Food— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and grammatical. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid unclear phrases like "I made oven by me." Use correct tense and word order (e.g., "I cook at home" or "I make food at home").

Example: My favourite food is homemade meals because they are healthier than takeaway. For example, I cook traditional dishes using fresh ingredients, and I can control the amount of oil and salt, which helps me stay healthy.

Suggestion: Answer directly and organize your list with linking phrases. Use past tense for childhood and avoid vague repetition. Give one specific favourite and then mention others briefly.

Example: When I was young, I mostly liked homemade traditional dishes, especially my mother's stews. I also enjoyed international foods such as Chinese and South Indian cuisine, and I occasionally ate fast foods like pizza and burgers.

Suggestion: Be specific about seasonal changes or occasions and reduce hesitation. Use linking words to explain why and give one concrete example of seasonal variation or travel-related changes.

Example: Yes, I do eat different foods at different times of the year. For example, in winter I prefer hearty soups and stews, while in summer I enjoy lighter salads and grilled vegetables. Also, when I travel I try local specialties to experience new flavours.

Suggestion: Use clear contrast words to show change and use correct grammar for past habits. State the past favourite, explain why it changed, and give a brief current preference with a reason.

Example: Yes, my favourite food has changed. As a child I mostly ate fast food like burgers and fries because it was convenient and tasty. However, now I prefer homemade meals because I am more health-conscious and I like traditional recipes made with fresh ingredients.

× My favorite food is homemade food because it is very healthy for me and I made oven by me because I am health conscious and I like traditional food.

✓ My favorite food is homemade food because it is very healthy for me, and I cook in my oven myself because I am health conscious and I like traditional food.

Original sentence uses incorrect verb and preposition 'made oven by me'. Use 'cook in my oven myself' to show the action and instrument. Also add a comma before 'and' to separate clauses. Suggestion: replace 'made oven by me' with 'cook in my oven myself' and keep subject-verb consistency.

× Well in my age I like homemade food like traditional dishes and I also love some different type of cuisine like Chinese, Mexico also South Indian I like pizza, burgers, sandwich and also I love different type.

✓ When I was younger I liked homemade food like traditional dishes, and I also loved different types of cuisine such as Chinese, Mexican and South Indian. I also liked pizza, burgers and sandwiches, and I enjoyed a variety of other foods.

The response refers to the past but uses present tense 'like' and lacks plural forms. Use past tense 'liked' and plural 'types' and 'sandwiches'. Also 'Mexico' is a noun for the country; use adjective 'Mexican'. Suggestions: use past tense for childhood, plural nouns for countable items, and appropriate adjectives for cuisines.

× Uh. Uh, yes, I taste different type of cuisines when I go for another place and I explore different type of restaurant and I taste some different type of dishes.

✓ Yes, I taste different types of cuisine when I travel to other places, and I explore different types of restaurants and try various dishes.

Use 'travel to other places' instead of 'go for another place', and plural 'types' for countable nouns. Use 'try' instead of repeating 'taste' for variety and natural phrasing. Also 'cuisine' is usually uncountable or 'types of cuisine'.

× Yes, my favorite food was changed since when I am child but recently my taste is homemade cuisine because I am health conscious but I was child. I try to mostly fast food.

✓ Yes, my favorite food changed since I was a child, but recently my preference is homemade cuisine because I am health conscious. When I was a child, I mostly tried fast food.

Use simple past 'changed' and correct past-time clause 'since I was a child'. Place time expressions correctly. 'I try to mostly fast food' is incorrect: use past 'I mostly tried fast food' for childhood habits. Rephrase for clarity and correct tense consistency.