Food— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence naming the favourite food, use specific reasons and avoid irrelevant words or fillers. Keep it concise (1–3 sentences). Use linking words like because or and to connect ideas and provide one concrete detail or example.

Example: My favourite food is sushi because I enjoy the fresh taste of raw fish and the variety of textures. For example, I often choose salmon nigiri because it is light but satisfying, and I like pairing it with soy sauce and wasabi.

Suggestion: Start with a clear topic sentence stating the type of food you liked as a child. Give a specific example (e.g., cakes, cookies), explain why you liked it, and use linking words such as because or so. Avoid repeating phrases and reduce hesitation sounds.

Example: When I was young, I loved baked goods, especially cakes and cookies, because they were sweet and comforting. For instance, my mother often baked chocolate chip cookies, and I enjoyed helping her mix the batter and tasting the warm cookies.

Suggestion: Be specific about seasonal changes: name seasons or occasions and give clear examples of foods you eat at those times. Use linking phrases like In summer or During winter and keep sentences short and coherent. Remove filler words and unclear references.

Example: Yes, I do. In summer I prefer light meals like salads and grilled fish, while in winter I enjoy hot, hearty foods such as stews and roasted vegetables. For example, I often eat watermelon and cold salads in July, but I make beef stew in December.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer (yes or no) and then explain how your preferences changed with specific examples and reasons. Use clear time markers (when I was a child / now) and linking words like however or but to compare past and present. Avoid irrelevant words or incorrect nouns.

Example: Yes, my favourite food has changed. When I was a child I preferred sweet snacks like candy and cakes, but now I enjoy savory foods such as French fries and grilled chicken because I appreciate stronger flavours and different textures.

× Actually my different food is bright because it is so delicious, so I like eating it with fancy and more pricey, uh inside so I feel so heavy when I eat. Thank you.

✓ Actually my favorite food is different and flavorful because it is so delicious, so I like eating it in fancy, more expensive places, and I feel very full when I eat it.

The student used adjectives incorrectly and awkward word order. 'Different food is bright' is incorrect; 'favorite food is different and flavorful' or 'is vibrant' is clearer. 'Fancy and more pricey, uh inside' should be 'in fancy, more expensive places'. 'I feel so heavy' is unnatural for feeling full; use 'I feel very full'. Suggestions: choose correct adjective (favorite, flavorful, expensive), correct prepositional phrase 'in places', and use natural collocations ('feel full').

× The kind of food that I like when I was around it is where baking food because it is so delicious too.

✓ The kind of food I liked when I was young was baked goods because they were so delicious too.

Pronoun and relative clause are misused. 'When I was around it' is incorrect; use 'when I was young'. 'Where baking food' should be 'baked goods' or 'things that were baked'. Also tense consistency: 'I liked' for past and 'they were' for description. Suggestions: use simple past for past preferences and correct noun 'baked goods'.

× And they also I like to baking into making a bakery food like cake and uh, sweet.

✓ I also liked baking and making baked goods like cakes and sweets.

Incorrect verb forms: 'like to baking' should be 'liked baking' or 'liked to bake'. 'Making a bakery food' is unnatural; use 'making baked goods'. Maintain past tense 'liked' to match 'when I was young'. Suggestions: use infinitive 'to bake' or gerund 'baking' correctly, and use plural nouns 'cakes, sweets'.

× Actually, yes, I eat different foods, uh, at different times for today.

✓ Actually, yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year.

The student likely meant seasonal variation, not 'for today'. 'For today' is incorrect in this context. Use present simple 'I eat different foods at different times of the year' for habitual actions. Suggestion: use 'at different times of the year' or 'seasonally'.

× And like if I were in a sense, I, uh, eat pizza and they fry and also I eat uh, cookies and uh, so I didn't.

✓ For example, when I am in the city, I eat pizza and fried foods, and I also eat cookies.

Sentence is disfluent and fragments are inconsistent. 'If I were in a sense' is unclear; replace with a specific condition like 'when I am in the city' or 'when I travel'. 'They fry' is incorrect; use 'fried foods'. 'So I didn't' is an unfinished negative and should be removed. Suggestions: make the condition clear, use noun phrases like 'fried foods', and avoid unfinished fragments.

× To be honest, Microsoft has been changed.

✓ To be honest, my favorite food has changed.

'Microsoft' is an incorrect noun here, likely a mispronunciation or wrong word for 'my favorite'. Use 'my favorite food' to convey meaning. 'Has been changed' is passive and awkward; 'has changed' is natural. Suggestion: use correct noun and active phrasing 'has changed'.

× It is. I was a child because, uh, when I was a, because now when I was 26 years old, I like to eat fries.

✓ When I was a child, I liked different foods, but now at 26 years old, I like to eat fries.

Sentence has mixed tenses and redundant phrases. Use past tense 'liked' for childhood and present simple 'like' for current preference. Remove filler 'I was a' and ensure age expressed clearly 'now at 26 years old'. Suggestion: structure sentence with contrast 'When I was a child... but now...'.

× But when I were a child, uh, I like it a bit.

✓ But when I was a child, I liked them a bit.

Subject-verb agreement: 'when I were a child' should be 'when I was a child'. Tense consistency: use past 'liked'. 'It' is unclear; refer to plural 'them' if talking about fries or foods. Suggestion: ensure correct verb form 'was' and match pronoun number to noun.