Food— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答は簡潔で明確ですが、文が短すぎて発展がありません。トピックセンテンスの後に理由や具体例を1〜2文で付け加えて、語彙の幅と流暢さを示しましょう。言い換えや接続詞（because / because of / for example / also）を使い、自然な文を作る練習をしてください。発音やイントネーションも意識して、音のつながりを滑らかにすると良いです。

Example: My favourite food is sushi because I love the variety of fresh fish and the delicate flavours. For example, I often choose salmon and tuna rolls at restaurants, and I enjoy the balance of rice, seaweed and wasabi.

Suggestion: 時制と文法の誤りが目立ちます（過去の話題には過去形を使う）。簡潔なトピックセンテンスを過去形で始め、必要なら理由や具体例を1文加えてください。また、語彙を少し増やし、接続詞（when I was young / because / for example）を使って論理的に繋げましょう。

Example: When I was young, I liked fruits, especially apples and bananas, because they were sweet and easy to eat. For example, I used to have a banana every day as a snack after school.

Suggestion: 質問に対して答えになっていません。まず直接的にYes/Noで答え、その後に理由や具体例を述べてください。季節ごとの具体的な食品（夏は冷たいもの、冬は温かいスープなど）を挙げると説得力が増します。接続語（usually / in summer / during winter）を使う練習をしましょう。

Example: Yes, I do. In summer I usually eat more cold dishes and fruits like watermelon, while in winter I prefer hot soups and stews to keep warm.

Suggestion: 内容が混乱していて、過去と現在の比較が明確に示されていません。まず明確な結論（Yes, it has / No, it hasn't）を述べ、その後で変化の理由を過去形と現在形を適切に使って説明してください。冗長な繰り返しを避け、シンプルで論理的な文を心がけてください。

Example: Yes, it has changed. As a child I liked fruits because they were easy to eat, but now I prefer sushi because I enjoy its variety and flavours, and I try different types of sushi when I eat out.

× When I am so, I like fruits.

✓ When I was young, I liked fruit.

The student used present tense 'am' but the question asks about past ('when you were young'), so past tense should be used. Use 'was' for first person singular past and 'liked' for past habitual. Also 'fruits' is uncountable/general; 'fruit' is more natural. Suggestion: use past tense consistent with the time reference.

× So I don't know.

✓ Not really, I'm not sure.

The examiner asked about eating different foods at different times of the year; the student's reply 'So I don't know.' is awkward. Use present simple to state uncertainty: 'I'm not sure' or 'I don't really know.' Maintain present tense for current habitual behaviors. Suggestion: respond with a natural present-tense phrase expressing uncertainty.

× When I, I am young, so I like fruits so bad.

✓ When I was young, I liked fruit very much.

The sentence mixes present tense 'am' with past context 'when', so change to past 'was' and past verb 'liked'. 'So bad' is incorrect colloquialism for 'very much.' Use 'very much' or 'a lot.' Also 'fruits' -> 'fruit' for general preference. Suggestion: match past tense and use appropriate adverb.

× I don't like fruits because when I load so I'm very like, I, I, I like food, uh, sushi.

✓ I don't like fruit now; I used to like it when I was younger, but now I prefer sushi.

The original is fragmentary with disfluent fillers ('uh', repetitions) and unclear causal structure 'because when I load so'. It needs coherent clauses and correct tense: contrast past habit with current preference using past and present tenses. Replace 'fruits' with 'fruit' and state clear reason or contrast. Suggestion: remove fillers and organize into clear clauses: past habit vs present preference.