Food— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and accurate: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and add one specific supporting detail such as where you eat it or a particular variety you like. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct small grammar errors (e.g., ‘every weekend’, ‘it is famous’).

Example: I love Momo because it is delicious and easy to find. For example, I often buy steamed chicken momo from a street vendor near my university on weekends, which I find comforting and affordable.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence saying whether your preference changed, reduce hesitations and repetition, and provide one or two specific supporting reasons or memories. Use linking words like ‘because’ or ‘so’ correctly and finish the sentence fully.

Example: My favourite food has not changed since childhood because I have always loved Momo. When I was young my grandmother used to make spicy pork momos for family gatherings, and that memory still makes me choose momo today.

Suggestion: Answer directly and organize: start with a clear statement (Yes/No), then give specific seasonal or festival examples and use linking words (for example, during X we eat Y). Avoid fillers and be precise with festival names and dishes.

Example: Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year. For example, during Tihar we prepare sel roti and during the monsoon I prefer hot soups and rice dishes because they are comforting.

Suggestion: Give a concise direct answer and support it with two clear reasons (e.g., taste and availability). Fix grammar and avoid trailing off. Use linking words like ‘because’ and ‘so’ to connect ideas logically.

Example: No, my favourite food is still Momo because I enjoy its flavour and it lifts my mood. Also, it is widely available and affordable, so I can eat it often.

× My favorite food is Momo because it is easy to make and it is delicious to eat.

✓ My favorite food is momo because it is easy to make and delicious to eat.

Use lowercase for general food names (not proper nouns) and omit the repeated subject 'it' before 'delicious' for concision and natural style. This is an article/style issue and repetition rather than a major grammatical error. Suggestion: write 'momo' in lowercase and combine adjectives without repeating the pronoun.

× I usually eat Momo in every weekends because it is my favorite and it is easy to make and available in every corner of St.

✓ I usually eat momo on weekends because it is my favorite, easy to make, and available on every corner of the street.

Use the preposition 'on' with 'weekends' (not 'in'). Use plural 'weekends' without 'every' or use 'on every weekend' — here 'on weekends' is natural. Use 'on every corner' or better 'on every corner of the street'. Also lowercase 'momo' and add commas for clarity.

× And it is all a famous all over the world.

✓ It is also famous all over the world.

Original has redundant words and incorrect word order ('all a famous all'). Use 'also' to mean 'in addition' and place 'all over the world' after 'famous'. This fixes word order and redundancy.

× There is no change in my favorite food like I usually, uh, in eat more more since childhood because it was my favorite from childhood to adult now because it's so tasty and uh, it makes my mood change.

✓ There has been no change in my favorite food; I have eaten momo since childhood because it has always been my favorite. It is tasty and changes my mood.

Use the present perfect 'has been' and 'have eaten' to indicate an action continuing from the past to the present rather than 'there is no change'. The original misuses 'there is' for a lasting situation. Also correct word order, remove filler repetition, and use clearer pronouns. This addresses the 'there be' misuse and tense consistency.

× So whenever I eat Momo and till now I, I still eat Momo and it makes me so happy and.

✓ So whenever I eat momo, even now I still eat it and it makes me very happy.

Use present simple to describe habitual action ('I still eat it'). Remove filler and incomplete sentence ending. Replace 'so happy and' with 'very happy' to complete the thought. Maintain consistent present tense for habits.

× As I ate different foods at different times of the years because of the seasons or, uh, different kinds of occasions in, in thosai or Tihar, we eat different kinds of delicious foods like, uh, cel roti and different kind of cuisine.

✓ I ate different foods at different times of the year because of the seasons and festivals. During Dashain or Tihar we eat different delicious foods like sel roti and other traditional dishes.

Use singular 'year' with 'times of the year' or 'times of the year' without pluralizing 'years'. The candidate mixed tenses; 'I ate' (past) is fine when referring to past habits, but clarify festival names and food spelling ('Dashain' not 'thosai', 'sel roti'). Use 'other traditional dishes' for clarity. This fixes tense consistency and incorrect nouns.

× No, since childhood my favorite uh food beings Momo.

✓ No, since childhood my favorite food has been momo.

Use 'has been' (present perfect) to indicate a continuous state from childhood to now. 'Beings' is incorrect; the correct auxiliary for singular subject with past-to-present continuity is 'has been'. This is a subject-verb/form error.

× Until now I still love to eat Momo because it makes my mind or a mood refresh and it it gives me a positive vibe.

✓ I still love to eat momo because it refreshes my mood and gives me positive vibes.

Use the verb 'refreshes' to modify 'mood' (not 'makes my mind or a mood refresh'), and use 'vibes' plural idiomatically. Remove duplicated 'it' and choose concise, natural phrasing. This corrects awkward adjective/adverb usage and verb choice.

× So whenever I eat more and I like to eat Momo because it is easy to find and it is.

✓ So whenever I eat, I like to eat momo because it is easy to find.

Original sentence is incomplete and uses 'more' incorrectly. Remove 'more' and the trailing fragment. Use a complete clause and correct preposition/verb choices. This addresses sentence completion and preposition/word choice issues.