Food— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Keep your answer focused and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give two concise supporting details (flavour and texture) and an example of when you eat it. Use linking words and avoid repetition.

Example: My favourite food is tteokbokki, a popular Korean dish. I enjoy it because it combines spicy and sweet flavours, and the rice cakes have a chewy, pleasant texture. For example, I often eat tteokbokki with friends at a street stall on weekends.

Suggestion: Use past tense consistently and be specific. Give a clear topic sentence in past tense, one or two supporting reasons, and an example. Correct vocabulary (snacks, sweets) and grammar (liked, preferred).

Example: When I was young, I liked sweet foods, especially chocolate and candies. I preferred them because I had a sweet tooth, so I often chose sweets as treats after school.

Suggestion: Clarify the pattern and use correct seasonal vocabulary. Give a topic sentence, then two contrasting examples with linking words (for example / in winter). Avoid unclear words and be specific about dishes or drinks.

Example: Yes, I eat different foods during the year. For example, in summer I usually have cold desserts like ice cream or cold noodles, while in winter I prefer hot soups and stews to stay warm.

Suggestion: Answer clearly with past and present contrast. Use past tense for childhood and present tense for now. Explain reasons for change and give specific examples of what you liked then and what you like now, using linking words (however, because).

Example: Yes, my favourite foods have changed. When I was a child I preferred sweet snacks like candy and chocolate. However, now I enjoy savoury and crunchy foods, such as roasted nuts and crispy salads, because I appreciate more complex flavours.

× My favorite food is Korean cuisine especially tteokbokki. I love you because it has numerous taste like soy sauce or or spicy and sweet so I like the texture which is light cake and I often eat with my friends.

✓ My favorite food is Korean cuisine, especially tteokbokki. I love it because it has many flavors, such as soy sauce, spicy, and sweet. I like its light, cake-like texture, and I often eat it with my friends.

The student used the wrong pronoun 'you' instead of 'it' to refer to the food (incorrect use of pronouns). There are also article and word-choice issues corrected here: 'numerous taste' -> 'many flavors' and 'like soy sauce or or spicy and sweet' -> 'such as soy sauce, spicy, and sweet.' Use 'its' for possession and add commas for clarity. Suggestion: use 'it' or 'its' to refer to a thing, use 'many' with countable items like 'flavors', and list items with commas.

× When I was young I definitely love sweet food such as snack like chocolate and sweet teas because I prefer went to sweet snacks.

✓ When I was young, I definitely loved sweet foods such as snacks like chocolate and sweet treats because I preferred sweet snacks.

The sentence refers to past time ('When I was young') but uses present tense verbs 'love' and 'prefer went'. These should be in the past tense ('loved', 'preferred'). Also 'snack like chocolate' -> 'snacks like chocolate' and 'sweet teas' is unclear; 'sweet treats' is appropriate. Suggestion: keep verbs consistent with the time reference and use plural forms for general categories ('snacks').

× Yes, I usually eat different food a year. For example some in summer we tend to eat ice food such as recording milk and wild in winter we tend to eat hot food.

✓ Yes, I usually eat different foods throughout the year. For example, in summer we tend to eat cold foods such as ice cream, and in winter we tend to eat hot foods.

'Different food a year' is incorrect quantifier and noun form; use 'different foods throughout the year.' 'Ice food' and 'recording milk' are incorrect word choices; likely meant 'cold foods' and 'ice cream.' 'Wild in winter' is incorrect; use 'and in winter.' Suggestion: use 'throughout the year' for seasons, use plural 'foods' for general items, and choose correct food vocabulary ('ice cream').

× Yes, when I was young I prefer to sweet food or snack. However, nowadays I changed my food type. For example, my taste suddenly changes like old taste. So I prefer to like oh crunch texture.

✓ When I was young, I preferred sweet foods or snacks. However, nowadays my food preferences have changed. For example, my tastes suddenly changed from old flavors, and now I prefer crunchy textures.

Multiple tense inconsistencies and verb forms: 'When I was young' requires past tense 'preferred' not 'prefer.' 'Nowadays I changed my food type' mixes past and present; use present perfect 'have changed' to link past to present. 'My taste suddenly changes like old taste' is unclear; corrected to 'changed from old flavors.' 'I prefer to like oh crunch texture' is incorrect phrasing; use 'I prefer crunchy textures.' Suggestion: keep tense consistent with time markers, use 'prefer' vs 'preferred' appropriately, and use clear noun forms ('textures').