Food— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cải thiện: Giảm lặp từ và sửa ngữ pháp để câu tự nhiên hơn; thêm câu chủ đề rõ ràng và một vài chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: cách chế biến hoặc lý do) trong tối đa 5 câu. Chú ý nối câu bằng liên từ như "because" hoặc "so". Ví dụ: bỏ một trong các "I feel" và sửa số lần ăn thành chữ hoặc dùng "twice a week".

Example: My favourite food is fried chicken because I love its crispy skin and juicy meat. I usually eat it twice a week, often from a local shop that seasons it with garlic and pepper. Eating it makes me feel very happy, especially when I'm with friends.

Suggestion: Cải thiện: Sửa ngữ pháp (ví dụ "When I was young"), thì động từ ("liked"), và tính từ ("soft" not "softy"). Thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể về cách chế biến hoặc kỷ niệm để làm câu phong phú hơn. Dùng từ nối như "because" hoặc "so" để liên kết ý.

Example: When I was young, I liked pork a lot because my family cooked it almost every day. It was usually stewed until tender and served with rice, which made it very comforting.

Suggestion: Cải thiện: Trả lời nên rõ ràng và có trật tự: nói có hay không, rồi giải thích. Loại bỏ lỗi không cần thiết và từ thừa (ví dụ "intake", "mentioned in in"). Nói cụ thể về các món ăn theo mùa và lý do. Dùng liên từ như "in summer"/"during winter" hoặc "because" để kết nối ý.

Example: Yes, I do eat different foods at different times of the year. For example, in winter my family makes a hearty hotpot with seasonal vegetables and meat, while in summer we prefer light salads and cold noodles because they are refreshing.

Suggestion: Cải thiện: Sắp xếp ý theo cấu trúc: nêu rõ thay đổi hay không, lý do, và kết luận. Sửa ngữ pháp, tránh lặp lại ("my mother"), và dùng từ chính xác ("because she cooks it well"). Giữ không quá 5 câu và thêm chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: hương vị hoặc tình huống).

Example: My favourite has changed since childhood. I used to love beef because my mother cooked it very well, especially a flavorful stew she made on weekends. Now she rarely cooks beef, so I prefer chicken more often, especially grilled chicken which I can eat at home or buy from a nearby café.

× Personally, I like fried chicken the most.

✓ Personally, I like fried chicken the most.

No grammar error; sentence is correct in present simple to state preference.

× I often eat it every week.

✓ I often eat it each week.

'Every week' and 'often' are slightly redundant together; better to use 'each week' or remove 'often' to be concise.

× I eat fried chicken 2 times a week and I feel I feel over the moon after that and it's so delicious.

✓ I eat fried chicken twice a week and I feel over the moon afterwards because it's so delicious.

Use 'twice' instead of '2 times' in formal speech; remove repeated phrase 'I feel'; use 'afterwards' for clarity and link clause with 'because'.

× When I was a young, I really like pork because I often eat it every day and it's softy and delicious.

✓ When I was young, I really liked pork because I often ate it every day and it was soft and delicious.

Remove article 'a' before 'young' (correct: 'when I was young'); tense should be past ('liked', 'ate', 'was') to match 'when I was young'; 'softy' is not correct — use adjective 'soft'.

× Hmm intake I usually eat mentioned in in my home because it's my culture cuisine in my country and I really like Manchu because it's so delicious and make me feel over the moon.

✓ I usually eat traditional dishes at home because they are part of my culture, and I really like Manchu cuisine because it is so delicious and makes me feel over the moon.

Sentence had many issues: remove filler 'intake'; 'mentioned in in' incorrect — rephrase to 'traditional dishes at home'; use plural 'they are' for 'dishes'; 'culture cuisine' should be 'part of my culture' or 'cultural cuisine'; 'make' needs third-person singular 'makes' to agree with 'Manchu cuisine'.

× Since I was a child, I really like beef because it's because my mother cookies is so good.

✓ When I was a child, I really liked beef because my mother's cooking was so good.

Change 'Since I was a child' to 'When I was a child' for past habit; use past tense 'liked' and 'was'; 'my mother cookies' is incorrect — use possessive 'my mother's cooking'.

× But now I my mother, my mother don't usually cook it and I feel it's so it's so bad and I think I now I like chicken.

✓ But now my mother doesn't usually cook it, and I feel that's disappointing, so now I prefer chicken.

Remove duplicated fragments; 'my mother don't' should be 'my mother doesn't' (subject-verb agreement); avoid repeated 'it's so'; use 'prefer' for current preference; rephrase for clarity.