Food— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答は直接的だが、繰り返しと不自然な表現がある。具体性と流暢さを高めるため、主文の後に簡潔な理由や具体例を付け、冗長な語句を避けること。語彙を増やし、文法（時制・冠詞）に注意すると良い。

Example: My favourite food is natto, a traditional Japanese dish. I usually eat it for breakfast because it is rich in protein and good for digestion. For example, eating natto regularly helps me feel more energetic during the morning.

Suggestion: 理由は述べているが発音や語の重複（"I I"）、不自然な因果関係の説明がある。論理を明確にし、具体的な種類と簡潔な理由を示す。接続語で文章をつなぎ、誤りを避ける練習をすること。

Example: When I was a child, I was really into sweets, such as chocolate and candy. I enjoyed them as a quick treat, and sometimes a small snack helped me stay focused while studying.

Suggestion: 返答は短く断片的で、例の導入が不自然（"For example. Info.")。季節の具体例や理由をつなげて述べ、リンク語（for example, in winter, because）を正しく使う練習をすること。文を完結に保ち、詳細を追加して自然さを出す。

Example: Yes, I do. I enjoy seasonal foods; for example, in autumn I often eat roasted sweet potatoes because they are warm and comforting. In summer, I prefer cold fruits like watermelon to cool down.

Suggestion: 答えが矛盾しており語彙ミス（"not dough"）や時制の不自然さがある。まず明確に肯定／否定を示し、その後で正しい理由や習慣を短く説明する。語の選択と文法を確認する習慣をつけること。

Example: No, it hasn't changed. I've been eating natto almost every day since I was a child, so my taste has stayed the same. I still like it because it is healthy and easy to prepare.

× My favorite food is natto, which is Japanese food, kind of Japanese food.

✓ My favorite food is natto, which is a Japanese food.

The phrase 'kind of Japanese food' is redundant and awkward. Use the article 'a' before 'Japanese food' to make it a correct noun phrase. Improve by saying 'which is a Japanese food' or simply 'which is Japanese.'

× It helped me be healthy.

✓ It helps me stay healthy.

The student used past tense 'helped' but is referring to a habitual or current effect. Use present tense 'helps' for general truths and 'stay' rather than 'be' for natural collocation. Suggestion: use present simple for ongoing facts.

× When I was a child I was really into sweets because when I ate this kind of food I I could easily concentrate on study.

✓ When I was a child, I was really into sweets because when I ate that kind of food I could easily concentrate on my studies.

Use past tense consistently for past habits ('was', 'ate', 'could'). Change 'this' to 'that' for referring to previously mentioned foods, fix duplicated 'I', and use the plural 'studies' with the possessive 'my'. Also add a comma after the time clause.

× Yes I do, I like enjoying seasonal foods. For example. Info. I usually eat sweet potato.

✓ Yes, I do. I enjoy seasonal foods. For example, in autumn I usually eat sweet potatoes.

The original has sentence fragments ('For example. Info.') and awkward phrasing 'like enjoying'. Use 'enjoy' instead of 'like enjoying'. Add a comma after 'Yes', combine 'For example' with a concrete example and pluralize 'sweet potato' to 'sweet potatoes' for general habit.

× No, I haven't. Since I was a child, I've eaten not dough every day. My taste doesn't change until now.

✓ No, it hasn't. Since I was a child, I've eaten natto every day. My taste hasn't changed until now.

The examiner asked if the favourite food changed, so reply should be 'No, it hasn't.' 'I've eaten not dough' appears to be a typo for 'natto' and 'not dough' is incorrect. Use 'natto' and present perfect 'have eaten' for a continuing habit. Also use present perfect negative 'hasn't changed' to show no change up to now. 'Until now' is okay but 'up to now' or 'so far' are alternatives.