Prefer to eat same food' needs the definite article 'the same food' (Article/quantifier error, IDs 22/14). Match tense inside relative clause: 'loved' (past) for childhood and 'love' (present) for adulthood. Remove duplicated 'I'.