Part 1
Examiner
What is your favourite food?
Candidate
My favorite food is cake.
Examiner
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Candidate
I will like eating cake because it's so sweet and tasty.
Examiner
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Candidate
Yes, I think we should eat healthy food because it can make our healthy.
Examiner
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
Candidate
Yes, I have.
What is your favourite food?
Score: 45.0Suggestion: 你的回答太简短且缺乏细节。可以先用主题句直接回答,然后用1–2句补充说明为什么喜欢(口感、场合或特定种类),并使用连接词使表达更连贯。例如避免只是单个词回答,扩展到最多5句。
Example: My favourite food is cake. I especially love chocolate cake because it's rich and moist. I usually have it on special occasions like birthdays, which makes it even more enjoyable.
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Score: 40.0Suggestion: 时态使用不当且表达重复。应该用过去时描述童年喜好,先给出主题句,再具体说明为什么喜欢(例如口味、回忆或常吃的种类),并用连接词提高连贯性。控制在最多5句内。
Example: When I was young, I loved eating cake. I enjoyed sweet desserts because they felt like treats after school. For example, my grandmother often baked sponge cake, which I still remember fondly.
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Score: 30.0Suggestion: 回答与问题不匹配,并且有语法错误。考官问的是是否根据季节改变饮食,应该直接回答Yes/No并举例说明不同季节吃什么和原因,同时注意语法和用词(如“make us healthy”)。用连接词解释因果。
Example: Yes, I do eat different foods at different times of the year. In winter I prefer hearty soups and stews to stay warm, while in summer I eat more salads and fruits to stay refreshed. This helps me feel healthier throughout the seasons.
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
Score: 35.0Suggestion: 回答过于简短且缺乏细节。应先直接回答(Yes/No),然后说明如何变化并给出原因或例子(比如口味、健康考虑或生活方式改变),并使用连接词使逻辑清晰。
Example: Yes, it has changed. As a child I loved sweet cakes, but now I prefer lighter and healthier options like grilled fish and salads because I care more about nutrition.
× I will like eating cake because it's so sweet and tasty.
✓ I liked eating cake because it was so sweet and tasty.
这句话描述的是过去“当你小的时候”发生的事情,应该使用过去时。原句使用了“will like”(将会喜欢),属于将来时,不符合上下文时间。建议使用一般过去时:主语 + 动词过去式(like → liked),同时保持描述为过去的状态(is → was)。
× Yes, I think we should eat healthy food because it can make our healthy.
✓ Yes, I think we should eat healthy food because it can make us healthy.
原句中使用了“our healthy”,这是不正确的搭配。“our”是所有格限定名词,后面应接名词(如“health”),而句子想表达“让我们健康”应使用宾格代词“us”加形容词“healthy”。因此应改为“make us healthy”。
× Yes, I have.
✓ Yes, it has.
前面问题是“Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?” 主语是“your favourite food”,为第三人称单数,答语如果用代词应与之保持一致,正确的简短回答为“Yes, it has.” 原句“Yes, I have.” 将主语误用为第一人称并且时态搭配不当。