Food— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and incorrect word forms, and add one specific detail (e.g., favorite type or when you eat it). Use linking words to connect ideas. Keep it to 2–4 sentences.

Example: I love sushi — it's my favourite food. It's a traditional Japanese dish and I especially enjoy salmon nigiri because of its rich, buttery flavour. I often eat it with friends at weekends, which makes the experience more enjoyable.

Suggestion: Use past tense consistently and be specific. Begin with a clear past-tense topic sentence, avoid invented words, and give a brief reason or memory. Use linking words (e.g., because, so) to connect points.

Example: When I was a child, I loved sweet foods like cookies and chocolate because they were treats after school. I remember feeling comforted by them, especially when my grandmother baked fresh cookies for me.

Suggestion: Answer directly and clearly. Use correct grammar (subject-verb agreement) and link reasons. Say whether you do or do not, then give a specific example of seasonal food and why. Keep sentences short and natural.

Example: Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year. For example, in winter my mother cooks hearty soups and stews, while in summer we have more salads and fruit because they are refreshing.

Suggestion: Make a clear comparison using past and present tenses, and give specific examples and reasons for the change. Avoid filler sounds and vague phrases like “or food.” Use linking words such as however, now, because.

Example: Yes, my tastes have changed. As a child I preferred sweets, but now I prefer savoury snacks like potato chips and grilled meats because I enjoy stronger flavours and textures.

× My favorite food is sushi. It is a Japanese traditional food and it is so delicious and refreshable and it makes me feel delight, delighted and happy.

✓ My favorite food is sushi. It is a traditional Japanese dish, and it is very delicious and refreshing; it makes me feel delighted and happy.

Use 'traditional Japanese' (adjective order) and 'dish' is more natural than 'food' here. Use 'very' as adverb to modify 'delicious'. 'Refreshable' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'refreshing'. 'Delight' is a noun; the correct adjective is 'delighted'. Also combine clauses with appropriate punctuation for clarity.

× Also, I always eat it.

✓ I always eat it.

Sentence is grammatically fine but redundant with previous; keep present simple 'eat' for habitual action. No tense change needed; ensure it follows previous sentence smoothly.

× When I was a child I really like to eat sweet things such as cookies and chocolate.

✓ When I was a child, I really liked eating sweet things such as cookies and chocolate.

The time marker 'When I was a child' requires past tense. Use 'liked' (past) instead of 'like'. Use 'liked eating' or 'liked to eat' for natural phrasing.

× It makes me feel delightful and grot and also it's remind me feel comfortable.

✓ They made me feel delighted and cozy, and they also remind me of comfort.

'Delightful' describes something that causes delight; to express personal feeling use 'delighted'. 'Grot' is not an English adjective here; likely intended 'cozy' or 'comfortable'. 'It's remind me feel comfortable' is incorrect: use 'they remind me of comfort' or 'they make me feel comfortable'. Match pronouns (cookies and chocolate = they) and tense consistency: past for childhood experiences, present for ongoing reminders.

× I some I usually eat different food at different time of my of the year.

✓ Sometimes I usually eat different foods at different times of the year.

Remove duplicate words and fix determiners and plurality: 'sometimes' (not 'I some I'), 'foods' plural for different kinds, 'times' plural, and 'of the year' becomes 'of the year' correct placement. Note 'sometimes' and 'usually' can be redundant together; choose one depending on intended meaning.

× I because my mother manage my food meal, therefore she always makes me feel happy and delicious.

✓ Because my mother manages my meals, she always makes food that I enjoy and makes me happy.

Sentence had extra 'I' and conjunction misuse. Use 'Because' to start clause, verb agreement 'manages' for third person singular, 'meals' plural, and 'makes me feel delicious' is incorrect—people feel delighted or happy; food is delicious. Rephrase to 'makes food that I enjoy' and 'makes me happy'.

× When I was a child, I really loved to eat sweet food.

✓ When I was a child, I really loved to eat sweet foods.

Use plural 'foods' or 'sweet treats' for general category; past tense 'loved' is correct. Maintain plural for countable items like 'sweets'.

× However, recently I really like salty food such as, uh, potato chips or food.

✓ However, recently I have really liked salty foods such as potato chips.

For a change from past to recent present, use present perfect 'have liked' to indicate change over time up to now. Use plural 'foods' or 'snacks' and remove filler 'uh' and redundant 'or food'.